FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 9

Wonderful story Abhi.. 👏
Like the way your wrote it... 👏

Somebody give some brains to JW.... either leave the girl or accept her with full heart like a Man.. 😡

Great part Abhi.....loved how you portrayed JW's POV....he loves Bani but what's the reason keeping him from confessing his love to her...and he is also world to Bnai.....but why this confusion, misunderstanding....JB are both duffers.....at least he is thinking of going home early and checking on her...lets see how it goes...update soon 😆

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!!!! hey.,
i am so sorrie.
that i was late commenting here.
but i was updated..
with ur updates
hehe

anyways.
i loved this update.
so.. they are one now.
omg.
jai.. u need to talk to ur wife.
ur girl
continue soon please

that was gr8.pls continue 👏 👏 👏

Hi, just caught up with the FF and i absolutely love it! 😃 Very interesting storyline! 😃 Really eager to see how this story unfolds. You're a marvelous writer! 👏 👏 👏 Please update soon! 😳 Very anxious to read the next part.

Originally posted by: divan

The duffer...thodi mar do...he loves her so why is he keeping it to himself.😡 thats Jai for us... 🤣

Now he at office thinking about her, worried about her and wants to go home and check up on her. I mean he doesn't even know she practically lives out on the balcony outside his room. Kya kaar diya tune Walia, ek hasti, mastibhari ladki ko...budhu.😕 sab teek ho jaayega... tension nahin lene ka 😆

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

y is Jai keeping himself closed???😕 Mystery 😳 U will eventually know it... 😉

poor Bani 😭

gr8 part di 👏 thanks Tropa

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: suwas

God looks like Jai cares for he too. Hope whatever it is which is holding back & making them miserable is resoved. Poor bani doesn't deserve this. She atleast needs answers.

she will get it... but it will take time... 😉

Originally posted by: niruba

So Jai loves her.....thanks for clearing this! I think they need to talk.....loved the update Abhilasha, please continue very soon coz I can't wait to read the next update....

will update later at night... i think so... but u be careful and vigilant... 😉

Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
koi is jai ko akkal do re pehle se hi bahut hai uske paas..
if he loves bani then why is he behaving like this he will tell her... but we need to wait... a little
gr88 part
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
liked it. Thanks
he keeps refering Bani...as his little girl....if he really cares about her then why oh why he is behaving like jerk with her....i mean seriously that man has no brain.
poor Bani 😭 😭 😭
dont scold Jai... u ppl have alread given a stamp that he is duffer and jerk... to clear some of that... i wrote this part soon.... 😆
plz cont. soon

Originally posted by: tam2

Hey Abhi....

Gr8 update.... 👏

Jai is the biggest duffer of all...he loves her so much...and she also loves him a lot consider him as her whole world...then why is he holding himself back......
he will tell her... but we need to wait 😉

Finally things have started to make sense...😃...Thanks for clearing out some of the thing...enjoyed reading it...
thanks... 😊

Do cont soo...and thanks for ur PM... 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

Great update! Was really looking forward to it. thanks Anam

I swear to God, these men are soooo slow! He loves her, he's her world even if he doesn't know it yet he's not doing something about it.
theirs are little complicated..

I really hope their "misunderstanding" will clear up and Bani will be back to the way she used to be. she will be...

Really looking forward to the next part. do update soon. You have a great story and am really enjoying it so far!

Anam

Originally posted by: bdev

Great update. Loved how you showed it from Jai's point of view. JW's trademark....being slow 😆. I also liked how you showed the change in Bani's personality, very well written.
thanks 😳

Please continue soon.

BD

Originally posted by: pptm469

Both Jai and Bani seem to have a problem with verbalizing their love for each other..
Man what is their problem? Great problem rooted in their past...

OK!! I am going to wait patiently for you to continue.. Good 👍🏼

But please Hurry up 😆 😆

Originally posted by: siumi

Thanks for the flashback, it cleared few things, that Jai loves Bani and didnt even confess to her 😡 😡
idiots in house 😡 😆 😆
g8t update👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😊 😊

thanks siumi

Originally posted by: nema123

Wonderful story Abhi.. 👏
Like the way your wrote it... 👏

Somebody give some brains to JW.... either leave the girl or accept her with full heart like a Man.. 😡
He will clear everything eventually

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Great part Abhi.....loved how you portrayed JW's POV....he loves Bani but what's the reason keeping him from confessing his love to her...and he is also world to Bnai.....but why this confusion, misunderstanding.... *sigh* big long story JB are both duffers.....thats true... duffers 😆 at least he is thinking of going home early and checking on her...lets see how it goes... what do u guess will happen??? update soon 😆

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Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

!!!! hey.,
i am so sorrie.
that i was late commenting here. its okay...
but i was updated..
with ur updates
hehe

anyways.
i loved this update.
so.. they are one now.
omg.
jai.. u need to talk to ur wife. he will... but will she???
ur girl
continue soon please

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey ..................

lovely part........................ thanks 😊

update soon

Originally posted by: banijai19_life

that was gr8.pls continue 👏 👏 👏

thanks

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Hi, just caught up with the FF and i absolutely love it! 😃 Very interesting storyline! 😃 Really eager to see how this story unfolds. You're a marvelous writer! 👏 👏 👏 Please update soon! 😳 Very anxious to read the next part.

thanks... 😛

Thanks ppl.... WOW... no comments about Jigs... 😆 😆

Hi yaar

wht to comment on jigs.. as alway no words for her. but i just feel tt jigs also like bani but she is just nt happy tt bani got married to jai.. any way yar can u pls make jai talk mean really talk with bani,i just hope everything work out fine..

have a gr8 weekend 😊

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! great part

loved it totally......................great written.................👏

bt why was he doin this now if he feels that he wasnt guily wn he made love to her...............he is such a selfish person...........i had ever see.............coz even if that nite Bani was in a happy mood tn instead of acceptin her he hurt her n shout for tony n didnt talk to her.............

hey plzzzzzzzz solve the things between them.............

bring JB closer n make her realise that he loves her..............

plzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

btw irts Nikita n nt Nihita😆😆

Ejzoo (Nikita)

Hey Abhilasha,please do forgive me for being able to comment earlier,just been really busy with college and thank you for the pm. 😊

just caught with all 4 parts,just simply amazing.I really have no words to describe how well you write.you have penned down both Jai and Bani's point of view so beautifully.I really like how with each update a new layer of the story comes out,very well written.looking forward to the next part. 👏


preet 😳

Man, you are as quick an updater as our K!! 👏 So Jigs doesn't hate Bani, is just confused. Don't blame her, Jai is totally confused too...sheesh, talk to the girl, will u?!