'The Masquerader' FF UD 1B pg 3 20/4

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"The Masquerader"

Chap I A:pg 2,Chap IB: pg 3   ;   ;

Prologue

" Any man may make a mistake; none but a fool will persist it."

It was the average day in The Stanford University. The sun shining brightly on the huge white building surrounded by oaks, cedars, birches and many other trees and foliage giving it a cool atmosphere. Whenever the wind blew it brought along the sweet fragrance of honeysuckle that grew in clusters near the stables. Situated in the heart of Liverpool, away from the hustle-bustle of the city Stanford is the most sought after university after the royal college.

A young man of 26 is seen walking down the cobbled streets of the nearby town…a body that looked as if chiseled by Michelangelo himself. The fine features on his face, the strangely aquiline nose, the chocolaty brown eyes spiked with gold near the pupils, the spiky hair and the most inviting lips that turned every girl/woman's head irrespective of their age…

Guy:muah(kiss)

Takmis koluna elin adamini

Beni orta yerimden catlatiyor

Agzinda sakizi sisirip sisirip

Arsiz arsiz patlatiyor

Biz boyle mi gorduk babamizdan

ele gune rezil olduk.

Yeni adet gelmis eski koye bak

dostlar mahvolduk.

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss(the sound)

Guy:

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss (the sound)

Guy:

Takmis koluna elin adamini

Beni orta yerimden catlatiyor

Agzinda sakizi sisirip sisirip

Arsiz arsiz patlatiyor

Biz bylemi grduk babamizdan

Ele gune rezil olduk

Yeni adet gelmis eski kye vah

Dostlar mahvolduk

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss (the sound)

Guy:

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss (the sound)

Guy:

Ocagina dustum yavru

Kucagina dustum yavru

Sicagina dustum yavru

El aman

Ocagina dustum yavru

Kucagina dustum yavru

Sicagina dustum yavru

El aman

... (couplet without music)

Guy:

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss (the sound)

Guy:

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss (the sound)

Guy:

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

The girls: kiss kiss (the sound)

Guy:

Seni gidi findik kiran

Yilani deliginden cikaran

Kaderim puskullu belam

Yakalarsam

Guy: muah!!!!(kiss)

[Authors note: The scenario is exactly the same as the video of the song "Simarik" by Tarkan girls running behind the guy…he he he heres the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PO0JaigrsI ]

At the same time at the gates of the Stanford boarding house near the Stanford University a young kid pulling a trunk behind him enters. He had a cap donned over his head the other way round (not the himesh way but opposite…I mean cap turned behind) that had the Chicago Bulls insignia on it. Dressed in blue denims and a baggy tee-shirt he had a cute appearance.

Not knowing what was in store for the future another one joins the Stanford university fraternity.

Author's Note: This fanfic has an extra-ordinary story line. I came up with this concept out of the blue. Not the usual JB FF you'll come across. I do not mean to be conceited but I think even you will agree with me after you finish reading the whole FF which I think may go outside the 20th chap mark which not a usual for me… I am still trying to improve my writing skills so I hope you'll understand if the chaps are not up to your expectations. I will heartily welcome any flames or any of the common jootis and belans coming my way…I would also like to add that there will be a number of songs, which may be in hindi/engi/latin/Spanish/Arabic or any other language, and I would also try to give you the links so that you can listen to them. A note to the silent readers that this fanfic has taken a lot of sleepless nights to think up of so please leave your comments mind you even a word would make my day…

Disclaimer: To whom so ever it concerns.

I may not own the characters but I do own the concept and the storyline. Furthermore as these are different from the original KS I solely own this story. Thank you.

Edited by bubbles2suppi - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Interesting start. And thank you for all the hard work you put think up this ff.

Are you going to give us translation of the songs? I have no idea what the lyrics says. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well the meaning of the lyrics do not match the situation... 😆 😆 (if you know what i mean
😆 )
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SOUNDS interesting!!!!!!!!!!!👏

cant wait to see what will be the unique twist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow its going to be longer than 20 chapters!!
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please cont soon
thanks
sunju

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!
it really does sound interesting
will b look foward to it! 😊

Continue Soon

maddi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OK i just watch vid OMG I'm loving it please update soon and post link to the song you will use and PLEASE PLEASE can you post translation for this British Asian punjabi girl who is clueless about the song but still loves it LMAO 😳 !!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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congrats 👏 .... i love reading ff 😳 😊 n i think urs'll be really really interesting n different one from others 😛 as u said n hope that u'll get d response of ff which u deserves i mean u would have a lots of readers ..... songs r ok with me so no worry n i like in fact i love listenning music 😳 😳 😊 when read so its gonna be really fun n enjoying time n read that u r also putting spanish songs(2 tell u i now spanish 😛) n all d aford that u have put on thinking n writing it, its vvgood n i'm dieing 2 read d 1st prt

start asap this ff 😃 😃 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 start songs in spanish (i now spanish learned it)
i bet u are gonna have alot of readers cont soon i just cant wait....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow great start!!!
look forward to reading more!!
Ria XxX
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very interesting concept please continue soon.

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