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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
Well Guys,
you people are just wonderful....😭 😭 was watching Jodhaa Akbar....reminds me of JB......

coming back to the point you people are wonderful readers (silent and also the one's who were umm not so silent...😆 😆 )

I will update by tomorrow but may be delayed coz i am reformatting my computer soo.... It might be late....dont worry BV are not going to b like the karuna of the show...
Well some scenes that i liked in KS may be there but overall this FF is not at all going to be like KS.
i mean I don't want MY jai to be the sappy little thing shown in KS nowadays.... he's gonna be the old RB who seems to have disappeared into thin air....

btw please note JW of my FF is a ONE WOMAN MAN only...
so that means no pia, meera, seeta or geeta for him.....

He is the badboy everyother woman dreams about and drools on....(sorry that was me... 😆 😆 )

Also note Rano is not related to Bani or Pia she is just ranveer's wife...thats it....

(ok and people if you have any requests, suggestions, scenes, 'favourite songs'(this given utmost imp by the music freak of a author of this FF😆 😆 ) or anything you want please feel free to PM me and if you want me to PM you whenever i update plz PM me about it...

well thats it...

lots of Love,(and i mean loads of it)
Suppi😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
Guys i may not be able to update maybe till sunday as my computer is going thru some technical problems.
I hope you people understand...
Also My classes are starting this week therefore the updates may b less frequent. Please understand my situation
as i am in class XII which is also the board exam year. Please cooperate with me.


Lots of love,😉

Suppi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
Hi I have been reading this ff and it is great. My says that she feels like crying seeing the way Bani is being treated by Jai.She also keeps on asking me when are u updating?
You are doing a great job
Please continue soon
BTW all the best in ur class XII and board exams.
Just study hard and concerntrate in class I'm sure ur will pass with flying colors 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bubbles2suppi

Guys i may not be able to update maybe till sunday as my computer is going thru some technical problems.
I hope you people understand...
Also My classes are starting this week therefore the updates may b less frequent. Please understand my situation
as i am in class XII which is also the board exam year. Please cooperate with me.


Lots of love,😉

Suppi

will gladly wait for the update b/c i no it'll be worth the wait however long it is! take ur time! don't worry! have a great school year!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Wonderfull FF Suppi. The two best things (there are loads of great thing in this FF but i'm just mentioning two😉) about it are you are wrtintg about the KS we all fell in love with. Jai is a rude and arrogant but o so cute, i guess he doesnt want to know that and Bani is such a sweetheart. I hope she tells jai soon she isnt Pia's sister. I defenitely like the naughty and tony blackmailing Bani!😉
The second thing is all the songs, speccially the rain songs. I am a rain freak myself. I love the rain!!!! Even the cold dutch rains!!

Thanks for the wonderful FF. I'll be waiting for the next part!!
Bye
Ranjana
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

Chapter 9:

"What are you doing in my study?" yelled jai as soon as he entered the study.

Trembling slightly there was the little 7 year old valentine sitting on a pile of his most precious books, amongst the scattered papers which he realized to be unfortunately from many really important files all of them laying discarded here and there.

She had been drawing crayon stick figures on a set of papers which later turned out to be from the really important presentation that he had the next day.

It had taken him all night to get that presentation ready and here was this brat drawing on them.

"GET OUT!!! OUT!!! STUPID GIRL LOOK WHAT YOU HAVE DONE…..NO DINNER FOR YOU TODAY GO TO YOUR ROOM…NO TV, COMPUTER OR DINNER FOR YOU TODAY…OUT!!" Jai yelled at valentine who seemed to be glued to the floor out of fright.

Hearing the ruckus Bani came into the room. The whole study was upside down… papers flying here and there…basically it looked as if a whirlwind had hit it.

Then she saw valentine standing in the middle of all the mess tears flowing out her eyes… she then noticed Jai standing right next to her yelling at her.

He looked really angry, his face all red with anger.

"why can't sahil control his kids….ohhh my study…my study…" jai groaned looking around again.

Seeing Bani there in the study valentine rushed into her arms. Bani immediately picked valentine up, rubbing her tears away.

Valentine hid her head into the crook of Bani's neck, holding her tightly as if the man a few feet away was some kind of monster who was ready to pounce on her.

"Bani ,….uncle's….uncle is…such a grouch…..i was …I was just …just drawing…he is saying no dinner….he is so mean….i…i…hate him…..he..he is soo mean….i am never talking to him ever again….." Valentine said in between sobs….

Bani gently calmed valentine saying soothing words to her… kissing on her head then when she had completely calmed down made her go to her room.

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Jai was shocked. Instead of scolding valentine Bani was supporting her. Oh why won't she?? she wanted his work to go in vain isn't it???

Even she might have been involved in this…after all even Bani was involved in the scene yesterday at the dinner table…. Maybe this was her way of playing pranks on him…oh he would show her….

Jai saw Bani slowly without a word come towards him. Maybe to mock him, laugh at his condition.

He thought up something sharp and mean to say to her, but was he in for a surprise.

Bani did not utter a word and with a sigh she started to pick up the papers, arranging them in their respective files…then arranged his books unfolding the pages that had been folded when valentine sat on them.

Within minutes right before his eyes the study was back to being spotless again.

If he had not seen it with his own eyes he wouldn't have believed that anything had happened at all in the study.

After clearing the mess, Bani picked up the papers on which valentine had been drawing and looked through them.

She just turned to jai's laptop which was switched on, connected the printer and printed the presentation, filed it, handed it to him and when towards the door.

She opened the door to step out.

"Children should be told lovingly if they make a mistake, not shouted at or cursed. Every child is special.

No matter how naughty they are they are supposed to be loved. It is our duty as adults to make a child understand when they commit a mistake, it is our duty to also forgive them for anything they might do.

But its not going to make any difference makin an adult like you who is in reality smaller than valentine understand these small things." She said and left the study.

Jai was left opening and closing his mouth like a goldfish.

A/N: Guys sorry for the delay but from now on it may continue like this… comp time is limited for me…please do leave your comments.

Love,

Suppi

Edited by bubbles2suppi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87

must say bani si rockign the way she gave back aji with no shouting but doing the proper tlaking.. wowowoow👏

i liek his bani

par jai 😡uff kitni nanhi si valentine ko dsaat diii.. itna bhi nahi socha.. she is just a kid

ls cotnineu dotn u dare try to stop it..

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
very short part....

haila jai how could you yell like this 😡 poor vlantine

liked bani's way of knocking some sense in his head 😃

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
That good ,, valentine messed up his study ,, I thought she mite play a prank on him,,,and I also thought valentine was a boy ,, my mistake,, but bani told him off ,, that the best part,only complaint it was short,pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Hey it was short
But however was lovely
Even i thought Valentine was Boy 😆
Bani gave him a nice lecture but i was thinking of playing prank on him
Thankssssssssss

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