The Foreign Self: Part XX note: pg 11 - Page 4

helllllo
u k???? 😊
hope u are 😊

Hi

Hope you update this ff when you get chance.

Dear exhauted-with-my-erractic-writing-habits-readers,

part XIX is up. the remaining parts should follow quickly. as has been established by now, i tend to find the time and inspiration to write in spurts where i end up putting up a few parts rather quickly before disappearing. but this time, TFS will actually be wrapped in the next few parts, which shall be done before i disappear for good.

thank you for the patient interest in TFS. Much appreciated.

Love,
Armana

OMG Yay!! me reading now!

Ok what?? Disappear for Good?? No Armana!! You are too good of a writer to leave us!

*edited*

Me still not happy about you leaving... You are one of the most talented writers of this forum and although KS is a shi*hole those days, its something else that keeps us here.

Fabulously written part, Armana. I love how Masi conspires to bring out those feelings in Jai. It was a good shock for him that Bani nearly died. I am sure that stayed with him from the time he heard it, through the months that past.- hence his need to check up on her once in Delhi.

Its good to see JW getting to be jealous. He deserves to be, esp after what he put Bani through. I love how Rey calls her 'Bunny'. Its SO adorable. You have done such a wonderful job with this ff, that when it ends and you leave (and I hope you dont), I will silently pray that you come back to the forum and grace us with your God Given talent. You have done a marvelous job so far with it, and I know you will continue to do so.

saved! 😃 😃 You CANT leave for goood!!!

Great part... Massi and Jigs trying to help Jai out..👍🏼

Jai getting the wrong idea about them..😕 i think so...

Contnue soon!

Wow finally you updated. Was waiting for this for a long time.

Poor Bani is suffering. JAi is too stuburn to accept that he misses Bani. I wish he would have met Bani at the farmhouse. BUt may be him getting jealous is good. MAy be that will tell him what Bani means to him.

He is so thick headed that he doesn't get why Bani needs to get away.

BTW please don't leave for good. Want to read more of your ffs. I love them all.

Hi Armana,

Perfect update.

Please tell me you are not leaving for good, you're writing inspires me.

Jai was so jealous of the doctor but has no idea what Bani may feel when she see's him in the papers with Roshini.

I hope Jai and Bani meet soon, and Jai realises what he has lost with his attitude - his angel.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Armana Dear.... You are Back.... 👏
It was fantastic update... can't wait for next parts.. 👏 👏 👏

Armana,
Good to see you are back and updated. But please don't leave us for good. Hope you would reconsider you decision.

Awesome part. Loved how you penned down Jai-Bani's feelings, emotions and inner turmoil. Felt really bad for Bani......poor thing. Jai is really a duffer but loved how he reacted after hearing from massi that Bani nearly died. Glad to see how massi and Roshni teamed up to see Jai's feelings towards Bani 👍🏼 👏 . A jealous pig-headed Jai.... wondering how Jai is gonna find out about his angel. Please do continue. Thanks.
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Hey Armana!!
Good to see you back!! 😊 😊 😊
What can I say about this update, it was fantastic, excellent. I feel for Bani, poor her even her pain, hurt is reflecting on her paintings. Jai such a **** 😡 😡
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Continue soon