FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Hey Twinkle...Lovely part....Loving the way Jai calls Bani boothni... 😆 😆 😆 ... Liked Jai and Pia's bro sis conversation...very nice... 😳 😆 ... do cont soon... 👏 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Thank you davia, rongna,sangita and tam for ur comments. Okay this part is for davia as she wanted some JB fights without meera. I hope u like it davs but jai already knows that bani is bani dixit

Part- 11

Jai, Pushkar and Rohit were talking and laughing in the cafe. Jai had told them about all the incidents of last night

Jai: But I still do't know who was in my room and y were they screming like that

Pushkar: Well I don't care but u r seriously something jai.I never thougth that Bani believe din ghosts

jai: Arre, she is a bhootni, y should she not believe in ghosts?

A female voice: Excuse me? Who did u call a "bhootni"?
Jai turned around and saw just inches away from himself Bhootni herself.

Bani: Well, I am waiting for an answer

Jai(loudly for everyone in the cafe to hear): Run for ur lives or else the bhootni will eat u.
And he grabbed his buddies and scramed leaving a fuming bani behind. Man she was gonna kill that jai.

Jai and his comrades ran and stood in the basketball court in the campus panting and laughing

Rohit: Jai, I never knew u were such a coward

Jai: I did not want bhootni to destroy my record by complaining that I created a scene in public. They joked around and were flirting with any girls that came in sight. And who wouldn't like it? AFter all, these were the 3 hottest hunks in school, but of course jai is number 1. U can see our hero enjoying his time when there is atp on his shoulder.He turns around and groans

Bani: So we meet again Mr. name caller

Jai: Hey bhootni, tell me which perfume u use? Casper vera or something?
(by now everyone in the surrounding area were watching their convo)

Bani: Only the very best perfume u can find

Jai: I am sorry, but I can't name any company that will even want to kill themselves by makng this bhootni smellig perfumes

Bani(irritatedly): Of course, Mr. Jai whoever-u-are can only call people names

Jai: aww, r u gonna complain?Look miss I don't know what u want me to do,so pls just state ur purpose, that is if bhootni's like u do have a purpose

Bani: Well it is very simple. Say sorry to me for calling me bhootni

jai: Is that a crime?

Bani: No. But letting u walk around here is a crime. Listen just say sorry and I will spare u

Jai(sarcastically): OOOO!!! dracula, pls don't eat me. I don't want to have Casper vera as my burial ground

Bani(fuming): U r gonna be buried right now if u don't say sorry

Jai(mischeviously): U really want me to say sorry and ask for forgiveness Bani? U really want it?

Bani:: Tell me if u don't understad the language I speak

Jai(slowly): Well, u see, when I ask for forgiveness, I make it really special

Bani: Listen Mister, just say sorry for what u have done to me

Jai: I haven't done anything yet
and he slowly walke towards her and it was as if the whloe scene had frozen. Nobody dared to move as jai took those slow steps towards Bani. He stopped and now he toward over her. He stooped down and captured those rosy lips and held on. He clung onto them and then as in a flash he stood up gave her his killing smile and gave her a flying kiss leaving a confounded bani behind

Okay people, tell me how u want the next part to be and I will try to improve my writing. Pls leave ur somments

Edited by Twinkle_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

hey make that scene watched by mera who acidently ocmes there.. socha kais hoga?😆

hey this waliais too mcuh anughty let him be😆

haia ye kya usne😳 well idd a good job .. ab i want this to be publish in the paper as some reporter must have witnessed it and created a lvoe story of jb😆chavio too muje hi reporter banakar phot click va dena aue iw ill publsih in the paper.😆

what u say?

thnk for delicatign this part i really enjoyed bhoot bhootni

ab hpgi shadini😆

pls contineu soooon....

loved it... is is rockking

davia

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Jai kissed Bani... 😲 ... 😆 ... she won't spare him... will she 😉 ... lovely part twinkle... 👏 ... do cont soon...Thanks for ur PM... 😃 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
hey i am new to ur ff got to say i loved it but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don't let it like Romeo and Juliet........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66

Thanks davia, tam and purpletoxic for ur comments. Davia, don't come with jootas or belaans for me after reading this part and tam u r right that bani won't spare jai. Well, enjoy

Part-12

bani was dumbfounded. She didn't know how to reat. It was the first time she was kissed bye someone and she hadn't planned for it it to be by someone whom she hated( Really?) but there was something about that kiss that had left a tingling sensation in Bani's body. Then she heard whispers and snapped out of her daze. She looked aroound at all the people looking at her and became livid.

Bani(furiously): If anyone ever talks about that incident ever again, U R DEAD!!!!!!!!!! Do u uunderstand me?? I am Bani Dixit and I know exactly how to handle people who don't listen to me. If I hear any gossip all of u r gonna wish u were never born.

She turned on her heel and marched off but then she turned around and saw meera running off. Bani didn't bother about her. She went off on a "Pia Hunt".If anyone knew any information about anyone in this college, it had to be pia. Pia didn't gossip but people told her everything cause she was patient enough to hear people's nonsense.

Bani saw Pia sitting underneath a tree reading.
She walked towards her quickly.

Bani: Pia, do u know jai?
Pia immediately looked up

Pia: Which one?

Bani: How many Jai's r there in this college?

Pia: A lot. What's his surname?

Bani(irritatedly): That's the problem. I don't know if he is Jai Kapoor or Jai Roshan or Jai Cruise or Jai Bond

Pia knew perfectly well that Bani was talking about her sweet brother. After all that Jai had told her, she didn't need to play a guessing game to know which Jai she was talking about

Bani: Pia, that's the one!!Over there and she pointed out to where Jai was goofing around with his friends

Pia smiled

bani: Well, now that u have seen him, tell me all about him. No, Just tell me if he has a girlfriend

Pia: R u Jealous?

Bani: Pia, I don't have bad taste
Pia thought: "If u don't think that my hunk of a brother is handsome, than u don't have taste at all", but she said: Well I am not sure. Its a long story

Bani: I am all ears

Pia: Well now he currently goes out with Roshni Chopra

Bani: U mean that make-up witch?

Pia: Yeah. Anything else?

Bani: Yes. What's his surname?

Pia: Jai Johar( from Karan Johar)

Bani: Seriously??

Pia: Do I look goofy?

Bani: No. Thanks pia. Bye, I have some work to do

Bani walked inside the buliding humming tgo herself. She stood outside the editorial office and looke in the windoe to check her hair when she ehard that conversation

Guy: Wow davia this photo is amazing

Davia: Yeah, Rohit, I was just plain lucky. I was just walking around with my camera when I saw that sight

Rohit: If Bani sees this she will kill u

Bani(entering): I will do that right now.

Davia(stuttering): Sorry?

Bani: Show me what picture r u talking about

Rohit: We weren't talking about anything

Bani: I am not deaf and I am not dumb. Davs, if u don't show me that picture right now u r gonaa be sorry

Husky voice: Really?

Bani turned around to see Jai walking towards her

Jai: I think its high time u stopped threatning people

Bani: Really Mr. Johar?

jai was confused and Bani thought: Ha! he thought I would never know who he is

Jai: Mr. Johar?

Bani: Don't u play that confused game with me Jai Johar, cause Pia Walia told me all about u

Now Jai understood everything and he turned around to stiffle his laugther

Bani(turing to davia): Show me that picture

Davia meekly gave the picture to bani and bani was shocked. It was a picture of her and Jai kissing.

Bani(furiously): Did u publicize this picture???

Davs: Yes

Bani shook Davia by the shoulders and started screaming at her. But Jai came to the rescue

He pulled Bani away and gave davs a one-armed hug which left her swooning.

Jai: Listen here bhootni, stop terrorizing people and that is no way to talk to humans

Bani: So bhootji r u going to be happy if this is published in the school magazine

Jai: I would care more for how Davs is doing that I would if that picture was published in Mumbai Times.

Davia looked at Jai with eyes shining woth gratefullness

Bani: U r the photographer aren't u davia

Davs: Yes. And the editor just tells me to take as many interesting photos as I can

Bani: Well, I am sorry for screaming at u, but tell me who is the da*n editor

Davia: Jai Walia

Edited by Twinkle_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
😆 😆 😆

Lovely part Twinkle... ur a awesome writer... 👏 ...


Bani is so confused... 😆 ... with so many Jaissss with different surnames...😆 ... 🤣 🤣 🤣 ...

This Davia is too much... 😆 ... couldn't she found a better time to click the picture... 😆 ... nice!!! 😳 ... do cont soon dear... 🤗 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i lved that part it is mindblowign.. me included thnsk a lottt

i am rady to help jb 😉 ingettting amrreid
pls continue soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
hey..
omg.. i used to read this ff..
i just remembered that..
hehe
jai johar..
and editor jai walia..
nice nice..
hehe

bani attitude problem darlin..
hehe

continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70

Hi everyone and thanks for ur comments, tam, rongna, davia, s_geetu, nir_jannu, and purpletoxic. Tell me if it is boring. Well, here's the next part.

Part-13

Bani: Well, I am sorry for screaming at u, but tell me who is the da*n editor

Davia: Jai Walia

Bani whipped around and looked at Jai who was bent double by laughing so much. Bani walked over to him and caught him by the collar and dragged him to the wall and made him satnd still

Bani: Listen here Jai Johar, I don't care how u do, it, but go and get ur cousin from Neptune right here

Jai: Wich cousin? Jai Bond or Jai Roshan?

Bani: JAI WALIA u dummy!

Jai: Nope. Never heard of him. Dosn't exist

Bani: Well ur names r the same

Jai(struggling to keep a straight face): I am better than Jai Walia, after all I am Jai Johar and I am related to Karan Johar

Bani(fuming): I think Jai Walia is way better than u mister. After all he's the hottest hunk in college

Jai: Do u even know him bhootni?

Bani: No, but I can tell. My heart tells me so

Jai just roared with laughter while Rohit and Davia were smirking. Bani turned to Davia

Bani(stuttering): davia...umm...isn't jai walia the BEST?

Davia(mischeviously): Yes Bani

Bani: I knew it

Davia: People adore him so much that u can see him everywhere (stressing on the word)

Bani was highly confused

Bani: Everywhere?

Davia: Yep. Everywhere

Bani: Well, all I know is that Jai Bhoot Johar is nothing compared to The Jai Walia

Jai was struggling to catch his breath cause he was laughing so much. Just then Pia entered. Bani turned to her

Bani(sweetly): Pia, ur brother is the best right?

Pia(confused): Did u meet him Bani?

Bani: No but I can tell.

Jai: Really? U know Pia, Bani says that he is better than me. Tell me bhootni, how can u tell he's better when u don't know him? U prefer him to me

Bani(nose in the air): Yes. My dil tells me so. There is none like Jai Walia. He causes me to faint

By now, the whole room was roaring with laughter, making Bani more confused than ever.

Bani: Anyways pia, ur brother is the editor of the school magazine rigth?

Pia(coyly): yes bani.

Davia: Yes Bani everyone knows him and he is always in the editorial office

Bani: Huh?? Then why isn't he here?

jai: Listen bhootni, just cause u don't have eyes doesn't mean we don't

Bani: Well, Bhoot, listen here. I am perfectly happy with my eyes and only people whose eyes have been affected by a supernova explosion like u can see things that aren't here. So I suggest u see an eye doctor before the supernova virus comes to us. Infact ur name should be virus Johar

Jai: Was that a compliment?I mean supernova eyes. WOW!

Bani: U r such a buddhu. Jai Walia is so cool that he never needs to answer a question. So pia tumhara bhai kaha hai?

Pia: That's what I have been trying to tell u all the time Bani. My brother is right here

Bani: Huh?

Jai: U sound so cute when u say "huh?"

Bani ignored him

Bani: Pia where is Jai Walia

Pia: Bani mujhse maaf kardo

Bani: kyun? kya hua pia?( forgive my hindi)

Pia: Well, u see, when I told u that my The Jai here is Jai Johar, well actually, he is Jai Walia, my brother

Bani was shocked, confused and she was feeeling humiliated. Nobody messed with Bani like this and got away wit it

Well, pls comment😳😳

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