FF Illicit love: end part 40 p136 note139 - Page 103

omg that was a wonderful end
just love it
gonna miss ur ff

👏
wonderful end
I am gonna miss this ff
I am glad that everything worked out in ur ff
pls start another one soon
if u don't mind

hii ranjana
gr888 ending
even i got a little emotional while reading the last part
loved the whole ff
gr88 work

Hey Renu,

You finished the story...it was awesome. Poor Manav, had to know the truth about Nikita and Rahul but he is also very fortunate to have Jai and Bani as his adopted parents. Loved the story entirely.

I am glad Jai convinced Bani that she will make a better parent to Manav. The relationship between Manav and Manisha was just like true siblings.

Really loved this FF. Good job Renu!!

-- S

why did u end..... wht next now...

Hi Ranjana,

I truely loved the ending, it couldn't be any better, kudos to you 👏

All I have to say is that Manav is really lucky to have parents like Jai and Bani, who love him truely and got this wish true(Manisha) 😭 True what you said about the status Bani has like Manav's step mother in front of the society, there are biologic moothers who abuse their children and nobody says a word, it's reaaly sad 😭

This could be a real story by all means, but it's fictional. You call it illicit love but it was always love that bought a meaning to their lives and such precious gifts like their two children 😊 😭 😭 (I'm getting really teary 😳 😛, sorry)

Thanks for writing this super dupper story 😆 😆, I've always been really eagered to read every update that you posted, now I'll miss but I truely enjoyed and also learnt few things and to see how humans can be selfish and a good human being 😊 😊

Bye, Ranjana

Happy Vaisakhi 😊 😊 😊

PS. thoda lamba ho gaya, sorry 😛 😆 😳

Hey
awww that was really a wonderful ending u couldnt of done it any better it was perfect 👏 loved the ending

Taj

Liked the ending...typical of Bani too run away thinking she is doing something good when in fact she forgot Nikita does not want to be a mother...how could she think a child would be loved by the mother tried to kill it in first place.

typical JW chasing her and dragging her to the mandir...loved how he said who will teach him to love?

I am sad the ff has ended as I loved how the characters behaved like how people in life would. No hiding things behind raaz and parties...and no leaps.

I hope you will think of writing something else. Thanks for a wonderful ff.
👏 👏 👏

hey
Read all
ending was really beautiful
When I read those letter i was thinking different measures way of killing u but later it was gud
I really liked the scene where Jai brought Bani frm their home and their marriage
the whole FF was wonderful and lovely
Hoping for ur new FF
Thankssssssssssss