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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
gr8 part dear 👏
Goodluck for ur bio test
will be waiting on friday
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really cute scenes of AG 👏
WELL DONE DEAR!!!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Can't wait to see Jai's face when he sees Ganga with AD or even better if he says anything to AD and Ganga comes and blasts him off...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
totally.. loved it..
aww.. ganga.. cant wiat to meet her father.. nice nice.
oo please u will do just fine on ur bio test.
if i can pass.. anyone.. can pass. hehe
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi,

This is getting better with each chapter, keep it up.
Good luck on your test!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi,

This is getting better with each chapter, keep it up.
Good luck on your test!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi
grt going
firstly all the best for ur bio test..
2ndly request hai dont let it be a SS make it a FF...
its really grt..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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maedam please update soon
did ad and ganga plane land or not 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Whoa! Just read..
Awesome update yaar..love ganga/AD relationship.
Hopefully, when AD finds out about Jai, he wont be mad at ganga, not for too long atleast.
continue soon 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
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in the plane

jeet and ganga are sitting face to face and eating their dinner

'ganga you've been very quiet since we got here, i'll ask again, is everything alright' jeet asked worrily

ganga smiles and reaches out to hold his hand 'jeet i am alright, just a little tired'

'oh my god, you shouldve said something then sweetheart, come on im taking you to bed'

'jeet its fine i know you dont sleep till late, i'll just sit with you'

'hmm so want to spend time with me so i dont feel bored, how sweet of you'

ganga blushes

'but ganga you should look after yourself i dont want you falling ill because of me, come on i'll sleep early too tonight'

'but...'

'i dont want to hear anything, come willingly or i'll carry you over my shoulder and take you there myself'

ganga laughs 'no please, alright lets go'

Ganga was sleeping with her head on her husbands chest and Jeet was running his fingers through her silky hair

'jeet you know i love you right'

'of course i know you love me and i love you too'

'no jeet i mean i've fallen so deeply in love with you i dont think i could stand to lose you'

Jeet gets alarmed and looks at his wife in the eyes

'ganga what happened why are you talking like this'

'nothing has happened jeet, its just whenever i found happiness in my life it was taken away just as quickly, i dont want to lose you jeet, you are the best thing that has happened to me in a long time' ganga begins to cry

'so thats whats been eating at you, ganga listen to me nobody and nothing can take me away from you, you say you love me and cant lose me, same goes for me i love you and i promise ganga we will live a happy life together, just us and maybe some children' jeet smiles

ganga hugs him 'maa said the same this morning she is looking forward to having gradchildren'

'and what do you think ganga'

'i look forward to the day we have a child jeet' ganga smiles into his chest and gives him a light kiss

'well i look forward to that day too, but tonight lets just rest'
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mumbai airport

'jai is this a good idea, i mean what happened happened let it go' said aditya

'aditya that man is an arrogant jerk, i just want him to see me and remember that there is one man who defeated him, and if he is here to cause any more trouble than it wont be good for him or his family'

'jai im sticking with my gut feeling, this doesnt feel right'

'come on aditya he should be arriving shortly, why dont you go and get some flowers to welcome him back'

'good idea its not like i even want to see him for too long' aditya mumbles and walks off

'excuse me can you tell me if mr. aparajit deb's plane has landed' jai asks the hostess at the counter 'yes sir it has landed at gate 12'

jai grins 'aparajit get ready to be stunned'

in the plane

'ganga come on we have to get off now'

'sorry sorry i had to redo my sari, i cant believe i fell asleep in it'

'dont worry we'll reach the hotel in 20mins we can shower and change there'

'really we, i dont think so you have to meet your new partners in 3 hours'

'hmm thats enough time for us'

'lets go jeet'

jai was eagerly waiting for jeet to arrive, he couldnt wait to rub it in his face about the businessman of the year award ceremony, and how he(jeet) wasnt nominated due to his past mistakes

jeet and ganga were just getting out of the plane when all of a sudden ganga realized something

'oh my god jeet i forgot my wedding ring on the plane'

'come on i'll come with you'

'no please go on, let me just grab it i'll be back in a flash'

as jeet came out with their bags he was surprised how all the media had gotten the announcement of his arrival

jai was trying to get through the crowd of reporters, he saw AD at a distance giving a short interview to a reporter

he(jai) was about to call out AD's name but another soft voice beat him to it

'Jeet!'

that voice, no, no it couldnt be could it, jai turned his attention towards the gate and their stood his baby girl, his life, his ganga...tears of joy came into his eyes, there she stood in a sari looking just like her mother beautiful

he saw her walking towards aparajit and became confused until aparajit made the announcement

'please let me introduce to you my wife Ganga Aparajit Deb'

the words echoed in jai's ears 'my wife Ganga' 'my WIFE Ganga'

how could this happen jai thought he slowly began to back away and turned around and saw his pal aditya

'jai, lets go there's nothing more to do here, i heard and saw everything come on'

'aditya how could she marry that man, hes a damn cheater,my daughter my own flesh and blood married my enemy ,a man half her age how...'

'i dont know the answer to your question jai but one thing is for sure, AD has to have trapped her in some way, you are her father, you have to keep her away from that man'

'yes aditya i have to save my daughter'




Edited by johnslove - 17 years ago

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