The Foreign Self: Part XX note: pg 11 - Page 2

Great part Armana and a treat to read.

I hope I am not mistaken, but I am worried about Jai's predicament. Is he so angry that he cannot even try to find out anything about her?

But I am glad that Bani and Raghav has become good friends with Rehan thrown in for good company. Hope they don't become lovers though. Don't get me worng here. It's not that I Don't want Bani to settle down. I am so sick of watchign every relation change, courtesy Maayi, that any change in relationship now gets on my nerves.

Hope you update soon.

Hi Armana!

Thanks for another great part. Bani's distress, feelings and torment beautifully penned. Felt bad for Bani when she did hurt herself instinctively. Hope Rey and Raghav as a friend would bring ray of hope in Bani's life. Wondering if Jai would try to find out the truth at all. Liked this Roshni of yours. I believe Roshni would try to collect the info about Bani's whereabouts. Can't wait for the next part from you soon.
It was a wonderful treat to read your FF.
👏

Ok yaar I just love this FF but the suspence is killing me let jai know that bani is his Angel.......

I hope bani pregnant cause that would be a nice twist....

Will jai and bani be seeing one another some time soon 😭

hi armana
gr8 part 👏
cont. soon

Hi armana,

Once again fantabolous. I became so emotional reading it that i feel bani and jai are real. Please in the next part let jai realize that bani is his angel and soulmate.

ss

Fantastic part. Waiting to know what role Masi is going to play here. Now that Rehan calls Bani as Bunny and Jai's angel was also called Bunny, I wonder if there is any connection..

Waiting for the part.

Lovely part Armana....I wept for Bani unashamedly. I'm surprised at Jai though...is he really so blind, not to the fact that Bani is his angel, but to her own essential goodness and love? What makes him so bitter and judgemental? Also the way he's idolised "his angel" is a bit scary..in his mind she's perfect, but though idols can appear to be perfect, they invariably have feet of clay. I'm afraid he has a lot of growing up to do...

Great part Armana.

I have cried three parts in a row, now time for some feel good factor in th next part please. I really liked the way you have introduced and developed Raghav's part. He is not an over powering character but yet manages to leave an imprint.The best thing I loved about this character is that he understood Bani's pain with compassion and his own experience of loss. He is not asking her to get rid of Jai's memory but slowly moving on and that life goes on and people must find reasons to live.

I asked why Jai stacked Bani's letter with his angel's, you mentioned it too and I hope to find an answer to it soon. Though I guess- I, like everyone else knows it.

The wonderful section of this part was Bani and Jai both remebering each other, both narrated their stories to their newly discovered friend, they found friends and confidante where it was least expected, they found someone to share their pain with


Update soon

Hey Armana

that was just amazing,you have penned down the pain and despair of both Jai and Bani so well.too good.the introducation of Rahagav was fabalous,loved how he understood Bani's pain.both of them are finding friends in people they never excepted to.fabalous update.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Thankee for the long part...

The part that touched me too was how Bani felt why does the world go on like normal when my heart is breaking here.....how is there no other reflection of my pain...so glad she finds another lonely soul Raghav...
J in pain too but too arrogant/ashamed to approach her? Can u elaborate a bit more on his feelings? Little Rehan is adorable...
👏