Asha Ki Kiran (2) Last part pg 50 07/15 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Oh man! wat a part!!!

and anu didnt get to see her!!!

oh well....

cant wait for the meeting!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: siumi

hi kripa congrats yaar

this 4 u kripa thanks hun 4m minu

hey i'm 1st

awesome update as always

well anu finally didn't got 2 bani first, poor girl I know but shez got Jai
bani is such good awesome daughter, even when she is in mumbai she gifted her so called mother yellow roses, she is d best this is 4 her, love u bani

now now kunal u called jai monkey , i h8t u hehehe

1rt meeting with walia parivaar, hmmm.. bani good luck

kripa continue soon coming up soon

Originally posted by: Taz234

saving!! Will be waiting!

Originally posted by: MusicIsDivine!

Bahut Khoob, Kripa!
The anticipation and tension is building not for long - hope Bani is welcomed by all in WM. I hope so too
Thanks for all your lovely and quick updates thanks hun.

Originally posted by: secretangel

great part
cant wait for the next update thanks hun




naima

Originally posted by: melonie

Finally got the chance to read and reply , that was a great update , Kunal called Jai a monkey , so sad , Hope every thing turns out good for Bani , Pls cont soon thanks hun

Originally posted by: bani_jai=love

cant believe bani still sent flowers to her so called "mother"
anywayz loved it plzzzz update soon! Thanks hun

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Kripa .........congrats on your 50th part yaar ..thanks.......thanks for updating such a wonderful part ......loved the convo between Kunal and Bani.......so finally she got ready to go to meet Jai's family......hope meeting would go well.......please continue soon coming up soon

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Kripa--Congrats on completing 50 parts thanks hun.

wonderful update,just loved it.Anu is so cute and Kunal is a sweetheart he sure is.I hope bani's mom learns something now I know .bechara bani she's all nervous,cant wait for the meeting so excited.looking forward to the next part thanks hun.

Originally posted by: saaania

congratz for the 50 part !!! u deserve it thanks hun... it was awesome.. finally she's gonna meet the family..plz post the next one soo...waiting impatiently!!!!loll


thxx
sania

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Oh man! wat a part!!thanks hun!

and anu didnt get to see her!!! How could she Jai wanted her to meet Massi first cant refuse Jai can I J

oh well....

cant wait for the meeting coming up!

Kripa

Edited by kripa0521 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Weekend treat...thanks for reading everyone!
Part 51
He hit the brakes pulling inside the gate, he rushed towards the elevator pressing the button the door closed his heart was racing as it moved up the floors finally stopping at the 10th floor, running his hand over his hair he walked upto her door and rung the bell.
Hearing the bell Bani hurried and opened the door , Jai stood dooling at the sight before him; Bani stood there wearing ; seeing her like that hot blood rushed through his veins; he stood there lost in her beauty, she looked like an angel draped in a saree; he was seeing her in a saree for the first time since she had come, 'you look great'
Bani smiled timidly, andar toh ayo
Jai slid his hand behind her back coming in with her, 'so ready for the day'
Taking a deep breath, 'I guess'
Jai: gently massaged her shoulders touching her sensitive skin which was not exposed a bit due to the cut of the blouse, she inhaled deeply feeling the magic his hands were creating within her.
Bani: meh theek hoon Jai
Jai: sure, I can do this all day I don't have a problem winking at her
Bani: bhaiya was right you're a monkey
Jai: WHAT
Bani chuckled 'hmm'
Jai though was happy seeing her like this wanted to tease her 'so kya kha uss saale neh?'
Bani made a face 'don't say that not yet atleast' playfully
Jai squeezed her hand 'soon sweetheart very soon'
Bani: hmm, Jai tum kuch loge?
Jai looking at his watch 'I guess coffee will do'
Bani: abhi layi
At the Walia House
Massi was looking for Jai, she had been to his room and searched for him but he was not found anywhere, tired she sat down on the sofa.
Dadi: kya hua Billo
Massi: kuch nahi beeji pata nahi Jai subah subah kahan chala gaya, milke bhi nahi gaya
Dadi: tu chinta mat kar ata hi hoga.
Here Anu, Sahil were in Ranveer's room they were getting ready to surprise their mom
Jigs was talking with Adi when the kids came in signaling to their father to be quiet and continue talking with her. They all creeped in behind her and pulling the flowers out screamed 'HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY MOM' frightened for a second with their outburst she had closed her eyes in fear, opening them a second later to see her kids looking at her warmly, she smiled and hugged all three of her kids.
Anu pulled out her the gift and handed it to her 'for you mom from all of us'
Sahil: per idea mera thaa
Anu: shut up Sahil it so was not, it was mine
Ranveer: ehh hello I'm still here
Jigs: bas bas I get it its from all of you, now if you're done can I have a look at my present
Anu: oh sorry mom here you go
Jigs opened it and forund a beautiful gold set its beautiful.
Ranveer: Mom why don't you wear it now, it'll go perfectly with your saree
Jigs: yes I will
Adi who was watching this standing in a corner was content seeing all this.
Jigs: tum log chalo hum atee hain neeche Massi aur Ma intizar kar rahe honge, aaur unhe bhi wish karna hai.
The kids left, Adi came behind her chalen
Jigs held his hand and hugged him 'thanks'
Adi: for what
Jigs: for giving me these wonderful kids
Adi: phir toh thanks mujhe kehna chaiyeh and kissed her forehead
Anu stuck her head in from the door 'mom dad romance ho gaya ho toh neeche hum sub wait kar rahe haina and ran down laughing leaving Adi and Jigs blushing.
Soon they all were gathered in the living room
Jigs and Adi came and hugged both Massi and Dadi 'happy mother's day ma, massi'
They both blessed all their kids while both their eyes were searching for the one person who was absent.
Jigs noticing that Jai was not there found it strange as generally he was the first one every year this day to wish them. "yeh Jai bhaiya kahan reh gaye?'
Anu and Adi looked at one another knowingly which was not missed by the inquisitive eyes of Massi.
Massi: kya chal raha hai tum dono mein
Adi: hun kuch bhi toh nahi
Massi: mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki koi baat hai jo tum dono chupa rahe ho, tumhe pata hai Jai kahan hai?
Anu hastily 'nahi toh Massi'
Dadi: Billo tu kyun chinta kar rahi hai, aa jayega thori der meh shayad koi kaam aa gaya hoga.
Not satisfied but she let it go for now.
Jai: chalo Bani lets go we're getting late everyone must be wondering where I'm
Bani: ya, lets go trying to sound calm.
Locking the door they got to the car where Jai held the door for her, getting in himself he put the key in ignition drove out. On the way Bani tuned to a station
Chaahe Tum kuch na kaho, (she looked at him)
maine sun liya...
ke saathi pyaar ka...(looked down blushing)
mujhe chun liya....chun liyaaaa..maine sun liyaa
Pehla nasha...pehla hummar
Naya pyaar hai...naya intezaar (Jai gave her a side glance)
karloo mein kya apna haal...
mere dile bekaraar ...tu hi bata....(pehla nasha...)
Udthaa hi phirum in hawaom mein kahi
yaa mein jhool jaavu in ghattavom mein kahi....
ek kar doo aasman aur zameen... (he held her hand)
kaho yaaron kya karu kya nahi.....(pehla nasha..)
Usne baath ki kuch aise dang se
sapne de gaya hazaaron rang ke
rah jaau jaise mein haar ke..
aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se....(pehla nasha...)
As the song came to an end so did their journey, the car slid in from the huge gates to Walia Mansion along the long drive way upto the house which was adorned with many trees and flowers she noted. Soon he pulled the car over and the car came to halt.
It was a huge house which seemed more like an mansion to her it was massive in structure, done in white it felt as if she had come to an fantasy land where her prince had brought her.
She came out of her trance as she heard Jai calling out to her who was standing outside holding the door open for her to come out
Jai: kahan kho gayi, ayo giving her a hand she held it tightly as he squeezed it with with affection
She looked down seeing if her saari was in place or not, fixing her palla over her shoulder properly
Jai was amused 'Bani you look great'
Bani: I always look great to you
Jai: you noticed
Bani glared at him
Jai: ok ok don't give me that look give me a smile, that's better much better
Taking a step at a time holding his arm they now stood at the door of the house, Jai looked back at her she was nervous well so was he, though he hated to admit he too was a bit hesitant.. he too was doing this for the first time but this had to be done so why not get it over with.
Jai: ready
Bani: as ready as I'll ever be
Jai was about to pust the bell when he retreated his hand; Bani looked at him submissively
Bani: kya hua
Jai drawing her bit closer kissed her lightly on the lips, making her go red all over 'don't worry about anything. I know they're going to love you' she was touched her eyes moistened she hugged him 'do it Jai lets go I want to meet my family.'
Jai took her hand and they pushed the bell together.
DING DONG
To be continued...
Kripa.
i think i should start running now i see the belans coming my way 😆 😆 next part on Sunday 😳 Thanks for reading everyone!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

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Hi Kripa!😊.......lovely part😛........liked how nervous Bani was......the song was excellent😆.....so finally she is at the door of WM😉........ye keya😕.........why did you stop there😡😡.......ya ofcourse you should run now😡........I am not going to throw jhootas and belans after you😉 but you better update soon😃.........why not today/tomorrow😉........Sunday kyon.......it's to far😛.....have a nice weekend😊

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kripa...I had missed three parts.. 😭 Just caught up with them 😊

Anu is sooo smart...she caught her dad in a tight situation and extracted her mamu's secret. 😆 And poor Jai, trying to take his niece to meet her 'Mami', while having the meeting failing miserbaly as the entire khandaan tagged behind them for icecream. 😆

Loved Bani's heart that she still sent flowers to her GFN mother. I hope now thatw oman thinks about all that she has done to her daughter 😡 And Bani's convo with her bro...he called Jai a Monkey 🤣 the bro..sis convo will always be very sweet.

And can imagine Bani being nervous like hell...but am waiting to see the family's reaction.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Uff jaani!!!!!

yes!!! you better run!!!!!!!!!! 😭 haila!!! on sunday???????? 😭 yaar its ur FF which me and jaz keep talking about and now... sunday? 😭 haila wen it will come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 ...

Yes i will cry and cry til u update! this thing about meeting the family taking forever! 😭 kya jaani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


SUNDAY please come soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
hey Kripa

that was just beautiful,im so excited.too cute,simply superb.plz plz update soon,im not sure i'll survive until sunday for the update.looking forward to it.and beautiful saree. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome update......
wil be waiting for sunday to cum..............
update soon

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila...new thread...but two updates...woo hoo...haila...what a place to end...jaldi jaldi update kaaro naa...guli...this ff is perfect for you...there are no JB touchy feely scenes...that good...keep it up kripa...mission is to keep gulis hands off jiju... 😆
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
plz cont soon
will jais family like the surprise i mean bani
cant wait to read the next part

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