FF: Pyar Ka Pal Note: Page 16

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

N. N.

@Neetusxm

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#61

oh just caught up with the last few updates... 😉
u are a really good writer...ur story is not rushed at all...proper pace...totally awesome... 👏 👏 👏

bani has many painful memories hopefully jai will help her over come them... glad she opened up to jai a bit.. cant wait for them to go on another date... 😛

cont soon

neetu

Quote

wajihah

@angelrockz

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#62

wooooooooooooooow great part plzz continue soon 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

divan

@divan

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#63

Excellent part, the whole farmhouse, Jai cooking meal for her and trying to get close to her...great. A younger, friendlier Jigyasa who cares for her brother in different.

Quote

sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#64

Simmi thx a lot 4 extra long update dear 😳
loved it, jai is VERY serious about huh?? 😉 😉
it was wonderful update 👏

update soon 😛

Quote

Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#65

Hi Simmi

A lovely part indeed and I loved reading it.

The trip to the farmhouse was great and the entire ambience was wow! You have written this part beautifully too and I could almost see the tree house.

Its a relief to find a good-natured Jigs over here.

Think Jai think, about the next date and that too fast.

Simmi, I love your natural flair for writing. 👏 👏 👏

Please update soon.

Quote

Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#66

amazing parts
hope jigs saying comes true and bani becomes a regular at jais house
cant wait 2 read how jai plans 2 make bani agree for a second date.
👏

Quote

Dammy

@damilola

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#67

👏
great part plz ctn soon !!!!!!

Quote

GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 18 years ago

#68

I love this ff simmi...its very good and different...i love how you describe everything..

Rivs

Quote

amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#69

wonderful part loved the way their friendship is developing
pls cont soon.........

Quote

preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#70

Hey Simmi

that was just wonderful update,just beautiful.your writing is so natural, very sweet.the description, the feelings of jai and bani were protrayed so well.love the pace of the story.looking forward to the next part. 😊

Quote

1 ... 5 6 7 8 9 ... 12

FF: Pyar Ka Pal Note: Page 16 - Page 7

Related Topics

Explore Topics