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Posted: 17 years ago
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bugs_bunny wrote:

Great start! Jai has eaten the ladoos??
Continue soon!
Thank you for your kind words.

davia389 wrote:

laddo walia where r u? pls come soon to bani walai is pehle she makes u laddo..

pls cotninue soon

davia

Thanks again and the mystery will be cleared up pretty soon.

the_rain wrote:

What? Raaz? Ladoo chori kisne kiya?


Who has written this? Sivkai burka, jadoo ka ladka, chiknai ghora, shamne ake khara........(What....this is a poem I read when I was in nursery! Just a few days ago ...)


It was great...really am laughing....

can't blame me, me is reading Heat & Gas portion of physics the whole day and now I'm a bit (read a lot) crazy...so me is doing my usual Pagal deeds...so no one please mind me....

WOW i feel honoured at such a sweet comment, thank you.


tam2 wrote:
that was a hilarious beginning...

do let know the original writer her ff is very good...

we all would love it if she posts the next part soon...

thanks to u henna as well as to the original shy writer...

gr8 oart do continue soon.... as will be waiting for the thief to be caught.... by Lady Walia

WOW that's so kind of you to say, next part coming up soon PROMISE.

brb137 wrote:
Very Good start Dearies..... Pls continue soon............wanna find out where the ladoos disappeared........... &a mp;a mp;n bsp; ..............bani hope u find out as to who the ladoo chor is............i can understand ur plight Bani for i know how it feels when the ladoos disappear before the diwali pujan itself.......
Same thing happend to me last year hence the inspiration and thanks for kind comment.

btkr wrote:
That is cute... the case of the lost ladoos....to be followed by the case of the Pitela Pati (if there is a word like that)
Good start
LOL i dont think Bani would hit her Mr Walia but thanks for sweet comment.


*Guli* wrote:

casae of the missing laddoos!!!

and i cant even laugh

cuz dad is sitting across from me!!!!!!!

and like i cant laugh!!

but that was funny!

OMG Guli you like this i'm a silent reader to your FF's I'm so happy that you like this, thanks for you awesome comment.

phool527 wrote:
OMG.. henna i like this ss.. who ever wrote this did a pretty good job.. i was cracking up.. hmm imagine bani being mad and jigyasa's antics.. not something new for us but alwayz cracks us up wen she gets dissed.. LMAO. plzz continue..
Thanks for your comments i tried to be liht hearted to much stress in KS lately.


Originally posted by: mohabbat_bs

wow gr8 job
please let us know who has written this as it is really fresh n very funny

Jai walia laddo chor ban gaya ab

i wonder whts in d envelope hmm another raaz

do continue soon
benazir

WOW thanks for praise, i'm really amazed you like so much, thank you.


Thanks for comments, i will try not to disappoint you in next chapter.

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Edited by Henna 786 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

"Shhhhhh Bache did you give your mamma the letter", said Mr Walia hiding behind a beautifully decorated screen about 6 feet tall and heavily carved with dragons , bending down he looked through the craved spy holes and saw his beautiful wife with that adorable expression she called angry walking around looking in every room and asking every one about her husbands whereabouts, chuckling to him self he kissed Atharva and Krishna on the cheek, and gave them each a ladoos as a reward.

Giggling to him self he carried on watching pausing only to chew another piece of ladoo, as always Bani had made them and they tasted delicious all her love all her time and energy had gone in to making them and Mr Walia wasn't going to let the guest's eat them, and besides it was Diwali to hell with his diabetes he was going to indulge today and let his wife worry about the consequences, glancing quickly at his watch he noticed it was getting time for his surprise and Bani hadn't even read the letter yet. While her back was turned Jai quickly slipped up the stairs and ran up to the terrace, "Every thing ready Tony, I don't want any slip ups,"
Looking around the terrace, the floor was a bed of roses and the chilled champagne he asked for ready, Bani's favourite
food warming nicely and the soloist violin player ready and waiting in the wings.

Mr Walia nodded at Tony extremely impressed with the arrangements and patted Tony on the back, "I always forget how good you are here, Tony", Mr Walia handed Tony his bonus for the year and Tony was surprised to see it was double from last year Mrs Walia's doing no doubt Jigyasa ma'am always kept a strict eye on things like that.

Glancing at his watch Mr Walia peered over the wall and looked at the front of his house the guest were all lining up to collect their cars and Jigyasa was waving them off all to enthusiastically, sighing Mr Walia hoped one day she would learn the value of family and not money specially with Diwali coming soon, peering closely he spotted Bani sitting on a bench in the front garden, far left, away from every one else, she was sitting on the same bench were she and he had spent many evening's watching the sun set and now watching their adorable children play, it was a special place, a place were he and Bani were most content with life.

Bani suddenly looked up at the terrace and Mr Walia bent down hiding behind the wall, peering over carefully till he saw her enter the house, giving some more instructions to Tony he slipped back downstairs and hid in a guest room, Bani had previously already looked in, changing out of his sherwani he picked up a smart suit he had hidden behind the door earlier, a black sharp suit and a crisp white shirt with a black tie , grabbing some gel he smooth his hair back and admired him self in the mirror, not bad but still he wondered some times if he truly deserved Bani, quickly dismissing the idea he peered out side the room seeing Walia mansion deserted he quietly made his way up stairs to see if everything was going according to plan.

In the Walia nursery Mrs Bani Walia was racking her brains, she must of got out of bed the wrong side today everything had gone wrong, firstly she woke early only to find Mr Walia's side of the bed empty and a strangely written note telling her he would have to leave early and that he would be back to help with the puja, also the caterers had been late and the pundit made extra demands on some items for the puja and her reliable Tony was no were to be seen, the last straw had been when she had gone in to the kitchen and found out that her hand made ladoos had vanished, Bani snapped out of her dream and continued patting her children to sleep but today they seemed restless and kept on giggling away, " What's the matter children why don't you go to sleep its late now."
"Mamma did you read the letter Pa…. I gave you", asked Krishna sweetly. Bani had almost forgotten it and picked It up from the children' night stand and re- read it again.
I love you with all I am
and all I'll ever be.
You are my moon, my sun and
stars,
my earth, my sky, my sea.
My love for you goes down and down
beneath both life and death,
so deep it must remain when I
have drawn my last faint breath.
Holding you for months and years
Will make Time disappear,
Will make your lips my lips, your face
my face, your tear my tear;
Will make us one strange personage
All intertwined in bliss,
Not man or woman, live or dead--
Just nothing--but a kiss!
Meet me on the terrace at midnight not a minute before.
LOVE YOU
You're Mr Jai Walia
XXXXXXXXXXX

To be continued ……..

Edited by Henna 786 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏

👏

its rocking.. it is realy roking..

pls cotninue soon.. see i am still smiling after reading it😃

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haila...so the culprit is revealed....JW eating Laddos....we knew it nah that he's gonna eat the laddoos and turn like laddo himself...😆😆


great part..cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 He is the culprit.. 😆 so cute!

Aww... that letter was so sweet! 😳 He has something planned for her? wondr what her reaction to the surprise is... continue soon! 😊
Edited by bugs_bunny - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht was very romantic

n d kids r also in with him good they reminded her to read d letter or poor Mr Jai Walia would b waitin 4 her

do continue soon
benazir
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wah yaar u sarted a new ff and u didnt even told me 😡
I'l reply later when i'll be cooler otherwise i'll mess the comment 😛

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Ok sorry to the humble writer whom i took for Henna 😆

Very good FF , i dont know why u were scared to post it ? 😕

Bani bond is searching her ladoos 😆

Jai took them 🤣 but he's sweet he doesnt want to share his lady's love with someone else 😳😳 well he gave some to his kids 😳

Aww jai organized such a sweet surprise for bani 😳

Please continue ASAP 😉

Humera. 😊

Edited by sonu4ever - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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arey Humi yeh mera nahin hain 😆 u'll see! 😆
sonu4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^ok then i'll make good comments 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
gr8 parts 👏
cont.sooon

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