FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18

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Hi guys, this is my 2nd FF.I ended my 1st one, which wasn't going too well.But I promise u that this onre will be much better.

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Jai Walia:The only son of Uday Walia and Krishna Walia.Handsome, hot, sexy, hunk and the dream man of many girls in mUmbai.He is a spoilt brat and changes GFS every week.He is 24 yrs old and is doing his Masters.

Bani Dixit:The only child of Karan and Kiran Dixit.beautiful, smart, hot, and very cunning.24yrs old and goes to the same university as Jai.

Pia Walia:The only daughter of Krishna and Uday Walia.She is 22 yrs old and very good a heart.she is well cultured and beautiful.She is the apple of everyone's eye and loves her bhai a lot.

Tarun Dixit:Bani's cousin and the nephew of Karan Walia.EVILLLLL and is full of hatred toward the walias

Roshni Chopra:Jai Walia's current love and he is after her, but Roshni just ignores him. Jai is desperate for her, but Roshni hates him.


FF SUMARY
The Walias and The Dixits r the 2 leading business families in Mumbai.They r full of hatred towards eachother about an old family disageement that had gone on through generations.If even the servants of the Dixits and the Walias met each other, they would make sure that they didn't leave without aa fight.They were sworn enemies.Yep, I am basing the story on Shakespeare's play, Romeo and Juliet. 😆.Whenever the Walias had a party where all the business tycoons were invited, they made sure that the Dixits were not invited and vice versa.
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*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loving it

plz dont kill them in the end!!! 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Guli*

loving it

plz dont kill them in the end!!! 😕


Don't worry, I won't.Anyway thanks for the idea.maybe I will
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Posted: 17 years ago
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idea? what idea?

killing? no!!! i didnt say anything!! shh!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehehe.....u made both the haddis siblings so that they cant become haddi
will be waiting for update
i agree with Guli.
no killing shilling
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Posted: 17 years ago
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.. ya i totally.. agree with guli.. and tropa..
no killing.. at all.
and waht idea.. r u talking about..
guli.. didnt give u.. no idea.. did u guli..
hehe.
.anyways.. continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Guli*

idea? what idea?

killing? no!!! i didnt say anything!! shh!!!


😆
U got it into my brain but u will still see a lot of funny and romantic scenes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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arre!! 😭 maine kuch nahin kahan!! sachi!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Guli*

arre!! 😭 maine kuch nahin kahan!! sachi!!!!!!


..dont worry.. guli..
me and tropa.. there for u..
okk..
stop crying now.. jaan
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Part-1

Bani's alarm woke her up and she grumbled and went to sleep again.She hated waking up.There was a knock on her door. and she mumbled:Come in.

A servant came in with a breakfast tray.She was maria

Maria:Mam, please wake up.u will be late for school

Bani:I don't go to school

Maria:HUMPH!!University then.Please ake up. or else i will call aunty

Bani springing ip from bed:NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!I don't need a morning lecture.I eed morning kisses

Just then Kiran entered.Kiran:Beta, will get morning spanks now instead of KIsses if u don't wake up

Bani:Y is everyone against me????????

Kiran:Bani,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Bani(pouting):Ma, I don't want to get up

Kiran:BANNIIIIIIIIII

Knowing that tone, Bani shot up from bed and darted towards her batroom, leaving Maria and Kiran laughing

Walia Mansion

Krishna:Pia, go and wake up ur bhaiya

Pia(giggling):Ma, Yesterday, he was snoring so much I could hear him from my room. I was nearly getting deaf

Uday:Beta, r u complaing that my house material is so bad that u can hear Jai snoring from ur room which is so far away

Pia, putting an arm around her father:No baba, its just that bhaiya snores like a hippo

Just then pia felt something tugging her hair and she screamed:OWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

Jai:I snore like a hippo, right MISS.Rat??

Pia:Ma,,, ell him to leave me

Krishna:Stop bullying my angel

Jai made a face:More like devil.U r always standing up for her

Uday:Someone is JEALOUSSS!!

Jai:I am not jealous.Who wants to be jealous of a vulture???

Pia:ARGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!and she flung at jai and they started fighting like cats and dogs

Please comment and I hope its long enough BYE

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