SS - Lighting up my life part 2 page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey

Okie.. before i post, this SS is NOT written by me.. infact my FF/SS is cuming in a weeks time! 🤣

Its by someone shy on the forum scared to post so i was approached to post it.. Do leave your comments

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Lighting up my life

"WHO HAS EATEN ALL THE LADOSS", screamed the lady of the house she stalked from room to room demanding to know from family and the numerous guest in Walia mansion which during Diwali celebrations they had many of, even stalking the many rooms in Walia mansion was a feet for the petite and pretty Mrs Bani Walia, but she was on a mission and nothing could stop her not today!!!!!!

"Rano, did you see any one go in to the kitchen today"

Rano arched a carefully plucked eye brow and said, "Only the whole family Di and what's wrong why you so stressed"

Ignoring her Bani Walia walked off muttering to her self, "I leave the kitchen for two minutes and all hell breaks loose and were on earth is Mr Walia"

"MUMMY, MUMMY, MUMMY!!!"

Bending down Bani Walia scooped her dear children in to a warm enveloping hug and instantly forgot her worries tapping her handsome son on the nose and smoothing her beautiful girls small lengha Bani beamed a wide and warm smile, the pride shone in her eyes , through wet eyes she asked them,

"Bache have you seen your naughty Dad any were."

"Mamma why are you calling Papa naughty again have you too been fighting again", said Atharva with a small frown which creased his fore head and made him look like his Dad,

"No beta just I haven't seen him since breakfast and he promised mamma something"

"Mamma, Papa told us to give you this", said Krishna holding a small white envelope and handed it to her stunned mother.

Getting up and seeing her small children mingle in to the crowd Bani frowned, puzzled at her husbands antics. Looking around the large hall way Bani saw Jigyasa showing off to the neighbour's,

"Yes, isn't the vase pretty, my bhaiya went to turkey recently he must of got it from their, he's always flying off for lots of business deals you see."

Suppressing a grin Bani walked off only to hear the small crowd around Jigyasa laughing, and Jigyasa storming off in a huff.

What's wrong with Jigyasa Bani asked an old woman, who was Dadi's yoga partner, "I simply said to her I liked her vase were did she get it from and she started telling me it was from Turkey, I laughed at her and told it couldn't be I bought the same from a local market I bought a pair and broke one could she tell me were she got that one from and she walked off in a huff glad to see the Diwali spirit still in Jigyasa HAHAHAHA".

Bani laughed and offered the woman a plate of samosas, "Thanks dear but I'm full do you have any ladoos."

Bani face went pink and she murmured no but she'll go and find out why, and again Bani Walia went in search of her absent husband.

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Do leave your comments 😃

(cant sign off as normal as its not myn 😆)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start! Jai has eaten the ladoos??😆

Continue soon!

Edited by bugs_bunny - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆
laddo walia where r u? pls come soon to bani walai is pehle she makes u laddo.. 😉

pls cotninue soon

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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What? Raaz? Ladoo chori kisne kiya? 🤣🤣🤣


Who has written this? Sivkai burka, jadoo ka ladka, chiknai ghora, shamne ake khara....🤣🤣....(What....this is a poem I read when I was in nursery! Just a few days ago ...😃😃😃)


It was great...really am laughing....

can't blame me, me is reading Heat & Gas portion of physics the whole day and now I'm a bit (read a lot) crazy...so me is doing my usual Pagal deeds...so no one please mind me....😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a hilarious beginning...

do let know the original writer her ff is very good...

we all would love it if she posts the next part soon...

thanks to u henna as well as to the original shy writer...

gr8 oart do continue soon.... as will be waiting for the thief to be caught.... by Lady Walia 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very Good start Dearies..... 👏 👏 👏 Pls continue soon............wanna find out where the ladoos disappeared........... 😆 ..............bani hope u find out as to who the ladoo chor is............i can understand ur plight Bani for i know how it feels when the ladoos disappear before the diwali pujan itself....... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That is cute... 😆 the case of the lost ladoos....to be followed by the case of the Pitela Pati (if there is a word like that) 😆 😆
Good start
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆

casae of the missing laddoos!!! 😆 😆

and i cant even laugh

cuz dad is sitting across from me!!!!!!!

and like i cant laugh!!

but that was funny! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG.. henna i like this ss.. who ever wrote this did a pretty good job.. i was cracking up.. hmm imagine bani being mad and jigyasa's antics.. not something new for us but alwayz cracks us up wen she gets dissed.. LMAO. plzz continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow gr8 job
please let us know who has written this as it is really fresh n very funny

Jai walia laddo chor ban gaya ab

i wonder whts in d envelope hmm another raaz

do continue soon
benazir

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