FF:Bolt OOT Blue(Part 11,Pg17) - Page 8

kya nam raka valentine 😆

soo jai shared his feelign with bani.. par woo aise kyun hain abb valentine naam ke anusaar jaroor will play the cupid for jb haina..

pols cotiues oon


i lvoe this funny udpate specially the alst aprt 😆

davia

great part dear
👏 👏
liked the entire part. jai's outburst about his past then him bandaging her wound 😳
and now this valentine and bani's pranks
😆 👏

continue soon

Part 7B
I loved ur update,, u paint a really vivid picture for ur readers,, the ending was the best part,, "toche mr.walia" ,, please continue soon
Part 8
What is this all of a sudden bani is becoming all bold,, in a subtle way ,, valentine ,, is named that becuz he will bring jai and bani together ,, jigs deserved that ,, but why wasn't jai amused? ,, I bet the next prank is on jai

davia 389:
well maybe maybe not....
just keep reading
did you try the musci along with it?

divya_123:
well just keep reading to see what all BV jodi do together

ragamthalam0:
hmm quite a fine idea lets see i mightn just add that to the next part
😉
love
suppi 😆

wonderful parts loved reading all of them
and cant wait to read more

hehehehe....
Jai told forbade Tony from cooking 😛 aadat hogayi Bani ki kya 😉 😛
aww....poor Jai.
ahem...what is he "feeling" toward Bani haan? 😆
what a name Valentine 😆 😆
what???!!!! Jigs and 🤣🤣🤣
gr888888 update 👏 👏
plz cont soon

Hey
The update was really lovely 😊 😛
And the song well it was one of my favourites and imagining Jai and Bani in the car the way u described it 😛
When Jai looked at her wound getting off the bed when she was asleep I loved that scene 😛
I think Vel and Bani is gonna make gr8 pair 😆 👏
why not try some pranks on Jai as well i would love to see that 😆 😆
While i was reading i just hoping that it wont get finished fast but not my luck i really got finished too fast.
Waiting for the next one
Dont make us wait as before and longgggggggggggggg updats
Thanks 😊 😛

wowow!!! wht a wonderfull part!!! loved everything(except the whole valentine part--i am still deciding on tht one 😕 )

i love how jai loved her cooking and pretends not to like it and then eats it anyway 😆 the whole tony and jai thing was simple hilarious!!!

the prt in the car whn they're going to pick maasi up was just wowow! it was sad to see jai laughing at her when she said rain is like her friend😭 i could've easily slapped mr. walia...how mean!!!

tht part in the bedroom when she gets hurt he just turns away and goes to sleep and then when she's asleep he looks at her injuries.....tht was just brilliant!!!! i mean tht part was just sooo touching but also frusting to a point b/c first i was like how could u not even ask how the poor girl was and then when he went to her when she's sleeping was just amazing!!! Bravo!!!👏 👏

i also loved the prt when she falls on top of him....my mouth just dropped down!!! 😆

i could just pic jai's shock when he finds out bani was the head chef! and then him telling her of his past was great!! absolutely fab!! 👏 👏 👏

whts with bani yelling at jai??? where did tht come from?? seems so much like out of her character!😕 was it b/c she has reached her full stress level and just doesn't care anymore?? believe me i understand tht....if i am really stressed out then i just dont care anymore!!!

looks like i am not in the majority w/not liking valentine..to me it seems like the whole karuna thing they show on tv. and i am not into the whole kid and bani being silly thng...but its ok.majority rules...just one request though..can we still have lots of intense scenes of JB just like u have shown up until now?

amazing part!!! how were ur results??? congrats in advance coz i am sure u did fine!

very long and satisfying part! have to go back there and read it again!!! 👏

(as always)pls continue soon!

wow.....you are a good writer....don't know whether I commented before......this story certainly brings good memories of early days of KS.......was suprised to see Bani answering back to JW.......please continue...

Hi,

Nice update! Loved the part where B gets scores for telling J off ;)

J has feeling for B but doesn't want to admit it! Do continue soon ;)