The price of stolen emotion:Previews Pg67 - Page 5

just finished all three parts wonderful awesome cant wait to read more

JoJo:

I just caught up with all three chapters, amazing beginning...and even more amazing continuance. Love the story so far.

Great writing too!

Love,
-- SR

Hey
wonderful part 😉 i feel soo sorry for Bani Jai is being soooooooo mean 😕 i wonder what will he want in return of this favour.

Taj

Fab part di... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I edit my feedback. 😃

Good going...nervous emotions between the two going all over the radar...nicely written!!
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Dear jojo. I read all the parts you had written and am very happy in seeing JW being depcited in a ruthless manner. KS in real has totally destroyed his character.
But can't help but feel sorry for Bani for being distrusted by her husband who married her only out of lust not out of love. I can so imagine JW's devious mind already having cooked up what sort of payment he'd like from his separated wife. 😉 The one thing I'd like to request is, not to let Bani take all his bulls*it into stride and give back as good as she gets.

just caught up with the ff wow brilliant!!!!!

Note

The most excellent result of this FF so far is, "1350" of all the viewers of "TPOSE"' silent and none silent readers have actually enjoyed reading as well as the story itself.

I really appreciate those who left their feedback. I might not reply to you all individually but I do enjoy reading. Besides, it's really good to know your views on how the story is progressing at your end as well as what you have to say.

Coming to the point, I've received several P.M's, concerning Bani's situation in this FF. Thus, since the issue is down to the same answer, I thought why not I answer it once and for all.

Firstly, I believe in fair everything, treating people equally without favouritism. Hence, expect the same towards both the main characters in this FF.

Hence, this JW is blind from the real fact, so he actually seemed to know just the opposite. Therefore, he'll keep doing everything and anything to please himself and…

Well, do I have to finish it the rest when you already know?

The question is what happens when his retribution is over?

I haven't begun yet writing the next chapter, so I can't actually say when is due the next part. But once I'm available I shall start writing.

I'm quite enjoying myself writing this FF so far. Thought I wrote most of the detail of the last chapter in my kitchen, while at the same time I got shot of several questions, asking me what I was, I'm up to, as I seemed to have lost interest in every conversation. 😆

I can't help but think, what this JW is up to, and what Bani is going to do when he puts down his price in words.🤔 😆

Good Lord, what am I about to do with my angel.

God bless,

Jojo

hi Jojo !!

i just read chap 2 and 3 in one go !!
fantastic story

i just loved ur writin ,
the selection of words
the story plot and its progreesion
mind blowin characters

the whole JB scene dinner table or @ his place was so well written tht i can visulaise it 👏 👏 👏

This JW so ...... i would say cold-blooded and calculative
the char sketch u hav given for AD indicates tht he too is as manipulative as can be . I guess he is the one who created illusion tht bani is in love with him thts y JW bein so ..........

i hope for a clash of titan altough v know the results
😉 but i would b pleasure to read the revenge of an emotionless man lets c how he execute his plan of revenge on AD

thanks once again for such nice ff

Hi Jojo, just read part 3 and loved it. Can you please pm me the first two parts, I'm not managing to open the link. Thanx.
Somali