'The Masquerader' FF UD 1B pg 3 20/4 - Page 2

great start

look forward in reading more

plz cont soon

Taj

Takmis Koluna alin adamini
Beni orta yerimden catlatiyor
Agzinda sakizi sisirip
Arsiz arsiz patlatiyor

[She goes arms linked with a man
and drives me crazy by doing so
she has chewing gum in her mouth
insolently chewing it, making bubbles burst]

Biz byle mi grdk babamizdan
Ele gne rezil olduk
Yeni adet gelmis eski kye vah
Dostlar mahvolduk

[Did we learn it this way from our fathers?
We have been looking like fools to everyone
New customs have entered the old village
Friends, we are in a fix.]

Seni gidi findik kiran
Yilani deliginden cikaran
Kaderim pskll belam
Yakalarsam ...

[You are a nutcracker
pulling a snake from its hole
my big disgrace
when I get hold of you ... (kiss, kiss)]

Ocagina dstm yavru
Kucasina dstm yavru
Sicagina dstm yavru
El aman

[I'm seeking protection with you, babe
I'm lying in your lap, babe
I'm burning in your fire, babe
Have mercy!]

this is the translation and don't go for the meaning of the song in the ff coz it doesn't suit the situation...he he he some parts are kinda obscene
but those who have watched the video its kinda funny...
love 😉
suppi

😊
continue soooon
it looks interesting................
n would love to hear songs frm diff languages 😊

gr8 start! 👏 👏 👏 well written!

hey first of all congrats for ur new ff
waiting for ch 1
nice way of writing 👏
transalate the songs in the ff part itself so tht it is easy to read
continue soon
waiting for next parts

🤢

Chapter IA

"Room # 107" he thought in his mind as he pulled his trunk behind him…

"the dean seemed like a nice dude…" he smirked as he had a flashback of a short bald guy with a protruding stomach pointing a sausage of a finger at him saying "No hanky panky business in your room, boy!! Because nothing escapes the notice of the 'Georginator' understand😆😆?"

"Must be one BIG fan of terminator." 😉

And sure enough he heard him telling off a girl for giggling too loudly in the corridors and dismissing her by saying "Asta lavista Baby".😆 😆

The huge 19th Century French Louis XVI Style Gilded Mirror hanging on the opposite wall showed a young guy of 18 wearing a blue baggy Nike tee and black denims. He was wearing a Chicago Bulls cap lopsided on his head. 😉

Chuckling to himself he entered his new room in the Stanford boys hostel. That was the first time in his whole life that his eyeballs literally had fallen out of his head…he didn't even hear the three words escaping his mouth… " What the F***?" 🤬

At another part of the town a group of seniors were chatting away.
"Can you guys smell what I can?" said one of them taking a deep breath.

" what is it Ranveer?" said one girl…🤢

" the sweet smell of freshers getting ragged…. (after a pause he added) by us…" which was followed by the guffaws of the guys and the giggles of the girls… 😕

The young guy just looks at his new room…the whole room was a mess…it looked as if his 'WONDERFUL'😆 roommate had a late night party the previous day and had not bothered to clean up afterwards. 😆😆😆
Mountains of dirty dishes were piled up in the sink, the kitchen counter was a humongous mess, and the left over food was attracting flies… (well I think you get the picture😉) he went into his room to find his bed lined with beer bottles and magazines…the living room was the dirtiest of them all. The beautiful carpet soiled by the drying pizza crusts and crisp wrappers…the wall had a nasty ketchup blob on it… overall the whole place looked as if a twister hit it.
"well looks like my dear roommate gave me a welcome party, well it would be oh-so rude if I did not thank him in an appropriate way." he said a cynical smile on his face… " after all I am the "BANISHER" and I don't take favors from anyone"…
B: (receptionist at the office) can you please tell me who my roommate is… my room # is 107…
Receptionist: just a moment…yes …it is a Mr. Jai Walia…senior, blah blah…(giving all his details and stuff) 👏
B: thank you….
B goes out into the campus asking around for JW and notices that almost everyone seems to know him… " must be one popular guy😉" he thinks…
B asks another guy about the whereabouts of JW.
Guy: oh you looking for Jai? Yeah he's right over there along with Ranveer, Roshni and the other platinums…and BTW I can see that you are a fresher…so you better not bump into them coz I heard them talking bout ragging freshers a while ago…the platinums are one nasty lot specially Jai, Ranveer and Roshni so keep away…
B: yeah yeah whatever and thank you for the advice…. (Saying so B goes towards the parasites or plasticine or whatever weirdo group that guy told)

Meanwhile Ranveer had caught hold of a fresher…(to rag of course)
Ran: what's your name four eyes…
The fresher: (clearly afraid) my..m…my name is Winston😆…
Rosh: OK Winnie…come lets play a game…
Win: gg..g..game????
Rosh: yeah its called "FLUSH YOUR HEAD DOWN THE TOILET🤢😆"
And as Ranveer was pulling the unfortunate guy towards the lavatory a voice is heard.
B: which one of you is JAI WALIA? 🤢
All heads turned towards the young guy who was smiling sardonically at them.
Rosh: whoa look at that Ranz looks like another one for the damn toilet… the mouse walked straight into the hands of the cat…
B: watch that mouth of yours lady👏…or the hunter will soon become the hunted…now whos JW???
Jai: I am…what do you want???
B: well my dear roommate looks like I didn't like the welcome party you threw for me…well you, RATveer and big-mouth 😆can come and clean, well I won't mind if you do the dishes too👏…
Rosh: well look at that…jai darling🤢!! that darn freshie insulted me, Teach him a lesson…
Ranz: well Big J 😕you take care of Winnie here and I'll go take care of shortie…(well they were making fun of B's height he's just 5"4.)
B does nothing but grin…

Author's note: what will happen to B? is he in major trouble or is the other way round? What will the platinums do to him and Winnie? Well find out in Chapter IB
Send in any scenes you want in through PM's and any suggestions will be heartily accepted. Well feel free to voice your thoughts/confusions/questions regarding this FF and they will be answered accordingly so as not to reveal too much(it's a kinda surprise). Thank you for the tremendous response. It gave me the confidence to write this chapter.
Love, 😉
Suppi

Wow great first part!!! B has alot of courage to stand up against JW... i await to see wat will happen next!!!
Ria XxX

Chapter IB
B does nothing but grin…
B: (to himself) well I'll just play along …FOR NOW….
[The background music here is limp bizkit's-Take a look around
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NdpP6ynPbiY ]
[Lyrix-for those who want it
all the tension in the world today
all the little girls fillin up the world today
with the good comes the bad - the bad comes the good
but i'mmaa live my life like i should
now all the critics wanna hit it
to shit-can how we did it
just because they don't get it
but i'll stay fitted - new era committed
now this red cap gets a wrap from his critics

do we always gotta cry
do we always gotta live inside a lie
life's just a blast, it's movin' really fast
you better stay on top or life will kick you in the ass
follow me into a solo,
remember that kid so what you wanna do
and where you gonna run when you're starin' down the cable of a...
mic pointed at your grill like a gun
limp bizkit's rockin' the set
it's like russian roulette when you're placin' your bet
so don't be upset when you're broke and you're done
'cause i'm gonna be the one till i jet

i know why you wanna hate me
i know why you wanna hate me
i know why you wanna hate me
'cause hate is all the world has even seen lately
i know why you wanna hate me
i know why you wanna hate me
now, i know why you wanna hate me
'cause hate is all the world has even seen lately

does anyone really know the secret
or the combination for this life, and where to keep it
it's kinda sad when you don't know the meanin'
but everything happens for a reason
i don't even know what i should say,
'cause i'm an idiot, a loser, a microphone abuser
i analyze every second i exist
beatin' up my mind every second with my fist

and everybody wanna run,
everybody wanna hide from the gun
you can take that ride through this life, if you want
but you can't take the edge off the knife - no sir
and now you want your money back
but you're denied, 'cause your brain's fried from the sack
and there ain't nothin i can do,
cause life is a lesson - you learn it when you're through

i know why you wanna hate me
i know why you wanna hate me
i know why you wanna hate me
'cause hate is all the world has even seen lately
i know why you wanna hate me
i know why you wanna hate me now,
i know why you wanna hate me
'cause hate is all the world has even seen lately
i know why you wanna hate me
'cause hate is all the world has even seen lately ]
The scene here is…
B getting dragged by Ranz (he's not struggling) with B's hands behind his back caught by Ranz…Winston (who was almost crying, begging jai to let him go) getting dragged by Jai in the same position…
They reach the boys toilet…
Jai: Ranz you take the other cubicle I'll take this one then on the count of three we'll push both out of the door for the public to see…
Ranz: good plan. Lets embarrass them in public…
Both enter their respective cubicles with their captives…

In Jai's cubicle…
Jai: Winnie let me introduce you to the toilet who's gonna have your head flushed down it and saying so he dunks Winston's head into the toilet and pulls the flush.

In Ranz's cubicle…
Ranz: ok shortie let me introduce you to the toilet who's gonna have your head flushed down it and saying so he was just gonna dunk B's head down it when B just frees his hand in a swift move and catches hold of Ranz's.
B: well Ratveer let me introduce you to the toilet who's gonna have YOUR head flushed down it and BTW how does it feel to be on the other end and saying so he dunks Ranz's head into the toilet and pulls the flush.

Jai: hey are you done
B: ummm hmmm
Jai: then on the count of three…one….two….three….
Both of them push out their respective captives.
Jai: cool Ranz…(and he turns towards Ranz only to find B smiling sweetly)
Jai then turns towards the wet guys in front only to find Winston and Ranz🤣.
Everyone was laughing at Ranz…
One of them said " look at that looks like the platinums finally found their match"
"as they say big things come in small packages" said another
" serves Ranveer right he did that to me when I came" chirped a first year
" to think that the great Ranveer got beaten at his own game by a freshie" said another freshie..

B walks towards Ranveer.
B: that was for trying to flush me rat…and this is for calling me a shortie…
👏 (go 👏 B) The next moment B punches Ranveer right in the face and he falls down unconscious.
This was followed by gasps from the crowd. B turns toward Jai
B: so shall we proceed to our room and get some of your friends too there is a lot to do…
Jai is just too surprised to say anything let alone move..
B: (looking at the other platitums barks at them) what are you parasites waiting for? Go to room # 107 and start cleaning I want the place squeaky clean.
One among them says: come on guys… lets do as he says. I don't wanna end up like Ranz … come on break a leg… or he'll break it for us. 😆
All the other platinums rush to 107…
Jai: now you are something aren't you (and he starts laughing) poor Ranz…
B: the poor toilet I would say…I don't think it had anything as bad as the rats head 🤣flushed down it…
Jai: you've got a sense of humor I see…
B: well everyone does…and BTW I think even we should go and help those parasites of yours to clean the room…
Jai: parasites???🤣🤣(I couldn't help doing this)
B: that is the name of your group of hooligans isn't it?
Jai: no no its not parasites(laughing) it is platinums….
B: whatever…(irritated) B turns and sees that Ranveer was still out cold and gets some water and splashes it on his face…nothing happens and so B and Jai carry him to the hospital wing…
The nurse there was quite fond of Ranveer and seeing him in such a state she runs towards him.
Nurse: oh god what ever happed to my poor baby…looks like he has a black eye … whoever could have done such a thing to my poor Ranz he never hurt anyone…thank you guys for bringing him here…(and she kisses Jai on his cheek 😉 and was about to do the same to B but he backs off 🤢 and holds out his hand and shakes the nurse's😆)
Nurse: well I have never seen you before…
B: oh I am new here hello I am the banisher….
Nurse: what? Oh… I am Rashi D'souza. I am the school nurse…BTW what's your real name?(she pokes her nose everywhere doesn't she?)
B: well you can call me Mr. B. Kapoor.
Jai: what does B stand for?
B: well that's none of your business.
Jai:(just rolls his eyes) just get this straight just because I spoke politely to you doesn't mean you're a platinum and no one but platinums can talk to Big J like that… you're a freshie act like a freshie and everyone answers the questions Big J asks and that means you too get that?. (And Jai walks away in a huff)
B: oh conceited are we?☢️ I know how to puncture your over-bloated ego. 😃 You just wait and watch what I do…and I was right about JW… he is a pig-headed, tenacious and stuck-up Pig🐷…and as for the parasites they'll pay…for everything…. (And a bright smile lit up B's face)☢️

Author's Note: What is B up to?😈 What is in store for JW? Most Importantly who is this Mr.B.Kapoor? Any guesses? Well all your questions will be answered in the coming chapters and I am really sorry for not updating I had a few days of headache cause I just got braces and so unable to do anything for a while.Do you want me to clear all doubts regardin this FF or do you want it to be slowly rolled out in the course of the FF? please answer this so i can write next update... Will update soon. Please leave some comments.BTW are you looking for bani? well she's with us and yet not with us...got the clue???? 😃 😃

Love Suppi 😉 😉 🤗

😭 NO COMMENTS???????????

that really broke my heart guys please please comment at least a word..
suppi

sorry i read it yesturday but i coundn't comment but
well i love this ff n it awesome update 👏
b is something 😉 i loved d way she was behaving .... poor ranveer i hope he gets bac in his sense after what b did 2 him 😆 it was so hilarious 😆

continue soon 😛