The Foreign Self: Part XVII-C 16/8

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kiranc

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Hi Armana,

I am new to the forum and was reading some the FF's and this was one of them. I should say your's was one the best one's that I read. And this part was the best part in this FF which brought out the emotions so well that words can't describe. Please do continue soon.

Kiran

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Jonaki

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Hey Armana,

Have been eagerly waiting these last few months till you came back! Wonderful gift to get two parts in such quick succession!! And what wonderful parts. I love the strong, knows her own mind Bani you've portrayed, and I assume sooner or later he's going to find out that she's his "Bunny". Can't wait to read the next parts. Have to say I sympathise a tad with Jai - though I do think he's an MCP as well!!!

Great having you back though! (PS - I totally agree with what you said about not being obliged - I don't understand the attitude of people who feel FF writers "owe" the readers. Its our good fortune that writers choose to share their thoughts in the form of FFs and give us so much pleasure).

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amisha

@amiee

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

wonderful part armana bani and jai's emotions are portrayed very well pls cont soon..........

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Guess Jai still hasn't learn to trust again. Bani once again feeling the brunt of his anger. But give her credit that this time she is not going away without fighting.

"I love to see a young girl go out and grab the world by the lapels. Life's a bitch. You've got to go out and kick ass." Maya Angelou

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Sujata

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Hi Armana,

That was completley amazing...what a chapter, left me hungry for more... 😊 I hope we get to read the next chapter soon....

This quote is sooooo true

"I love to see a young girl go out and grab the world by the lapels. Life's a bitch. You've got to go out and kick ass." Maya Angelou

Can't wait to see Bani kicking some ass... 😊

Garf

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Hey Armana,
great parts you have going here. i love them!
Im hating Jai so much right now! i can't believe that he is running away from Problems and i can't believe he is not giving Bani a chance. i hope he realize his folies before it is too late!
anyways i can't wait for the next part to come
plz continue soon
rooj

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Somali Mitra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Dear Armana, Thank you for the update. Hoping that Jai and Bani will find their way back to each other, That both hold on to their faith.
Somali

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btkr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

God, what depths will a jealous man sink to? Jai's total lack of knowledge about her past, paired with Roshni's wonderful contributions, and his own deep love for Bani are clouding his judgment and driving him crazy....
Lovely updates...
👏 👏 👏

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preet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

Hey Armana,I am so glad to see you back 😊

that was just intense,it was beautifully written.Jai actually bought what Pia said,I really hope he hears Bani out.you have protrayed the intensity and feelings and emotions of both of them so well.very well written.looking forward to the next part.

preet 😳

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Perveen

@perveen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

Welcome back u made us wait for so long armana 😭 😭 😭

Any chance jai finding out that he was bani first love and that she truely loves him.... 😭 😭 😭

And then walk out of his life before clearing all the misunderstanding jai has regarding bani.... 😕 😕 😕

Its obout time jai found out the truth what say 😊 😊 😊

And that pia is one mean witch 😡

PLEASE CONT SOON WILL BE WAITING

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