FF: Forgive Me chp 24 pg 31 - Page 9

A-W-E-S-O-M-E

loved the way Bani talked
though i feel sorry for Jai but he deserves this pain

gr88888 job 👏
plz cont soon
-tropa

oo i feel so sorrie.. for him
but.. thats what he gets.. for being so mean to bani
i hope u continue this soon

Hey great part
awww i do feel sorry for Jai he is suffering alot 😭 Banis words were very hurtful to Jai


Taj

Great part.
loved it.
Bani words so true...it totally crushed Jai the way he crushed her.
but now I feel bad for him...hope he still trys to woo his Bani back 😉
plz cont. soon

amazing story.
aww i felt sad for both jai and bani 😭 😭
very good concept 😛
keep up the good workk 😳

that was awesome...i still feel for bani and i agree with what she said...i agree 100%...jai deserves it...i have no...and in mean NO...sympathy for him...monster is right...there is no other word...i hate him in this ff...

i hope bani never forgives him...a life of lonliness woudl be too good for him...

cant wait for next update
JAZ

i expected sometihng like to be spoken by bani .. yes koi bi insaane dar jate hain jai ki harkotein se...

so jai heard abni and massi's tlak.. he deserves it.. lekiin ab kya hoga? he needs to save bani form death.. kaise karega.. wo sab mein be like same as in nafrat way chaleenging her that she cant do anything and stuff and forcing her to get well along with getinng of her illness form ehr head.

pls cotnineu soon.the update was really good well picturized

davia

This is really cute. Love it. Cont soon.

great part

feel bad for both jai and bani

they both destroyed their own life.....they never trusted the other alot to tell the truth

both r suffering for their own deeds

cont soon

Chapter 12

At the hospital
Maasi : "Beta why didn't you tell me that you have cancer??Kyu beta? Tum apni maasi ko itna ghaer samajto ho..?
Bani: "nahi maasi yeh baat nahi hai..waise hi hamare zindagi meh itna problems hai aur mei aapki problems badana nahi chahati thi."
Maasi hurt : "beta how can you say this"..
She was about to continue when the door opened and Dr Sharma came inside with a file.
Dr.Sharma smiling : "Hello bani!! Kaisi ho??
Bani weakly smiled: "I am fine doctor..
Dr.Sharma: "ek achi khabar ..aap ki tabiyat filhaal to achi hai which is a surprise..to aap aaj ghar ja sakti hai..lekin every week aap ko checking ke liye aana hai..aur is baar plizz cancel mat karna..this checkups are very important"..he sternly looked at her..
Bani smiling : "don't wory doctor..mei aajaugi. Achaa mei apni naukari kab se join kar sakti ho?
Maasi and dr.sharma looked at each other..
Masi hesitantly: "Beta kal raat ko tumhari tabiyat bahut kharaab thi to maine aur daksh ne tay kiya ki tum ab naukari nahi karogi isiliye mere khane par daksh ne tumhara istifa walia industries me de di.."
Bani: "Maasi aap janti hai ki mei naukari kyu kar rahi ho..aur mei din bhar ghar me nahi rah sakti..pliz mei kal hi jakar apna resignation letter waapas leti ho.."
Masi violently : "nahi beta..tum ab waha kaam nahi karogi.."
Bani calmly : "maasi mei aur bhi jagha par kaam khoj rahi ho na? jaise mujhe koi aur kaam mil jayega mei yeh naukari chod dogi.."achaa mei ab change karke aati ho..patani ganga kaisi hogi" She went to change..
Maasi was still not convinced..she didn't want bani working anywhere near jai..The doctor knew what she was thinking..
Dr.sharma: "agar bani kaam karna chahati hai to aapko usse ek mauka dena chahiye..and now that mr.walia knws the truth he might behave differently..
Masi finally agreed..


At night

Jai slowly entered walia mansion..everyone was waiting for the gud news..adi saw jai making his way to his bedroom..
Adi: "arre jai" jai stopped but didn't turn around.."kya huwa yaar"?
Dadi: "jai putar ithe aa..
Slowly jai came forward..As soon as they saw his face they knew something was wrong..
Rano: "Mr.walia kya huwa??di se baat hui?kya kaha unhone??
They waited..Finally
Jai woodenly whispered : "She hates me.."
Then he told them what happened at the hospital..
At last dadi said : "hey bhagwaan"!!
Adi : "jai don't worry yaar..after the way you've treated her you cant blame her if she's scared of you..u have to give her some time..you have a daughter now..u also have to think about her..so just give her time and space..eventually she'll come to you..in the meantime you have to support her..she has cancer..she'll need all the love and support from not just you but from all of us.."
"Yes" Jai said slowly "I think you're right adi..i have to give a some time..i shouldn't pressurize her..i'll make her more sick..and I cant lose her now..but I want to spend time with my daughter too..i've already lost 5 years of her live..
Dadi : "tumhe iske bare me bani se baat karni hogi putar"
Rano: "if you want I can talk to di?
Jai: "no I'll do it..this is between me and bani.."

To be continued…!!