FF: Pyar Ka Pal Note: Page 16 - Page 7

oh just caught up with the last few updates... 😉
u are a really good writer...ur story is not rushed at all...proper pace...totally awesome... 👏 👏 👏

bani has many painful memories hopefully jai will help her over come them... glad she opened up to jai a bit.. cant wait for them to go on another date... 😛

cont soon

neetu

wooooooooooooooow great part plzz continue soon 😊

Excellent part, the whole farmhouse, Jai cooking meal for her and trying to get close to her...great. A younger, friendlier Jigyasa who cares for her brother in different.

Simmi thx a lot 4 extra long update dear 😳
loved it, jai is VERY serious about huh?? 😉 😉
it was wonderful update 👏

update soon 😛

Hi Simmi

A lovely part indeed and I loved reading it.

The trip to the farmhouse was great and the entire ambience was wow! You have written this part beautifully too and I could almost see the tree house.

Its a relief to find a good-natured Jigs over here.

Think Jai think, about the next date and that too fast.

Simmi, I love your natural flair for writing. 👏 👏 👏

Please update soon.

amazing parts
hope jigs saying comes true and bani becomes a regular at jais house
cant wait 2 read how jai plans 2 make bani agree for a second date.
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great part plz ctn soon !!!!!!

I love this ff simmi...its very good and different...i love how you describe everything..

Rivs

wonderful part loved the way their friendship is developing
pls cont soon.........

Hey Simmi

that was just wonderful update,just beautiful.your writing is so natural, very sweet.the description, the feelings of jai and bani were protrayed so well.love the pace of the story.looking forward to the next part. 😊