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jeenal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#801

wow gr8 part
wat a description yaar
u really are a gr8 writer
plz cont soon

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jaibani_fan

@jaibani_fan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#802

Jai exploring bani. Shouldn't he have tried this earlier than ignoring him. Wish he is not too late.

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tam2

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Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#803

Looks like Jai is going through memory lane... 😳 ... looking forward to next part... hope Jai finds Bani soon... do cont soon... 😃 ...

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#804

Loving how Jai is exploring Bani through those drawings of her.....but I think he has to explore more and use his brain as well....he is still in dilemma.....hope he is going to read Bani's diary and get to know more about her feelings and thoughts for him and his family....again it's a very very very SHORT part sweetie ..but really a wonderful read 👏 👏 👏

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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#805

hey abi ........ 👏 hats off to u ........but bani kab milegi yaar

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

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Posted: 17 years ago

#806

It was
beautiful, lovely, divine, wonderful, breathtaking, delightful,superb and last but not the least
just perfect. 😛 😛

P.S Most importantly short and getting shorter day by day

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kpatel123

@kpatel123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#807

that was soooo brilliant!! u have a lovely imagination. i could literally picture the drawings in that book! waiting for a longer part next time! 😳

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#808

great part
i really liked the way you described banis pictures
👏

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#809

wonderful parts pls cont soon........

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Nirmala Shanmugam

@Nimmie1`2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#810

Hi Abhi,

Again what wonderful narration of story... Bani's painting speaks thousand words and reflects her feelings. You written it so well, great job!

Jai needs to explore within before even looking for Bani, hope not too long though!

Do update soon, my dear.

Happy Sunday ;)

Nimmie

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