FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07

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Miss_Diey

@Miss_Diey

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Posted: 17 years ago

#781

First the diary 😉 😉 😉
I want more please update soon.
It's so interesting, this suspence and waiting is killing me 😆
Where is Bani, i'm sure AD is taking care of her but
i can't wait the day when she will learn her pregnancy 😉

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Nirmala Shanmugam

@Nimmie1`2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#782

Hi Abhi,

Wonderful update; Jai is going to read B's dairy is he? He finally getting to terms of what he should have done long time ago! Do bring back Bani soon, missing her already ;(

Again superb writing and do update soon.

Have a great weekend!

Nimmie

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#783

hey Abhi,

in this very small update,you etched out so many deep emotions.brought tears in my eyes at work. 😆 😆 loved how you etched out Jai's reaction to all her drawings was just beautiful,now with diary he is going maybe understand what he really was for her.will be eagerly waiting. 👏

preet 😳

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pooks

@pooks

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#784

They say that a person never really values something till he loses it and the same case is with Jai. 😭 He never really valued Bani's presence in his life 😡 but now that she has gone, he is realizing what mistakes he did to lose her. Her paintings, though beautiful truely depict her loneliness cause she was not even present in the majority of the paintings herself. 😭

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#785

Sad Update 😭 😭
hope jai reads her diary and he will finally know how bani felt about him 😉
continue soon

nadia 😛

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kooliio

@kooliio

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#786

great part............
hope jai will finally know that even bani loves him 😛 ..................when r we gonna see bani's entry yaar 😃 ..............plz ab unka milan karva do nah 😉 ...........cant wait for the next part
plzzz cont.soon

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JAN_SA

@JAN_SA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#787

Hey Abhi,

Read last few parts, sorry for not posting, busy with exams. Great parts, 👏 so Jai finally realises how alone bani felt, good, now comes the part where he has to make up 😳 😃 , looking forwrd to the next part, pm if possible when you update, thanks

Lotsa luv

Jani

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#788

Again an emotional and heart-breaking part Abhi..My eyes were moist when I was reading the painting part. her loneliness was so evident in those paintings. Jai has a lot of work to do once he finds her.
He is starting to realise the amount of pain n hurt he has given her by ignoring her.
Lookign forward to the next part dear...I am sure I will have more tears now as he is going to read her diary 😭 😭
Rama