The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8

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Nazneen

@chickster

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Armana,

A great FF - I was a slient reader, but had to comment after your hiatus. Both parts were great and well written. At the moment I would strangle jai if I could 😡

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scifichick

@scifichick

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Armana,

Wonderful update. Jai is so in love that he has become irrational believing that witch Pia. I'm glad that although Jai is behaving like a first class a**, Bani refuses to give up their relationship without a fight.

Hopefully Jai will listen to what she has to say.

Please continue soon.

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Nabila

@Tomiko

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Hey Armana; I'm so glad that you're okay and of course that you've continued TFS!😳

Read XVII-A and was absaloutely shocked at Jai's behaviour.......the first question that came to mind was 'Huh?'😕.......Went back to see if I'd missed anything and it was then that this part made a lot more sense😆....

I love how you've sketched out Pia's character👏.....done so wonderfully well that I can't help but strangle her!....

And then there's Jai.......Gosh; I understand what he's going through but seriously, throwing Bani out of the house without even listening to her?

Though I do love Bani's determination and needless to say; I'm very excited to see how you'll continue the story from here!

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

all of you, thank you so much for your wonerful commenmts/responses and the warmth of your welcome back.
made my day and made me hurry on to begin writing the next part!
so on monday you should have the next part as well:)

thanks and a big Hug to all of you!

Armana

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suwas

@suwas

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Thats wonderful.

Loved the part. I hope Bani gets a chance to speak out. Duffer Jai doesn't force her to go without hearing her out.

That Pia 😡 😡. BUt Bani is to be blamed too. She should have come out clean with Jai about her past. At least her realtion with Rumaan & her being the famous painter Saraswati. Jai doesn't really know her past 7 that made him jump to wrong conclusions.

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Heya,
Jai is such an a**! I feel so sorry for Bani, she really loves him-it breaks my heart !

Jai shouldn't have jumped to conclusions, it will be his worst enemy now.
I will be waiting for monday!

Armana, that was a beautifully written update! Your creative talent knows no bounds!
Best wishes and love
S. 😉

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

hey armana,
gr8 part 👏
hope bani gets a chance to talk wth jai.....
cont. soon

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#28

Armana,

awesomely written, loved it,
I hope everything is going to be alright

continue soon 😊

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Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#29

Thank you Armana for continuing the FF again. 😊

I missed this FF so much.

Its natural for Jai to feel cheated but why does the Pias of the world always win?

Poor Bani she is always at the receiving end due to Pia. How much more will she suffer? 😭

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priyanka

@mahimn

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#30

I will not say Lovely or a great part( although I must confess that it was). I am just, really upset with JW (damn you!!!!!!!! JW) . Let us see if the moron discovers a little brain and listens to Bani's side of the story.

Edited by mahimn - 18 years ago

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