FF: Dhaaga Pyaar Ka - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
hey guli......................

u did it again................

awesome beginning...............

jai falling for bani already.......

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Part 5

For the next few days…

He had gone to the mandir…….

Everyday!!!

And he had always seen Bani there!!

And wen he saw her…

The day always went by fast…

And the days were just great!!!!!!!!!

He was like whoa!!!

The one day that she couldn't make it…

Jai was there

And he was looking for her

But she didn't come!!!!

But that day….

Things weren't getting done

And everything was just going wrong!!!!!!

Jai was in his khadoos mood….

And he was just getting mad!!!!!

But after a long and tiring day

He came home!!!!!

And he went into his room!!!!

And he changed his clothes

He wanted to be left alone!!

He still had that flower

That was dropped in the mandir.. the other day!!!!

And he saw it

And he was thinking

That he didn't see her….

Is that why……..

He's like no!!!

Its just my imagination!!!

But then he keeps thinking about her

Her angelic face….

Her beautiful voice….

He was smiling!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Part 6

Jai was thinking

He was def losing it!!!!

He's like

Its all my imagination!!!!!

But who ever she is……

He's just thinking about her!!!!

And he realizes..

He's thinking about her!!!!

In the house…..

Rano is there…

She's studying!!

She has a test!!!!!

She's always been a book worm!!!!!

She always gets an A in anything!!

She starts to have a panic attack…

If she gets anything below that!!!!

But Rano is known as the book worm in the family!!

Jigs was on the phone

And organizing a kitty party!!!!

She's single……

And that's all she does!!!……..

And her status in the society!!

She wants to be superior to all!!!!

And her best friend..

Is none other than Pia!!!

Them two always get together!!!

Pia likes Jai!!!!!

Jigs knows that

And she's talk to him about it..

But Jai doesn't want to marry her

He doesn't look at her in that way!!!!

But Pia never gives up anyway

And she keeps trying to get him!!

But he will never fall for her!!!….
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Part 7

In the morning….

Jai is awake!!!

And he tells Masi…

Lets go to the mandir…

Masi is like….

WHAT?????

You want to go!

Jai is like yeah!!

Masi is like

U okay?

I always have to force you

And today..

U want to go!!

Jai is like yeah!!!!

Masi is like okay lets go!!

They go!!

Bani is at home..

She is putting the clothes up !!

And she sees the time

She's late!!!!

She calls Ranveer

And tells him to hurry up

They have to go to the mandir!!

Ranveer: I am coming Di!!!!

Bani gets ready!!

And she gets her thali

And she goes with Ranveer

And they walk there!

Jai arrives there

And he gets down!!

They both go!!!

He looks at the time

And its 730!!

The aarti should start!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Part 8

Jai was looking

But there was no sign of Bani!!

She wasn't there today!!

Jai is like again??

He was getting restless over here….

And then

She finally came!!!!

She rung the bell…

Jai turned around

And there she was!!!

She was wearing this light colored salwar….

She looked really simple….

But yet…

She looked like a million bucks!!!!!

She passed Jai…….

She was about to faint!!!!

Wow!!!!!!!

She sung her aarti!!……

And then…

She finished

And everyone prayed!!

Masi told Jai

She will be back!!!!!

Jai saw her going around the temple!!!!

And he took the chance…………

And he stood right behind her…..

Ranveer: Di… I will be back!!!!!!….

He turned around

And went off!!!!!

Bani finished praying!!!

And she turned around

Wen she did…….

She looked up

And a set of brown eyes were looking straight at her!!!!!!!!!!


The End! (Please comment!)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
Awww Bani is lucky for Jai and since that day in the mandir he is only thinking of her 😳
Nice ff 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
beautiful parts
so bani is jai's lucky charm 😳
can't wait to see what happens tongiht 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
omg just read all of it and i thought it was mind blowing
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
just caught up and its sighhhhhhhhhhhhhh...so romantic!!! 😳 😳 Awwww. Jai fallen for Bani at the mandir ❤️..and now goes there daily to see his Devi! 😉
They have finally come face to face...continue soooooooooooooooonnnnnnnn!!! 😆

Great start to the ff! 👏 👏 U brain is full of interesting stories...how do u do it girl! 👏 👏
Tazoo 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
hey guli..............

great part..............

jai going to mandir just to see bani and masi must think that goes to pray ........masi u should monitor jai.........

pia will never leave jai alone..............gud that jai does not not give her a damn..............

update soon

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