Asha Ki Kiran (2) Last part pg 50 07/15 - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey kripa....................
awesome update
was waiting for it but did not want it to end so soon because wanted to know wat was the raaz.........
neways the ending was gud and the name Sapna is so cute.............................
hope u start one soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Kripa,
Awesome updates.
loved it...plz don't end it here try to continue
we still want to know the raaz
never the less ending was beautiful...sweet little baby girl...their Sapna...Beautiful.
hope u cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
great ending!! 👏 👏 loved the name sapna! 😊
it was so cute the way jai took care of her!! i hope u dedcide to continue this FF soon! 😃 i really want to know what the raaz is! 😉

if not this one -- then i hope u start a new one soon!

really loved this FF.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr88 ending
bueatifully written
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Kripa! 😊

Beautiful ending to a wonderful ff 👏 ....Sapna is a very nice name......hope you would come up with another ff very soon 😆

P.S. If you can please try to continue with this one too 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kripa, wonderful ending, even though I was looking forward to finding out why Bani's mum was so cold towards her. How you will think of creating a sequel to the ff.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Kripa

that was just fabalous.the ending was wonderful and very touching.the love of Jai and Bani was protrayed very well.I truly enjoyed reading your ff,it was very well written.too good.I hope you do write more in the future.will be lookin forward to them. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow....nice ending kripa...but wht abt bani's mom
she never learned her lesson n wht abt pia

anyway this was a very nice FF
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG Kripa....i am just catching up on all the ffs and came to this...haila...ur ended it!!! 😭 Ab kya comment karoon...i'm sad!!!! I loved this ff...i wanted it to continue....i'm sad...... 😭 need a hugggggggggg!!!!! 😔 😔 😔

Was a lovely part though 👏 👏 👏 ...Bani and Jai return home after months of being away and Bani is pregnant...awwww....Jai really took good care of her. 😳

And when the baby was born...that was so touching...the named her Sapna...Jais little Sapna such a perfect name! 😊

But i am stillllll sad khatam kyun kar diya! 😔 Where will i get such a mushy read now!!!

U better start writing a new one now...i demand a restart of this ff 😡 ...or a new romantic one 😉 😉 ...ur too good in that department better than me! 😃 😃

Tazo!

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