Asha Ki Kiran (2) Last part pg 50 07/15

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Sheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Can't wait for Bani to meet Jai's family, it was a great part, Kripa!! Keep it up!

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swati

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

great parts kripa, i can hear wedding bells so when is the wedding.

please continue soon

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pooks

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

That was really sweet. The surprise that the family got on Jai declaring that he had brought their Bahu home was mind-blowing. 👏 And the love Bani got from Massi and Dadi so filled up the vaccum in her heart. Thei nteraction b/w Anu and her Mami were the best and haila...Anu tune apni Mami ko kaisi baat boldi..bechari was blushin to the roots 😳

Cannot wait for the wedding now.

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preet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

Hey Kripa,hope you had great weekend. 😃

fabalous update,totally loved it.there first meeting was written beautifully.to nice to see the whole family loving Bani,too cute.Anu is a sweetheart.I can hear wedding bells.will be eagerly waiting for the next part.I was wondering when u update can u please put the page no there.thanx. 😊

preet 😳

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Rupal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

awesome update......
continue soon 👏

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bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

awesome updates! 👏 👏 just caught up! i love having so many parts to read in one go!
loved how anu blackmailed adi!! 😛 hahah that was so funny and cute! and bani got the job in Jai's office! nice! 😉
that was a really cute mothers day present and am so glad that everyone likes bani! even jigyasa! 😛
now i cant wait for their marriage and when bani's family find out!! 😆 😆
i hope you find someone nice for kunal aswell! 😉

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Pooja

@kripa0521

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Thanks everyone for the comments, i hope you'll enjoy this one too! thanks for reading guys 😳
Part 53
Bani went down along with Massi where she found Jai sitting with Adi, Jigs, Anu, Dadi and two other gyus she had not met yet though she knew who they were.
Jigs: Massi kitne der kardi apne, Bhabhi aye aaur in dono se milo; Anu se toh milchuki ho right?
Bani looked at her hmm; well this is Ranveer
They smiled at each other
Ranveer: Welcome to the family Mami
Jigs: and this is Sahil
Anu: Mom intro toh theek se dijeay; kher meh karwa deti hoon Mami yeh hai humare ghar ka private joker
Jai laughed giving her high five
Sahil: aaur Mami yeh hai iss ghar ki tufan mel coming close to Bani 'aaur Mamaji ki sabse bari chamchi'
Jai: don't worry baby he's just jealous.
Bani her eyebrows up she couldn't help but laugh seeing all this; Jai felt a pang of jealousy seeing Sahil go so near her; (aww poor baby) he hadn't been able to go so close to her for like an hour, and knowing she was right there made it all so worst for him to see her and not be able to hold her.
Bani felt him staring at her, her skin burned especially knowing everyone was right there, aaur yeh Jai bhi na.
Dadi: chalo beta nashta lag chukka hai
Sahil: Dadi nashte se kya hoga seedhe lunch he karte hain na
Ranveer: Dadi Sahil ne pehle baar akalmandi ki baat ki hai, lets do this and why don't we all go out after eating.
Dadi: haan film dekhne chalen?
Adi: kya Ma abhi kal hi toh dekhi thi film; bahar jana hai toh ghum ke ate hain kahin
Anu: toh kahan jayen Dad, lets go shopping
Ranveer: yaar not shopping, not with you around, Mami you never want to go shopping with this one here, she can drive anyone even the biggest shophollic insane
Jai: oh no you don't know about her than, pointing at Bani
Ranveer: Mami you too
Bani: not really
Jai: ya right, oh what was that in Mauritius that Kunal was telling me
Bani nudged him to stop
Jai not listening 'and in London how long were we at the Piccadilly Circus?
Anu: you went to the Piccadilly Circus with Mamaji, when where was I why didn't you take me with you? Hang on
Jai and Bani came back from their little world; Jai was like oh no 'what have I said' while Bani frowned at him.
Jigs: Anu kyun peeche pari hai Jai bhaiya keh
Adi: haan aur kya
Anu: mamaji that's so not cool and now you owe me two trips (remember one from when he was going to Mauritius and she wanted to go but she had exams and Jai promised her next time he'll take her along)
Jai: ya, ya I remember
Just them Massi came in 'beeji maine apko bheja ki bacchon ko bula lo aaur aap bhi yahin ruk gayin; kya baat hai'
Dadi: Billo yehi decide karne ki koshish kar rahe thee ki khane ke baad kahan ghumne jayen per baat kahin aaur hi paunch gayi kyun Jai
Massi: kya hua
Jai: kuch nahi Massi, aise he
Sahil: baat toh phir wahin rahi na kya kiya jaye?
Anu: Mami aap batayeh
Bani: mein, mein kya kahon jo tum chaho
Jigs: lets just stay at home, aaur sham ko koi film he dekhlete hain.
Dadi: lo mein bhi toh yahi keh rahi thi
Adi: looks like we'll be watching a movie then
Massi: accha aab toh chalo khana thanda ho chukka hoga baton mein tum logon neh barah baja liye, aab utho meh dubara garam kardeti hoon
Bani: Massi meh bhi ati hoon apke saath
Jigs: tum baito meh karwadeti hoon
Bani: meh bhi chalti hoon
Dadi: chal tub hi chal
They had a good brunch, everyone was quite full by the time they were done eating.
Sahil: bahut kha liya yaar, rubbing his tummy
Anu: toh kisne kaha tha itna khane ko petu
Sahil: don't talk to me
Anu: who wants to
Sahil: just go
Anu: why don't you
Ranveer: bas karo tum dono thakte nahi jub dekho shuru ho jate ho
Bani felt a pang of hurt in her heart seeing how close this family was, the way they all cared for eachother, despite that they constantly fought with one another there was just so much love in the air. How she wished she had this kind of family when she was growing up, she sighed.
Jai noticed Bani was lost in her own little world, he had a slight idea of what was going on with her, but felt content knowing that atleast now she will never feel the absence of a family.
Jai: Bani come let me show you around the house
Bani noticing no one was looking, held his hand and walked with him
Jai showed her his study first it was furnished with Brazilian Rosewood a huge desk dominated the room adorned with a silver laptop and a black leather chair behind it. Files stacked neatly around it, there were shelves with collections of books from all over the world he had quite a unique collection.
Jai: You can take any of them whenever you want
Bani: sure
Jai: do you need to ask?
Bani: no but still
Jai: Bani whatever is my is your's too
Bani put her head on him he stroked her hair.
Jai: and now there is one more part of the house left ready to see your room
Her cheeks flushed 'Jai' and hid her face, 'ab chalo'
Bani: neeche sub wait kar rahe honge chalo
Jai: I don't think so
Bani: Jai baad meh dekh lungi
Jai: nope now
Bani started to walk but Jai was quicker bending down he lifted her up like a feather in his arms 'wohh Jai put me down'
Jai ignoring her plea made it outside and into his room which was a few feet away 'Jai koi dekh lega, neeche utaro please' but Jai had none of it he opened the door to his room with a kick and put her down on her feet. She retreated seeing the granduer of that one room, it was huge… the bed covered one fourth of room, the wall across was adorned with a 57 inch plasma, there was a waterfall in the left corner by the door to the porch. She looked around, her eyes came to rest when they met with his.
Jai: pasand aya?
Bani: its beautiful she saw a pic on the side table she walked over and lifted it up
Jai came behind her 'Ma aur Dad'
Jai: Ma apki bahu
Bani: tum Ma Dad ko bahut miss karte ho na
Jai: hmm
Bani: meh samajhti hoon unki kami kitni khalti hogi na
Jai: haan per Massi neh kabhi unki kami mehsoos nahi hone de
Bani: Massi sachme bahut achi hain, so caring
Jai: woh toh hai, so what did you guys talk about?
Bani: a lot of things, sitting down on the edge of the bed
Jai: like
Bani: well, she asked me how we met
Jai: and you said?
Bani: just ki we met in Mauritius aaur tum mujhse takraye thee in the hotel
Jai: excuse me you bumped into me
Bani: you did
Jai: Bani I was going out you were the one coming in without looking, woh toh accha hua ki I saw you warna pata nahi kitne zor se girti tum
Bani: I don't think so
Jai: you sure he slightly pushed her back leaning on her just a tad bit
Bani: Jai it was you that walked in on me
Jai his vocie dimming 'you did'
Bani 'no you' by now she was laying down completely on the bed, Jai nuzzeled her neck 'hmmhmm' kissing it his mouth lingered on the column of her throat.
Her hands moved through his thick hair, he was torturing her, she pulled on his hair a little causing his lips to move up to her face, he kissed her cheek, her other cheek, her nose, she flinched, then her eyes, she was dying he was enjoying tormenting her he kissed her on the corner of the mouth, 'Jaii' he couldn't take it and pushed his lips on hers satisfing her thirst and his. She melted in that kiss, his mouth was warm on hers she moaned, his kiss intensified with her reactions. Needing air he released her lips which looked slightly bruised, he rested his head on her chest, her hands circled his back they laid there together enjoying being with each other.
Downstairs everyone was wondering where these two had disappeared
Jigs: Adi tumne Jai bhaiya ko kahin dekha
Adi: Bani kahan hai?
Jigs: woh bhi nahi dikh rahi
Adi smiled knowingly : matlab dono saath meh hain, ajayenge
Jigs: nahi film shuru karne lage hain bacche
Adi: wahan bhi film hi chal rahe hogi
Massi: dekh toh jake kafi der ho gayi dono pata nahi kaha hain
Adi ek minute abhi dekhta hoon, he dialed Jai's cell
Jai who was enjoying where he was cursed hearing his cell ring loudly, reluctantly he left the warmth of her embrace and answered.
Jai: haan Adi
Adi: Jai kahan ho tum dono, neeche sab pooch rahe hain
Jai: irritated, I was showing her around we'll be down soon and hung up.
Bani got up, Jai looked at her and fixed her saari 'sub neeche wait kar rahe hain'
Bani: hmm, she felt shy very shy not that he hadn't kissed her before but this was different being there with him in his house in his room brought color to her cheeks.
Jai kissed her on the forehead as she lowered her eyes
'why don't you go freshen up, the bathroom is that side' Jai
'hmm' Bani
She walked past him to the bathroom to freshen up while Jai fixed his hair.

To be continued...
Kripa

Edited by kripa0521 - 18 years ago

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

me first😆

Hi Kripa!!!!!!!!
Loved it, love ur jani, they are shoooooooooo lovely😳😳😳, lovely bedroom scene 😛😳😳

yaar yeh fone kitna disturb karta hai😡😡 can't leave dem alone😡😛

continue shoon😃😃😛

Edited by siumi - 18 years ago

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

Oh wow!!! awww wat a cute part!!!! 😳 loved it!!!!!!!! and in the bedroom

not just yet! ya'll have to wait for that!!!!!!!!..... too bad u guys had to go down!!

awesome! loving it!!! plz cont soon!

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Jazmin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

haila...kripa...i thihk i may have to ban guli from this ff too...its getting hot in here...the kissing...buli...no more ff for you... 😉 ...lol...great update hun...loved it...yeh jai bhi naa...and adi bhi kuch kaam nahin hai...lol...
JAZ

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