FF: Rain Maker (Epi & A/N - Pg 82) - Page 56

Originally posted by: the_rain

Twikie ....hm, it was a bit sad and disturbing....was trying to divert you guys' attention...😛


hehe...😉


So, you want me to slow down with the updates...no problem, but I'll forward the others to you if they bother me for updates...😆😆 ...Oh no..This is bad...What did I say...?😕 'Forward the others'! That is sad...Cos I am in no condition to get gaalis from IFians...I know what they're like...😆


Hmm, I'm trying to clear up the messes I've created so far...😉......continue soon? I thought you were tired of fast updates.....😆😆😉...Lol...Ahem...Yeah...I did say that...😳 But you know what? I changed my mind! Tadaaa...Now come on...!!😃😆 I think I'll take a break...😃 Oh man...What have I done...IFians...This is NOT my fault...😉😆

Originally posted by: ree_views

Hi Dear...

Excellent Job. Really you put the situations so beautifully and wonderfully. The pain and realisation of Jay, Bani's indifference despite the knowledge, Pia's change in behavior due to a single incident in her teenage and Pushkar's feelings...all tied in one thread. How life changes with just one incident......


Hmm, thanks ..😊...I thought that Bani's indifference will be the right thing to show....I would've done injustice to their friendship if Bani was bothered about this when her friend is fighting with the dead.....😊


I really really want Pri and Jay to have a heart-to-heart talk even if it hurts Jay, Bani, Pri and Pushkar all, after her recovery. This is not for a stable JB relationship but for all...sometimes something is better not said but sometimes the same thing is better said...


Ree, you don't know how relieved I am. I was planning for such a scene and was worried about the reader's reaction....now at least I've one person to support me..😛...cause, again it would be injustice to Jai and Pri, even for Bani and puskar if they move on without making everything clear....I loved your last line....sometimes something is better not said but sometimes the same thing is better said....



you are making me love Pri and Bani more and more.... That means a lot to me dear, thanks..😊