FF: Ek Kashish - Ch 20 & Epilogue pg 58 - Page 13

A very nice fanfic, Tiny. You are too good,your writing style is beautiful. I am eagerly waiting for a Jai-Bani marriage &nbs p;

Tintin, just caught up with the story. Bani's plight is frightening yet so real and my heart goes out to Jai suffering for a sin uncommitted. I See a poignant love story in the offing. Kudos to you girl for thinking up such a wonderful story.
Somali

Just caught up with the story..!

Haila...bani preggers..?? ..wohooooo..she left Dakshhhh 👏 ...aur jaldi se Jai ko milloooo...phir baat apne aap ban jaayegi 😉 😳

very nicely written. I love the way you ahve written both their experiences and feelings. Pls update soon.

BD

wonderful update Tin.... 👏
Poor Jai and Bani...

Ow my God,
This is so sad. Kya ho raha hai in dono ke saath.
Feel like crying.

Continue soon,
Bye,
Ranjana

Hi Tintiny,
I just got back from a two-week 'pilgrimage' to my home town. I discovered that you completed Crushed Innnocence. I thoroughly enjoyed the last few parts that I read all at the same time and loved the beautiful way in which you brought about the JB milan.
I do so love the conspiring ladies - Shakuntala and Ma.
I was indeed glad to know that Bani's intelligence was put to good use by learning German in the Max Mueller Bhavan. And you brought about a very clean twist to the story in a very thrilling way. 👏 👏 👏

About this new FF of yours - Ek Kashish - I am totally bowled over by the theme. So many young girls in India go thru similar situations in life like Bani and suffer thru them silently because of lack of self-esteem or enough support from their parents/family/friends. I am so glad that your FF is dealing with this issue and I hope that you will show light to many such youngsters via this story. Like the Jai in your story, there are likely many young men too who are facing such situations and are castigated for a crime that they have not committed. It is such a difficult situation to be in where the norm is to blame the guy in most cases.
Hope you will weave your story in such a way that each of the good/bad parties get their due and of course there is JB's happy milan in the end.

Sad yet true! Sych demons do exist in our society, only problem we may not know them before its too late. 😡 🤢

omg omg...bani bani bani...she understands your pain...pick her...pick her...omg omg...
cant wait for next update...but iwll have to wait until monday...have a great weekend
JAZ

Tinni you are just portraying a real picture of the society.....we just only know one side of society but it's true we do have this dark side here as well.....we don't know unlil we face it....so hope Jai-Bani would be able to feel the pain that both of them were going through.....waiting for Monaday's update.

Have a wonderful weekend!!!