FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 9

Originally posted by: davia389

wow i loved this part it was funny cobra 😆thanks davia

hmm so were jumping liek 3 yes i am doign ti now after reading the way bani did with jai and cobra😆 wowo kya super scene thi and i clicked eprfect pic😆Congratulations

have to say it was soo funny

ab jai ka accident kahin uska plan to nahi Keep on guessing

pls contine soon I will

davia

Originally posted by: purpletoxic

oh i think this is another trick U think Jai is so mean?

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

Hey twinkle..
that was a really wrong place to end u know that.. right.. yep, and that's y I do it
not cool at all.. sorry

continue soon please okay I will

jai had an accident..
awww my baby.. at least someone doesn't suspect Jai

davys.. u betta. not say anything
and i mean it..Okay I will try to keep davs keep quiet

Originally posted by: rongna

jai got into accident!!! yep
gre88 part thanks rongna
plz cont soon I will

Originally posted by: tam2

😆 😆 😆 ...

🤣 ... glad u found it funny tam

lovely part Twinkle.... 🤗 ... thanks

Man love this Bani... 😆 ... she took her revenge... I love people who do

Roshni... 🤢 🤢 🤢 ...

I think Jai is upto something... 😉 ... it's one of his trick... 😆 ... well do cont soon...🤗🤗🤗... ok, thanks for ur comments tam

Originally posted by: s_geetu

hey
great part. thanks
really liked it.
please continue soon. okay thanks for ur comments

Okay everyone I am not very good in writing hindi so I don't even try. I hope this doesn't bother u

Part-15

Pia(sobbing): Take me to jai bhaiya....Rohit says he got into a se...serious accident

Bani: Okay.. but pia calm down.Come on davia lets go

All three of them left davia's house supporting a sobbing Pia. Bani's conscience was telling her that she was responsible for everything but she ignored it

Davia: Bani did u bring ur car?

Bani: What?NO!

Davia(panicking):What are we supposed to do than?I don't have a car and my parents r in Goa for some business deal

Pia: I DON'T CARE!!!!!!!!!!get a taxi will u

Bani: Okay okay

Bani madly looked around the street for a taxi but the road was deserted. Suddenly bani saw headlights in the street. She waved her hands frantically to signal the taxi. It slowed down

The driver rolled down the window

Bani: Take us to..to...to...

Driver: Arre memshaab, there is no road in Bhaarat called toototoo

Bani turned to pia

Bani: Which hospital is he in?

Pia: Mumbai Hospital(sorry don't know any hospital in mumbai)

Bani: yes take us there

Driver: hop in

The 3 girls tumbled into the car one after another

The taxi driver took them from one street to another. He took turns in the most unexpected places

Pia started to get frightened and Davia started getting suspicious

Davia: ae driver do u have a driver's license

Driver: Yes

and he took them through a bumpy road into a jungle type area

Bani: ae buddhu, this is not the way to the hospital

Driver: arre memshaab, u don't want to go through Mumbai traffic do u?

Bani: I also don't want to go through Mumbai jungles

Driver: Memshaab knows how to joke. Arre yaar ye to sirf ek thoda sa shortcut thee he

Bani: I am not ur yaar

Driver: Memsaab, what's ur favorite food

Bani: Driver's head if u don't shut up

Driver(ignoring bani): I like aanda for breakfast

Bani: Which is why u have nothhing but aanda in ur head

Driver: Memsaab, aanda is very useful. Aanda has protein and calcium. Also u can just show ur mom an aanda when she asks how much u got in ur maths test

Davia and Bani: SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!

The taxi suddenly started lurching and jumping and giving out belching sounds

The driver stopped the car.

Driver: Arre dono bare memsaab, can u pls get out and push the car? Chote memsaab can stay here. My car just broke down

Davia: Why can't u do it? U r the driver

Driver: Which is exactly why I need to drive and get the motor running for my 3 lovely memsaabs

Bani: I will get the motor running for u and u push the car

Driver: Arre bare memsaab number 1, I don't let anyone driver my precious Sheenalia

Bani: U name ur car? U r stupid?

Pia: CAN U JUST DO WHAT HE SAYS ADN STOP ARGUING? For God's sake, Jai bhaiya had an accident

Driver: Arre why didn't u say so? Arre dono memsaab yarr, get out na

Davia and Bani scrambled out of the car

They started pushing the car

Davia: Bani, y does he say "arre" and "yaar" so much?

Bani: I seriously don't care. Let's just get this Sheenalia moving

Suddenly they heard the motor running and they slapped each other hi-fives

Then they saw Jai stick his head out the window

Jai: Thanks for pushing Sheenalia and here's and an aanda for both of u mere yaars

and he threw an egg at bani and Davia

Jai: See ya later alligators

And naughty Jai drove off laughing with a screaming pia leaving a drumbstuck Davia and Bani behind

Okay Davs, nir asked me to keep uu quiet but don't worry u will get ur revenge soon

jai 😡 i am not gogint o leave him this nir told u..😡 i am angry with both.. hum lggon ko ebech jungle mein chto diya ot fair..

ia m angry ..

pls cotinue soon

dav

Hey Twinkle!!! ... I'm laughing so much today... That too in the morning... 😆 ... first read about zee poll being hijacked ... and now ur update... it's damn good... 😆 😆 😆 ... love the way Jai took his revenge... 😆 ... poor Bani....and not to mention Davia.... 😆 ... Davia only does her bak bak.... 😆 ... couldn't she sense Jai was behind all this... haha... Jai made fool out of both of them.... 😆 😆 😆 ... do cont soon.... 😆 👏 ...

thanks for all ur comments guys.I don't have much time to update so I hope like this part

Part-16

Bani and davia were left standing there shocked out of their wits. When they finally came back to their senses, they screamed in outrage.

Bani: ARGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!I can't believe I didn't see that snake taking his revenge

Davia: Snake??Call him viper

Bani(panicking): Davia let's get out of here, before I see a real viper

U can hear the winds howling and wierd sounds. Suddenly they hear a twig snap which startles both of them

Davia: Bani u lead the way

Bani: Me? No u lead the way. Hey, wait I know I might sound cuckoo, but this kind of feels famailiar

Davia: What? Bani we r not forest fairies

They start walking left, right and center but then stopped and just stood like statues and felt more lost as the time went by

When it is near dawn, the 2 girls r close to tears. Then something catches Bani's eyes

Bani(in disbelief): Davs, look!!That's my car and my house swing

Davs: WHAT????

Then u see Dixit Mansion illuminated by the light of dawn

Bani: I can't believe it

Davia sees a paper on the ground and picks it up. Her gace instantly contorts up in rage

Bani(eyeing davia's face): What's that

Davia: See for rself what Viper left us

Bani takes the paper from Davia and starts reading it

Hey Jaans,

Know who I am? Of course u do! After all it's so hard not to know Jai Johar Walia. Now ladies, if u reading this hate letter at night, u r bats, but if r reading it in the lights of dawn, u r plain stupid. Honestly, bhootni, can't u even recognize ur own garden. I have only been there once, yet I knew how to drive u around through Mumbai and drop u off at ur unrecognizeable house. U need to admit that I am a gentleman. After all, I wasn't crazy enpugh to leave u in the middle of a forest. If u happened to get lost, in ur own garden, then I am an innocent hunk. Well, I have wasted enough of my precious ink in writing this letter. Ta-ta my loves

Jai

Davia: How Dare he????I am going to KILL HIM!!!!!!!!When I lay my hands on him, I am going to rip him into pices and....and

Bani(calmly): Davs, calm down. What makes u think we r going to let that viper do anything he wants? Just chill. Why don't u sleep over at my house? After all its Saturday

Davia: Well, we can have our revenge later can't we?

Bani: Yes

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Walia Mansion(Pia's room)

Pia: Bhaiya!!!!!!!How.. cou..could u?U almost gave me a heart attack

Jai: Almost. But that bhootni? She gave me a broken heart. She messes up my date with Roshni and davia helped her with the picture

Pia: Even I helped!

Jai: Ha, lekin, tum to mere chotti, pyare behen ho

Pia: How could u leave them in the forest

Jai(sarcastically): I never knew the garden in Dixit Mansion was a forest?

Pia: Huh?

Jai then explained to Pia how after he went out of the resturant, he had called Rohit and asked him to tell the girls that he(jai) had an accident and then how Jai had driven them recklessly around the neighborhood all along and then dropped off davia and bani in the garden

Pia: But it looked as if we were in a real forest

Jai: That's exactly why I chose that prank, now more talking and go to sleep

Pia: But

But Jai had gone out of the room

Okay guys do u think Jai's ego is too big? Do u want more pranks or arguments? Sorry there r no JB moments here, but I am too tired

ye jw😡how dare he left in the garden of wm....

how mean... aur hum ko stata hain he will eb paid of it...

ab dekna i will publish more phots and amek him marry bani instead of roshni😆and give him the ife long trouble

pls continue soon

dav

Hey Twinkle.... lovely part....Bani doesn't recognize her own garden.... 😆 😆 😆 ... I love this Jai.... 😆 ... he's too good.... 😆 😆 😆 .... now let's see how Bani takes her revenge.... 😉 😳 😆 ... do cont soon... 👏 ...

great part.
funny too.
please continue soon.

donon... 😉
udpate akro wiaithng

davia