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mistletoe

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.

Somehow these lines reminded me of Bani's pain and anguish portrayed so beautifully in your story...

Hope we get to read the next part soon...and no, don't worry, I am not going to post rude PM's to you...I would prefer rude phone calls to the same!😉

Cheers,

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mad

@*mad*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

wow...... the way u wrote abt bani 👏

nw when will jai get o knw abt bani
dnt tell me tht doc is going to fall for her or something 😕

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Armana..

Loved the update... It was emotional and very wonderful.. 👏 👏 👏
I feel sad for Jai and Bani....

I love your Bani's Character... It is so real...so much emotions and dignity as well... 👏 👏 👏

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svayam

@svayam

Explorer

Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Love this ff. Has been following it for the start.

Plz. cont. soon.

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Ashwini

@aashyagh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Armana I started reading yr FF yesterday and completed all the parts today! The emotions and pain u hv penned makes me get involved it so easily and can feel the pain what Jai and Bani are going thru! Eagerly waiting for yr next part

And as Sangs said " Hope they don't become lovers though. Don't get me worng here. It's not that I Don't want Bani to settle down. I am so sick of watchign every relation change, courtesy Maayi, that any change in relationship now gets on my nerves", hope to see Raghav as Bani's friend and Roshni as Jai's friend and not a partner. I think that the person who gives more pain only can give u more love and happiness in life and not a 3rd person!

Edited by aashyagh - 18 years ago

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pooja1_76

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Hi Aramana,

you had updated 3 parts while i was gone on vacation. Excellent.
As far as Jai still hasn't realised that Bani & Angel are same person.

why men only think with their brain.
but again if they think with heart it will be so bad.....that was a joke.

please continue soon.

pooja