FF: Dhaaga Pyaar Ka

Part 1

Starts off….

In a small village!!!!!….

Its 6 in the morning……….

Bani is cooking breakfast!!!……..

Afterwards

She is washing the clothes…….

Hand washing them!!

After she washes them….

She hangs them up on the clothes line……

Kiran comes out yelling for Ranveer!!!

Kiran: Kahaan mar gaya!!!!! Ranveer!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani: Ma…. Why are you yelling for Ranveer???

Kiran: Becuz ur brother is Lazy!!!!!!!!!! And he doesn't do anything!!!

Bani: Oh come on Ma!!!!!! Lighten up!!!!….

Kiran: What do you mean lighten up???….

I swear…. You are always behind ur brother!!!

I swear he's ur chamca!!!!

Bani: He's my brother!!!!!!

And I love him very much!!

Kiran: You two are inseparable!!!!!!!

Bani: Of course!!!!!

And then Ranveer comes…

Kiran grabs him by the ear….

Ranveer; Ouch!! MA… that's hurts!!!

Kiran: Where were you in the morning???

Ranveer: I was…..

Kiran: Come on!!

Bani: Ma…

Kiran: Don't you talk for him!!

You are always on his side…….

Bani: But..

Ranveer; Arre.. ma… I went..

Kiran: Where did you go????…

Ranveer: Arre I went for Di!!!!!!!!

Part 2

Kiran: where??

Ranveer: Uhh…. She wanted flowers..

So I went!!

Kiran: Flowers for what??……

Ranveer: That.. uhh..

Bani came

And she's like…

He brought me flowers

To take to the mandir!!!!!

Ranveer is like yeah there you go!

Bani is like

Let go!!!!

Poor thing!!

Kiran: What do u mean poor thing???

You brother sister are never going to learn!!!!!!

Kiran walks away talking…

And both Bani and Ranveer just laugh!!!

Ranveer; Thank you Di!!!

Bani: Hmm..so where did you go?

Ranveer; No where!!!!

Bani: Ur not going to tell me??

Ranveer: No!!

Bani: WHAT??

Ranveer laughs!!!!

And runs off!!!!

At 7..

Bani and Ranveer go to the mandir……

They are both prayin!!!

Ranveer is asking for Bani's happiness!!!!!

And that some raj kumar comes….

And just sweeps her off her feet!!!

He's saying that his Di deserves the best!!!!!!!!!!!

Becuz she's a loving and caring person!!!!

He's like just do this for me!!

Part 3

Bani was praying….

And all she wants is for her family's well being!!!!

She knows that…

They are a very low class!!!!

But she just wants this happiness to stay!!!

They are happy family!!!!….

And then..

Bani starts humming

And she starts singing the aarti at the temple…..

This was something that she always did!!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile……

There was a car going!!!!…..

It was Jai Walia's car…..

His masi was with him!!!

Jai: Masi.. do we really have to go to the temple???

You know that I don't believe in such things!!!

Masi is like

Well today is an important day!!!

Jai is like

No matter how hard I try….

Its just not going to work!!!!

Whenever there's a contract in hands

Masi makes him go the temple…….

But like Jai doesn't believe in god and going to the mandir!!

He's like its useless!!!!!!!

There's no point!!!!!

They arrive in the temple

Jai wants to stay

Masi is like come on!!!!….

Jai is like no!

Masi gives that look

So he takes off his shoes….

And he comes with her!!!

Bani is still singing the aarti!!!!

Part 4

Its such a beautiful voice……

And Jai is thinking

Who is singing this????

He sees her back

But her face isnt shown!!

Afterwards

She finishes….

And then

Everyone bows their heads and pray!

Jai wasn't!!!

He was just standing there!!!!

Bani and Ranveer finished praying……..

And then

They both turned around!!!!!….

Jai was looking at her

And he saw her face for the 1st time……….

She had such a sweet and innocent face!!!!….

She had passed him…

And a flower dropped from her thali……

As she walked by……..

Bani and Ranveer had left….

Jai bend down

And he picked up the flower……

And he just kept it with him!!!!!!

When Jai had gone to work….

It was a very lucky day for him!!!!

And everything was going good!!!!

It was a positive atmosphere!!!!

Wen the day had passed by…

Jai just sat down

And had a smile on his face

And then he looked in his coat pocket….

And he took out that flower…

That was dropped!!!!


The End! (Please comment!!!!! And let me know wat u guys think)

pls continue soon
that was a great start..

davia

Congrats on this ff🤗

Bani and Ranveer share a cute brother and sister relationship😆

Jai falls in love with bani at first sight😳

I don't beleive it...One ended and another FF pops up... 😆 Wow...Really interesting starting... 😃 Well done... 👏

Hi Guli

Wow Jai falling in love on first sight. Really interesting. So what will happen to our jodi
waiting to know

Bye

great part
pls cont soon
i love all ur fanfics