FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

tht was funny bhoot bhooot

doodh gira diya..

jai to such mcuh bhoot hi hain

psl cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
you should make it longer
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
*Savings*

Hey Twinkle... thanks for ur PM... will comment once I finish reading all the parts... 🤗 ...

*edited*
Lovely ff Twinkle....love the Name of it most of all....it's going gr8....wonder when will become alright between these two...😆.... do cont....
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Part-9

in dixit mansion everyone had retired to their rooms

bani was still shaken up about that "bhoot" incident

she was just sitting in bed
when her pesky cousin meera comes into her room
to destroy her peace

Meera:can I come in?and without waiting for an answer she just barges in and sits on bani's bed

meera:Bani, y r u all so white
Bani:because of the bhoot
meera: u know ur house might be haunted

Bani: WHAT????
meera: calm down.I have seen it in movies
bani sighed. Meera was a pest and a movie addict

meera: I think it might have been the ghost of one of our ancestors

bani: u know what meera?I think it was a prank

meera ignored her
meea: Maybe it was the ghost of the secret admirers of the female dixits

bani: what the hec* r u talking about?

meera:HUFF!!!!!!!!1all the dixit women were beautiful. That's why I am so good looking

Bani mentally puked

Bani: So what am I? a next-door neighbour?????and can u explain why the so-called admirers of MY dadima's daadi r doing here? and y r they only jumping at ME???

meera(in her own world): u know this is exactly like Scooby-doo. bani u can be scooby and I will be Dafne

Bani(trying to keep he rvoice steady):meera get ur butt out of my room

meera gave her a pathetic face obviously trying to make puppy eyes

meera: Bani that is no way to talk to ur cousin

Bani: Really? So is making ur ELDER cousin a dog for a stupid unnecessary mystery called respect

meera: It will be fun! Lets look into walia mansion first

bani nearly choked: Why on earth would we go to look for ghosts in walia mansion?

meera: CAUSEEEEEEEEE.....the walias are hotties, and I bet at least one of the ghosts r a walia. and my romeo is in walia mansion

bani was completely confused.

meera: Jai Walia. He is the hottest hunk ever. He's mine MINE MINE!!

bani: r u 2 going out?

meera(evilly): no. but we will soon. I know he can't resist me

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
😆
so meera 's dirty and evil eyes on jai i ptiy mr romeo jw..

kher agar theri juliet abni hain tum escape hoa gar emera ho to pasdse chuke ho 😆 in the ropes///

pls continue soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Twinkle...lovely update....this Meera is a trouble maker... I'm sure Romeo will chase his Juliet only... so buzz off Meera.... Do cont soon... 👏 ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

Thanks for ur comments davia389 and tam2. I am gla du still find it interesting. Well, here is the next part and pls forgive all my spelling mistakes

Part-10

in walia masion, pia walia was trying very hard to calm down her hysteircal brother

pia: arre bhaiya it looks as if u r taken over by the laughing bhoot or something

at this jai just laughed even more

pia(confused):bhaiya aapke kya hua? u r freaking me out

jai finally calmed down
jai: pia, do u believe in ghosts?

Pia: do u think I am one of those old behenjis or something?
jai put an arm around his sister and said"guess what?I just scared bani dixit out of her wits.

pia was shocked and only managed to squeak out a "how?"
our hero narrated the whole story and exagarated a lot.

Pia: Bhaiya, u know that was very mean of u
jai just made a face

Jai: Pia mere behen, if u had just seen the atitude of that girl, u wouldn/t say that
Pia(suspiciously):U flirted with her didn't u?

jai just gave her a lopsided grin

Pia: I will take that as a yes

jai: I hate to admit it, but it is kind of hard to remain mummy's munna when u see a hottie like her just going by u, but let me warn u little sister, she is a bomb and in every possible way

pia hit his hand playfully
Pia: bhaiya she is really nice. She helps me with my studies
Jai: U r in the same class as bhootni?

pia: bhaiya y do u always call people names
Jai(innocently): Pia, u know that I call u pia cause ur name is pia and her name is bhootni, thats y I call her bhootni

Pia: UFF!!!bhaiya, does she know u r a walia?
Jai: Nope.
Pia: Well, she knows that I am a walia, and she said that just because our families always quarrel, that doesn't means that we can't be friends

Jai: Pia, u gave me a heartattack. Does ma and baba know about this

Pia(terrified): bhaiya pls don't tell them. Remember what happened when we were little and u tallked with that meera dixit and baba spanked u?

jai grimaced at the memroy: Okay, sis, we will keep quiet about bhootni

pia: thanks,but don't call her that

Jai: I will try

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Bani and meera stealthily made their ways along the walia grounds. Bani was cursing herself for letting meera drag her along. She had only agreed cause if she didn't, meera would keep on bugging her about it

They looked up towards a balcony and meera started climbing the tree and bani followed. They stepped onto the balcony and were about to open the door..................

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Jai was getting raedy for bed and went inside the bathroom. he put on his nightsuit inside-out. He heard some noise outside and went to check it. He was terrified of the noise and ran towards it forgetting with all about the nightsuit. He didn'ts see where he was going.

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Meera and bani were now face to face with a black handed demon

Meera and bani: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and they jumped down from the horror room and ran towards home sweet home

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light flickered in WM and u could hear the sleepy voices

pls comment

Edited by Twinkle_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

🤣

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bhootni .... kay naam di jai en bani koo are yaar agar woo bhotni hai tum bhoot jo hoo🤣

jai ki galt nihgt shuit ko dekkar meera aur abni dar gayi?🤣🤣

that shwo how ihe is..

that editoic emera ko kab kick akrogi out of the ff se /?

so pai si sister😆 sop pia and bani rani are friend.. ab kay hoga?

hey i want soem jb fighting scene alla lone where no oen knwos them and emer ako is bahar hi rako

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
gr88 part
plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Twinks enjoying this a lot 😆 😆

Sorry for not reading it earlier, but its so funny and light stuff.

Bhootni! 😆 Loved this bit.

Please update soon.

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