FF:Romeo &Juliet Part-23, page18 - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Twinkle... nice choice... 😆 ... I think a mixture of both will be sizzling.... 😳 😉 😆 ...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I agree a mixture of both. And then I want Jai to get back at Bani but his plan goes wrong and Bani gets hurt, so he feels bad for his stupid behavior.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
I vote SERIOUS revenge, enough is enough!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 it's funny how jai pulled a trick on Bani and she didn't even realize that it was the garden of her own home. but poor pia thought she was fooled thinking that something might have happened to her brother. btw this is so not romeo & juliet except that there are two families both equally rich, powerful and respected by the society having feud with one another. will jai and bani relationship bring reconciliation of the two families? hope you don't kill bani & jai the way shakespear killed romeo & juliet. waiting for your next update. please continue soon. 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for all ur lovely coments guys, and I hope I don't dissapoint u. Well, I have decide that Bani will......................

Part-17

It was college and Jai Walia was storlling around campus with his arm around Roshni and having the time of his life(oh yeah?I will take care of that)

Roshni: Jai u r my hero. I can't believe that I thought u would ever kiss that bhootni. Pls forgive me for not trusting u
Jai squeezed her waist

Jai: Darling, I already forgave u and lets not let that bhootni disturb us anymore

Roshni: mmmmmm

Later in lunch Jai was sitting with pia and rying to get his sister to talk to him. Then Davia came by

Pia: Hey davs, come and join me

Davia solemnly sat down. She had a troubled expression on her face

Pia: Anything wrong davs?

Davia: huh? oh,umm....actually...woh...umm..no

Pia: huh?

Davia eyed Jai and said: Umm, pia can we talk in private

Jai: Why, am I a intruder?

Davia: Fine then, pia, bani is having troubles

Hearing that sentence, Jai's head shot up and for some reason, his heart started beating faster

Pia: Kya? Well, even in class, she was awfully quiet

Davia: well, u know, umm, u knew that Bani has asthma right?

Pia: Well yeah, she told me that when we had met and she had started coughing

Davia(eyeing Jai): Well, u see, after that day, u know when umm..jai left us in the garden in her house, and we couldn't see anything, well, we were walking for hours, and bani had gotten tired. Then the next day she was coughing like he** but she didn't take anything and today she was supposed to have bed rest, but she came to college anyway and now when I saw her.....

Pia: What?What?

Davia:Well, when I saw her in the girl's toilet, she was cring and hiccoughing and she told me to go away and she was saying Jai's name over and over again

Jai: WHAT?

Davia: Well, yeah, bye, I need to go

Pia: Now do u see how dangerous ur pranks can be? Don't ever EVER talk to me again before u apolize to Bani. I will be surprised if she even talks to u again

And with that she stormed of, leaving a flustered Jai behind. He ran his hand through his hair and went on a Bani hunt

After roaming the whole campus,Jai finally found Bani crying and coughing by the college pond

Jai nervously approached her, feeling a pang of guilt satbbing his heart with every step he took towards that pitiful figure

He finally approached her

Jai: Umm, Bani?

Bani head sprang up at that voice.

Jai sat down beside her

Jai: Umm, bani, look I am sorry, about what I did. I didn't know that u had asthma. Sach.

Bani(with and edge to her voice):So now u r feeliing pity for me?

Jai: I..uh..I am sorry Bani. Really, I didn't know this would happened

He looked at her and saw that she was taking rapid breaths. Her hand was now over her chest and she was coughing. Jai became worried

Jai: Bani, is anything wrong?Umm, should I get water

Bani(with bloodshot eyes): Noo..cough, umm, cough

She got up and was coughing like anything. Jai got up and held her supporting her

jai(panicking): Look, Bani I am sorry.Look lets go to the clinic

By now Bani's coughing was out of control.

He led her towards the library, and by the pond when she suddenly stood still

Bani: cough, cough,cough. Jai, I don't think I will make it

That brought tears to Jai's eyes,

Jai: Bani don't say that

And the next sound u hear is "SPLASH!!!!!!!!!"

Jai's head came out of the water

Jai:WHATTTTT???????

Bani was now bent double by laughing so hard

Bani: Man Jai Walia, u r a su*ker for a su**er!See ya later ALLIGATOR!!!!
And man, u really r an ugly alligator Jai. Oh and, here's an aanda for u

and she threw an egg at him

with that she ran away like an evil mouse, leaving a nearly drowning Jai behind

Pls comment😳😳😳and pls tell me if I should stop

Edited by Twinkle_23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
wow
this is amazinggg

i want more pranks.....not love so soon

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
😆 😆 😆 .... well deserved Punishment... 😆 😆 😆 ... i don't think he's ugly alligator... but a cute alligator..... 😆 ... do cont soon.... 👏 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
hahahahaha.
that was really funny.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
I don't think I can update soon because of my schedule, but I will try
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow nice ff 👏 👏 👏 ..............read it in 1 go😃
loved the pranks they played on each other 😆
plzz cont.soon

Edited by koolgal - 17 years ago

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