The price of stolen emotion:Previews Pg67 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great story
i love it !! 👏 👏 👏

ctn soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
Hey
great part 👏
i hope he does go to the wedding 😃

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Hi Jojo! 😊
Great part dear. Enjoyed reading it 😆 . JB's dillemas beautifully portrayed. So Bani doesn't live with that AD anymore and wants Jai to go with her to Rano's wedding as her husband 😕 . Wondering what is the mystery behind their seperation and AD's role as well. Please continue sooner 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Again, awesome part...waiting with bated breath for next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25

Again, super part di... 👏

Absolutely mind blowing ..... 😍

I'mm eager to read the next update.... please continue very soon. 😃

ashoo

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila haila jojo..main aagayi!!!!....loved it...totally great...for a second i thougth that nishikant had died and that bani did want jai to give rano away...but haila...i like this other plan much better... 😉 jai...being banis wedding date 😳 😳 😳 ...u never know what will happen...well...u know...we dont know...lol...ok...sorry...its still early for me...but haila...thanks for the PM yesterday...i ws so looking for it...jai had better say yes...or else ill drug hima nd drag him to the wedding...cant wait for next update
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fantastic update. I hope that he agrees to go and somehow comes to discover or even show a bit of his love for Bani at the wedding. Weddings do strange things to people.

I can't wait to see how he gets his revenge on AD for ruining his marriage.

Your character development of Bani and Jai is flawless.

Please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi
just read da ff n its gr8 👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dear Jojo

An excellent update!!! 👏 👏 👏 Loved the way you have developed Jai and Bani's character.

The sory is moving at an excellent pace now and is a pleasure to read 😊 , with all the ups and downs in the minds of the characters.

The way Jai and Bani reacts to each other when they see each other in the restaurant is too overwhelming for both of them. The feelings that are still present in each other's minds are too strong to be completely obliterated.

I can understand Bani's pain and Jai's anger. But the question that remains is whether Jai really loved Bani or whether she was just a lustful ardour for him? Hope to read another update soon.

Regards

Sangita

P.S.: I have taken a break from my job and am presently unemployed. But when I get a job, I will take you in. 😆😆😆
Edited by sangitadas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi di..

I was in rush when I read the last part, so I re-read again. It was really fantastic part, just like the first one.

I hope you update very soon. I can't wait to read the next parts. 😃

ashoo

Edited by sweetasha - 18 years ago

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