The price of stolen emotion:Previews Pg67 - Page 2

Jojo what a story. Amazing 👏 👏 👏

The concept is fresh and completely suits the mood. Its such a welcome relief to read this FF. I hope you update on a regular basis so that the element of continuity stays.

Awesome dear 😛

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Wow, that was written so perfectly! I am not sure what it was about the way you wrote it that made me feel the emotions of the chracters.

Now I really want to know what the favor was. I hope you continue soon! I look forward to the next update.

-Simmi

Simply mind blowing....di...!

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Soo good..the story and the way you written... I just loved it.... 😃

pleaz..continue very sooon.....😊

ashoo

Wow!!!!! That's all I can say...powerful story-telling...can't wait for more...

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Wonderful beginning that truly suits the mood. I have always hoped that the ruthless JW would some how return to KS and exact his revenge.

Intrigued as to why Bani needs a favour from JW. Looking forward to the next update.

great start Jojo dear, i just hope that JW shld gun down that AD soon 😉

please continue soon

swati

Vengeance is the word, for both JW and I, from ADbhooth. We're simply on the lookout for our equanimity. What AD did was and still is deplorable, so he'll have to pay the price.

This JW is unchangeable and determined to succeed his mission.

My appreciation to those who left their comment, if you enjoyed reading so did I, writing.

The question of when will I do the instalment?

I'm in the process of writing chapter two, so without me making any promises, I'm determined to finish it tonight, and hopefully it should be ready soon.

Jojo

hi jojo !!

fabulous story-plot 👏 👏

plz continue soon


ps: hav u written any other ff ??

Hey Jojo
great story line just loved reading it 😉

i wonder what Jai is gonna do to take his revenge from AD 😆 and what is the favour Bani is asking for hmmmm plz update soon 😃

Taj

I don't know whether if it was too long the update or I was too exhausted from my previous workload when I was writing.

Sangs, I do want to update on regular basis so that the element of continuity stays, but you will have hire me if I get fired. 😆

I want to send ADbhooth to where he came from.

Have a lovely ending weekend...

Happy reading chapter 2…!

Jojo