The price of stolen emotion:Previews Pg67 - Page 7

Hi Jojo!!😊

Thanks for another mindblowing part. Loved it to the bits. So finally they are in Toronto😊. This JW is yours seems to be khadoos who is unable to express his non-verbal feelings at all. Wondering when Bani is going to tell him the truth about AD. Please continue soon😃.

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Fabulous Jojo, simply awesome 👏 👏 👏

The way you have highlighted the difference in Jai and Bani's characteristics, their basic personae is mind boggling.

I must say I am glad to be reading this FF.

Great work Jo, please update soon. 😳

Hey Jojo,
I must congratulate you on the masterpiece you have written. I was just off to bed when I came across your fan fiction....and then started reading it. You had my eyes glued the moment they landed on the first word- yet unfortunatley for me, because I got so into reading your creative text I failed to realize that I had started at part three instead of one 😆 . Yet a congratulations is needed...because it was amazing.

I am now off to read part four, and then will be back with comments ( will read parts one and two later on...am just too into your storyline at the moment).

Overall, I would like to say that JW has some major issues that need to dealt with. I think Bani is the perfect woman for it, she understands the poor man really well- what a jealous idiot.

Bani, poor soul...can't help but feel for her. Life wasn't very fair to her when she gave her heart to JW? But love is true...and she will help him.

I get the feeling that what JW will ask for as his "payment" will be something B will want, yet be scared, to give.

Please do continue soon, really amazing. ( will post my comments of part one and two later...need to sleep, have a lot of work to do)

Best wishes and lots of love
Sweetu.

jaani...just read the update...and loved it...that kiss...haila... 😲...i was not expecting that...but still...great job with that...and i love the relationship that kiran and nishikant seem to have...'we dont have a dog' 😆 that was funny...what is up with jai...why is he so uncomfortable around warm and fuzzy people... what happned to the poor dude...loved that line bani gave...'making love vs. sexual marathons'...nice 👏 ...cant wait for next updated...hope it comes soon...ahem ahem...me so waiting 😉 ...hope i get to see soem HOT HOT paramedics... 😳 😳 😳
JAZ

Jojo, Fantastic part hun. Jai seems to be locked in a cage of his own making and Bani seems too battle weary to try to release him. I'm sure he's going to extract a heavy price. Looking forward to the next part.
Somali

Fabulous di....simply mind blowing..... 👏

you so portrayed their difference outstandingly. 😃

They're perfect much... she knows him better... 😳

NK's relationship was too good... "we dont have a dog"... 😆

I cant wait to read the next part... please continue very soon.

ashoo

Jojo, part 4 was 👏 My appluase says it all. Jai Walia it seems has built this huge wall around him through which no one can approach him. He has had a bitter life with divorced parents and had not received an iota of love from them. Can't help but feel sorry for his current state, though that does not excuse him for behaving like an ass*hole towards his wife. Just beacuse he cannot conjure up feelings to love her, does not mean that she is having an affair behind his back😡😡 Jai truely has a sick mind on that aspect🤢😡😡

Why can't Jai listen to the little tingling inside his head which tells him to look at Nishikant and Kiran's successful marriage. I think his jealousy and unjustified anger has made him blind to everything.

hey jojo
gr8 part 👏
cont. soon

Top-notch descriptgion of their emotions. Love it.
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My appreciation to those who left their comment, expressed their analysis and view. Your compliments were unmistakably extra, because I wasn't expecting any compliment whatsoever, but it feels so good to be complimented the way you all did. Cheers for that, ladies and the few gents who came across this mad FF.

Sangs,

I'm honoured and too humbled I could make you ask for an update.

Sheena,

You know, I thought about thousand times before I started this FF, for the reason that, I thought I wouldn't be able to tolerate the pain I'll be putting through my innocent angel. But then a thought occurred to me and voila! I found him perfect position, just the opposite site of their situation, as loner.

Smitra,

I'm pleased to find out my updates are something you look forward to hun. Truly, I'm speechless and at the same time feel proud to discover that part from you.

Thank you all once again, I'm really glad I could entertain you all. FF's entertained me a lot and still would do if and ever I could get time from my work as I used to do back of the days, when I used travel a lot concerning my work research. I used to read alot of FF's.

I'm still hopping for the rest of you silent readers will somehow come around express your views and opinions concerning this way out FF.

God bless,

Jojo