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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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+ 7

Posted: 17 years ago

#71

finally you updated 👏 👏 👏

that was an sweet update 😳

i am also worried about Ganga and Jeet relationship, when she tells him that she is Jai Walia's daughter.

please write soon

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tam2

@tam2

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#72

was looking forward to ur update...glad that u updated... 👏👏👏....

it was a really cute and sweet update...only Jeet and Ganga... 😳😳😳 ...

wow they are planning for a kid...... 😳😳😳 ...
...so sweet...😃...

hope Ganga's world doesn't overcome with sorrow once she goes back to India... ...

...plz keep JG together...they look cool together...😎

Do cont soon... 👏 👏👏 ...

I hope u will post the remaining part soon after editing it...😃...

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago

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bdev

@bdev

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

A very sweet update, love Jeet and Ganga together, they make a really nice couple.

Can't wait to read what happens next. Please continue soon, this part was too short.

BD

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Anam

@salmansgirl

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#74

just read all the parts. really like this ff. i love the dea of JW's daughter being married to his rival. it's going to get quiet interesting to see how Jai reacts on seeing his daughter with Jeet.

It's a very different and beautifully written story so far. looking forward to reading more. so please continue soon!

Anam

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tropa

@moonlitnight

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#75

oh Finally update
aww..JG sooo cute 😳 😳 😳
Ganga is feeling insecure..cant blame her for that..

good job 👏
but a little shorty
looking forward for a looooong update 😉 😛
plz cont soon

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johnslove

@johnslove

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Posted: 17 years ago

#76

thanks for the lovely comments guys 😃 ....I UPDATED it's kinda short but i really want to make the next part about jai and ganga so i need to work on it

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#77

Great part.
liked it.
looks like Jai got biggest surprise of the world...his daughter married to his enemy....but I hope that he doesn't create any problems btw Ganga and Jeet....i hope Gangaa doesn't give that much space to her father Jai Walia...to create problem btw AG.
plz cont. soon

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#78

gr88 part
plz cont soon
arey ab yeh jai kya karega

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Avantika

@harshi21

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Can't wait for the next part, I hope Ganga lets Jeet about who her Dad is... great job Jai, you couldn't keep your marriage together and now you're out to break your daughter....

Edited by harshi21 - 17 years ago