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Posted: 17 years ago
where is the update .......... 😡 waiting for so long........... 😉 pls cont soooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey..i read ur ff...in 1 go..n i luvd it..plz cont soon
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hey wheres the update ........how long we have to wait dear pls cont sooooooon
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Chap 11:

As the day turns to dusk with the never ending torrent of rain lashing the grounds below as a storm to match the one in her heart brews up to tremendous heights.

The great Walia Mansion which was usually a bustle of bubbling energy filled with people, was totally empty, devoid of any human life other than a young woman wearing a plain faded corn blue salwar.

Bani was sitting on the balcony with a notepad and pencil in her hand.

She scrunched up her nose thinking about the rhyme scheme she should use.

She was busy penning down a poem as she was bored to death.

Everyone had left for Dehradun to a relatives wedding earlier in the morning.

Bani had refused to go along saying that she had some important work coming up and decided to stay back.

She definitely did not want to go after jigyasa had stared at her telling her to refuse when she was asked.

All the servants were in their quarters, the whole house was in darkness as the fuse had gone out and she didn't dare try anything.

Anyhow she was used to sitting in the dark as in Mt. Abu load shedding was very frequent.

She thought for a while and quickly penned down the rest of the lines…

Then she smiled at her work and read the whole thing aloud.

"Life was moving on boring as ever

With spring gone, beauty of nature too

With leaves falling and swaying with wind

Sun geared up to smile on nature

Everyone waiting for some hot days

But astonishingly it lashed, the rain

Flash floods ramped across the state

Roads got immersed under the fury,

Of what turned out to be unseasonal rain

Rather than relishing the relief

People emerged out of homes with umbrellas

Cursing on the rain for ruins

The days passed on and on

But the rain that changed the season,

Just kept dancing on the land!

More than excitement, agony creeped in

Kids just looked at the sky

Asking themselves when will it end?

But the nature got a refreshing cover

Greenery surfaced all around

Cheering the minds, cooling the agony

The cold winds which accompanied rain

Became an ecstasy for many

Those who loved the rain walked through it

Dancing with the rhythm of the raindrops

Dampness remained in surface for long,

But it didn't dampened the spirits

Everyone knew the unwelcome guest,

Will just vanish as if nothing happened

But the unseasonal rain was a hit

As it challenged the weather predictions

Proving all the science wrong

Showed that Mother Nature can surprise

At her will any time, with unseasonal rain

Reiterating herself as "the queen of earth"...."

"Well, its not too bad…afterall I am no wordsworth…hmm" Bani said to her self.

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Jai walia was not at all in the mood to party.

All he wanted to do was to go home, have a drink and have good nights sleep.

It had been a tiring day at WGI. But he had been dragged to an engagement party of his very good friend Mohan Khandelwal and Sonali Mehta the actress who was also coincidentally one of jai's ex-flames.

Jai somehow managed to shake of sonali who had been making sheep eyes at him ever since he had bumped into her accidentally.

He slowly tried to make his way out of the party.

He was suddenly rooted to the spot.

He saw her walking in with HIM...no not walking more like floating...

Dressed in the finest set of clothes money could buy....
A vision in White, the ring he had given her glistening in the light while she tucked a strand of her hair behind her ears..

He saw her rise to her tip toes and kiss the man in white passionately while the media continued clickling pictures like mad fools....

It was like he was rooted to the floor....

Then came the rage...pure boiling rage..seeing her with HIM, laughing with HIM, dancing with HIM, kissing HIM...

He gulped his drink in one go and asked for more.

His heart was overflowing with growing anger, growling rage...as if he had a beast in him which wanted to be let loose.

The only thought he had in mind was to walk straight up there and strangle to woman in white.

But somehow controlling himself he was about to slink away from the party when the man in white called out to him….

"Jai… mujhe mile bagir hi chale jaa rahe ho???? Mujhe tumhe kissi se milana hai."

"Oh… Pranab Uncle…umm…maine aap ko dekha hi nahin…." Jai said giving a thoroughly fake smile.

Pranab Mukherjee was Jai's Mentor, Guide, Friend and everything…

He was the person who had encouraged him when his father didn't, He was the person who had believed in him when everyone else had thought him to be a useless wagabond….

It hurt him to the core to see her with him….

Not because he wanted her for himself but because by now he knew her nature and also that the only reason she was with him was for his money….

"Inse milo jai….Yeh Hai meri fianc Pia…. Aur Pia Yeh Hai mera beta Jai.

Waise toh ye saach me mera beta nahin par mein isse mera bete jaisa hi manta hoon…." Pranab said…

" Ji Namaste Pia Ji…." He said grinding his teeth.

"Umm Pranab uncle mujhe urgently ghar jaana hai….meri biwi mera wait kar rahi hai….

Agar ghar jaldi nahin pahuncha toh mujhe maar padegi…." Jai said laughing a very fake laugh.

"Ab bani tumpe haath bhi uthane lagi kya jai???" Pia said batting her heavily mascaraed (is there a word like that??? Oh well I think you get what I mean….) eyes at him.

"Its none of your concern" Jai said in such a low and hard tone so that only pia could hear him…

"Ji main chalta hoon…. namaste" Jai said to Pranab
just as Jai turned to leave the lights dimmed….

"Oh Damn …" Jai thought.

The spotlight was on a man in his mid twenties…

unshaven but somehow very familiar to Jai.

A glance towards pia showed jai how terrified she was.

She was pale with fright.

The music started playing.

The man looked up and Jai got the shock of his life to see him in this state..

"Pushkar" he heard pia gasp out.

Movie: Sanam Teri Kasam

Singer:Kishore Kumar

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uO3VeiJqSwo&feature=relat ed

Sheshe ke gharon mein dekho toh

pathar dil wale rehte hain

[ He looked at pia]

jo pyar ko khel samajte hain

aur tod ke dil ko haste hain[2]

[he started walking towards her]

Kabhi jaan pe khel ke bhi jag mein

kasmon ko nibhaya jata tha[2]

[he started walking around her]

Jab vade bhulane se pehle

Khud ko hi bhulaya jata tha

Ab kasmein kitni jhoothi hain

aur vade kitne kachhee hain

[he gave her a glance and turned towards the rest of the audience]

jo pyar ko khel samajte hain

aur tod ke dil ko haste hain

Sheshe ke gharon mein dekho toh

pathar dil wale rehte hain

Ajee pyar sauda dilon ka hai

jo ye vyapari kya jane

[he said pointing at pia…]

ye pyar to apni puja hai

Daulat ke pujari kya jane

Apni har baat chupate hain

Deewano ke phitare kacche hai

jo pyar ko khel samajte hain

aur tod ke dil ko haste hain

[ he walked back to the stage]

Sheshe ke gharon mein dekho toh

pathar dil wale rehte hain

[the light goes out and he disappears]

Jai looks at pia and whispers to her.

"looking at pushkar's state all I can say is better him than me….thank god you ran away….. Or else it would have been me singing in this place."

He sneers at her and leaves.

Getting in his car jai drives to the nearest bar.

3.00 am

Walia Mansion,

Jai somehow managed to get out of the car.

He had left the car locked near the bar as he was totally drunk and was not in a state to drive.

The bartender had somehow managed to convince Jai to stop drinking and to go home, then had also got him into a hotel car and given direction to his house.

The whole walia mansion was enveloped in darkness Jai somehow managed to wobble into the house.

He saw three bani's waiting with candles in their hands.

"Jaise ki ek kaafi nahin thi ki ab theen theen???" jai thought.

He shook his head and the three merged into one…

He climbed the stairs almost missing his step once but finally manages to reach his room safely where he passes out cold on the bed.

Bani sighs to herself and takes off his shoes and covers him up… It was a cold night.

…………………………………………………………………………….......

Jai wakes up the following morning with a hangover and as usual he finds the weird hangover juice and egg sandwiches waiting for him the sandwiches had been made a few minutes ago.

It was as if bani knew the exact time he would wake up.

If it had been any other day jai would have quietly had the sandwiches and juice and just gone about with his business.

But today he somehow felt sick… He wanted to shout and scream at someone…to make someone's life miserable and that someone obviously was poor unlucky bani.

Bani entered the room to find Jai Walia seething with anger for no good reason.

"I TOLD YOU TO KEEP AWAY FROM ME….THEN HOW DARE YOU ENTER MY ROOM???? I DON'T NEED YOU OR YOUR STUPID GODFORSAKEN SANDWICHES. WHO KNOWS YOU MIGHT JUST POISON ME…AFTERALL YOU ARE FINALLY JUST AFTER MY MONEY….. HERE TAKE THESE OUT OF MY SIGHT AND SHOVE IT…"

Jai said throwing the whole tray at her which hit her head and the old wound began to bleed afresh.

Bani just ran out of the room holding her bleeding forehead.

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Bani just didn't understand why her husband was acting thus. She cleaned the wound and put a bandage on it.

Jai meanwhile was sitting in his room thinking about last night.

"Both the sisters have successfully ruined my life…now I would destroy theirs…"

Just then he heard someone singing.

It was such a beautiful and sweet voice.

He had never heard it before in his life.

"Who can it be…that too in my house.??" Jai thought as he made his way down towards the garden from where it was coming.

Bani was in the garden lawn sitting near the big fountain tears in her eyes as she sang.

Movie: Towerhouse

Singer: Lata Mangeshkar

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2EznrCj7kU&feature=relat ed

Ai mere dil-e-naadaan

Tuu Gham se Na ghabaraanaa

Ek din to samajh legii

Duniyaa teraa afasaanaa

Ai mere dil-e-naadaan

Tuu Gham Se na ghabarana

[Jai could not see her as she was blocked by the huge fountain so he made his way around it]

Aramaan bhare dil mein

Zakhmon Ko jagah de de

Bhadake hue sholoon ko

Kuchh aur havaa de de

Banatii hai to ban jaae

Ye zindagii afasaanaa

Ai mere dil-e-naadaan

Tu ghan se na ghabarana

[He was ashamed of himself and somewhere inside it tore his heart to see her like this but a senseless heartless beast was overpowering that feeling]

Fariyaad se kyaa haasil

Rone se natiijaa kyaa


[Bani quietly wiped her tears and got up]

Bekaar hain ye baatein

In baatoon se hogaa kyaa

Apanaa bhii ghaDii bhar mein

Ban jaataa hai begaanaa

Ai mere dil-e-naadaan

Tu gham se na ghabarana

Jai was left there to feel guilty as bani without even noticing him makes her way back into the house.

A/N: I know know I deserve to be flogged for disappearing so suddenly for months together. But what can I do the comp was totally banned by my mom. I couldn't even post a message saying the update was going to be late. Sorry Guys not only for the delay but also for the lame update. The pressure is so much this year as 12th is a very important year as it decides your career…your future. I hope you people understand when I say I am not sure when I will be able to update next.

Once again a very humble apology to all my readers for the delay.

Edited by bubbles2suppi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey welcome back dear 🤗
😆 moms 😛

Pia 🤢
poor Bani 😭
Jai line pe aa 😡 😡 varna 😡 😡

great part 👏 👏 👏

plz cont soon 😛

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
well thanks for update
great yaar, u removed pia from jb life atleast ons will not be
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Posted: 17 years ago
i was thinking i would have belans aimed at me the moment i log on phew... bach gayi for now... and yes No ONS i hated the topic even. and also moonlight night is totally tru when she says alone in bhootbangla. 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwnn.. dont worry hun.. we believe u.. we understand.. trust me.. lol.. great part.. atleast at the end jai realized his mistake.. hahah.. kya kismat paayi hai jai ne.. ek din mein both his exes show up.. lol.. thats really great.. heheh.. anywayz great part.. ab tho i can say continue soon dear..
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Posted: 17 years ago
its okk dera
i know how 12th is important
plz cont soon
gr88 part as usual
poor bani
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg!! finalyy...........

great update as usual........pia is so disgusting!!!

pls cont when u can

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