FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 11

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wow!!!!!!!!! great update..............

i liked it..............bt it was so short.........................

poor Bani goin through so much😭😭😭 i hope Jai soon finds that she is the one for him.............😃😃😃

plzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Hey Abhilasha,
I read part 4 and 5 👏👏👏.
Absolutely loved it.
Jai and Bani seem so confused about everything, they are even confusing me and I am just reading.😆
I hope they start to talk soon. Anything will do.

Continue soon!!

love,
Ranjana

Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
gr88 part

Originally posted by: siumi

Hi abhi,
Really feel bad for Bani, and there is no communication btw her and jai or the family, things are really in bad shape she really misses Krishna, doesnt she? 😭 yes... a lot...
I hope Jai comes soon to talk to Bani 😕 he will...
it was a small update, do update longer parts, please.... i am so lazy to type... i dont believe i have the capacity to type this much... dont worry... the flashback will come tomorrow... let me c whether i finish the whole flashback in one go...
cont soon 😃

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

Great update. I feel really bad for Bani. She feels so lonely in a house full of people who only care about themselves. I really hope there would be some kind of communication between her and Jai because it's killing both of them. They both have so much love for each other, yet there is no communication at all!

Update soon and get rid of this misunderstanding and bring JB together! it cannot be put as misunderstanding as a whole... but u can say... helplessness... to some extent...

Awesome update

Anam

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Oh my, so many negative thoughts are spinning in her head. I feel so bad for Bani, poor girl is so lonely and upset. So Jai proposed to her after 7 years of not seeing her?-- I really want to know the reason behind this. 😕 I'm sure Krishna does hold a huge part in that. She seemd like a wonderful kind person.I love reading the flashbacks. 😃 Please continue soon! This FF is awesome! 😳
Thanks Dil... u will be able to guess more in the flashback... not to forget.. bani's family is not yet introduced... haila... in 5 parts only 1 1/2 has past 😲 😆
Love,
Dil

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

oh God
tooo many things to think 😕
my head would blast if i think like that better dont think... u will get confused more... just read... and forget... 😉
gr88 part 👏
plz cont soon

Originally posted by: pptm469

Nice update!! But too many mysteries... hope you tell us about them soon.. the mystery will start unravelling from next part... 😉
Waiting eagerly for the next update
Regards.
Sangeeta

Originally posted by: bdev

Very nice update. I really love the flashbacks, Bani had a wonderful relationship with Krishna. yep... Krishna is the surprise package... she is in fact a wonderful lady... I feel bad for her, she seems so alone and lost. Hope things get better for jb soon.

Please continue soon.

BD

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hi Abhilasha,

I read both parts 4 and 5. Awesome update. Really liked them. Poor Bani, suffering in silence - and I am not sure I like Jai too much, he can't just make love to her and ignore her - it does seem he cares for her and he doesn't have qualms about physical relationship with her, so may be some communication the morning after would have been nice. well.. it wud have been... but... did i make any mistake

Also Bani should open up and spill her guts about her insecurities. well... we know how bani is 😆

Why did they even marry each other? 😕 😕 Was it because some circumstance forced them? 😕 Actually... I am working on that 😃

ANyways, the story is intriguing...

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Abhi wonderful part again.....felt so bad for Bani....she shared a very good relationship with Krishan...she is in dilemma right now about Jai's behaviour towards her and all the marriage things....would love to read more flashbacks and JB's POV....Jai's flashback will come later after Bani's so atleast 10 parts.. i guess... depends on my typing speed and mood a lot... 😆 😆hope you update soon 👏

Originally posted by: suwas

I felt so bad for bani. She doesn't even know what she did to deserve such loneliness. No one cares for her.Would love to know why JAi is treating her this way.

Originally posted by: ejazanita

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wow!!!!!!!!! great update..............

i liked it..............bt it was so short......................... i was so sleepy... so i thot... something is better than nothing... 😃

poor Bani goin through so much😭😭😭 i hope Jai soon finds that she is the one for him.............😃😃😃 he knew it... but he needs to realise it...

plzzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)😳

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Hey Abhilasha,

I read part 4 and 5 👏👏👏.
Absolutely loved it.
Jai and Bani seem so confused about everything, they are even confusing me and I am just reading.😆 you keep ur head away from confusion... read and get away... perfect solution 😉
I hope they start to talk soon. Anything will do. btw... thanx for the update 😃

Continue soon!!

love,
Ranjana

Originally posted by: niruba

great part abhilasha, the first thing I did when I reached my office is read your update.....a refreshing start before all the horrible files come to my table.....haila... that was a great compliment... In reality, I think Bani will be psycologically affected if she continues to be like this.....loved the update....and please continue...

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Read parts 4 and 5 together and must say that it's very beautifully written. But somewhere the link of communication between Jai and Bani has broken now and they are unable to return to each other, as in the past. 😕 they will... but it will take a lot of efforts... and many other things... 😉

Poor souls. thats true 😆

Please update soon.

Originally posted by: pooks

Abhi, just caught up with parts 4 & 5. Jigs maybe a cow but her words rang true when she said that earlier, it used to feel that Bani was there's completely even though she was formally not theirs and now, even though she is the bahu of the house, its as if she's not present there at all 😭 and all this is due to the mess made by Jai 😡 the man is seriously messed in the head, denying his love for Bani and the poor girl on the other hand feels she has ruined his life 😕
may be jai made the mess... but y bani agreed to marry him... 😉 point to be thot

Originally posted by: divya_123

just read both parts together. awesome parts 👏 👏 👏

continue soon

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey.................

lolovely part.................

Originally posted by: banijai19_life

wow carry on your good job 👏

Originally posted by: tam2

oh... poor Bani...she is in so much doubts... ...or rather confused about Jai's feeling for her... yes she is confused i guess... I wonder what went wrong? 🤔.... i am trying to give a proper reason...

gr8 update.... 😃....

do cont soon... 👏

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Hey Abby,

Read both parts, excellent work 👏 . thanks Janitha....

jigs is just sooooo 🤢 . u will love her later 😉

Bring JB 2gether soon 😳 😳 😳

And....



will be back tomorrow... 🤗