The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 18

Originally posted by: joa123

fab part 👏 👏
do cont soon

thank you.

Originally posted by: black current

👏 great part armana
really loved it
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm am i sensing some explosions??????????
really loved the way bani spoke to Roshini
continue soon
love u
satya

thank you satya.
but i'm afraid it's going to be more than a day before the next part gets written. sorry.
a

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

Armana, very beautifully written!! 👏

I think in the coming updates pia and bani will meet!

So, Jai is finally getting serious about her? Giveing her his mother's earring and all!

Ranveer and Natchiket coming to Bani's rescue was very cute! 😛

thanks sweetie😊
glad you liked xv-a
armana

Originally posted by: abhita

Hey Armana,

Just read part XV-A...
Absolutely Awesome!!!!

I loved every bit of it... :-D

I have a very untrusting nature... especially when it concerns somebody who has given me enough reason to be so... so I am somewhat suspicious of Pia... her tearing eyes didn't move me... :-D Especially considering her jealousy on Bani's appearance and the jewellery she wore...

I wonder how long it'd be before Jai connects the sketches to Saraswathi!

I absolutely adore the characterisation of Bani... the way you have portrayed her... somebody who makes her own rules in life... and lives by them... an independent girl of today... that is somebody I want to be like!

and last but def not the least...

👏

- Abhi

sigh! if you read it again you'll realise it was very discreetly indicated that pia deliberately turned on the tears to fool rano. the more they shove pia down my throat in ks the nastier i feel like being to pia in tfs!
But thank you😃
armana

Originally posted by: sangitadas

👏

Wonderful part Armana. And the wait was definitely worth it. cant thank you enough.

Very lovely characterisation of Bani. Maybe this is one of those FFs where Bani's character has been beautifully projected and we get to hear her thoughts and understand her feelings. Thanks a lot Armana for giving us this gem of a FF.

I love the way JW automatically realises when Bani is troubled and vice-versa. These are what soul mates are made of.

Well enough of my ramblings. Thanks again for this excelelnt part.
Hope you update soon.

Regards

dear sangs,
tahnk you for both, the long ramble and for liking xv-a.
you rambles and approval mean a lot to me. so it's good to see both here.
love
armana

Originally posted by: rivya

armana...another wonderful update...
Bani mami, Bani bhabhi...where did that come from???lol....I am sure Roshni is probably still in a haze and rooted to the same spot...lol...

Is Jigs good????She seems nice but I am concerned that she has got the wrong notion in her head about Bani...I wish this clears up soon...

overall...loved it...amazing descriptions...please continue soon...
Rivs

jigs is neither good nor bad. she is human.
glad you liked xv-a.
thank you.
armana

Originally posted by: divan

Armana:

What can I say, part 15A was wonderful. One can sense all the emotions felt by Bani as she encounters Jigyasa and Roshni. Love how she responded to Ranveer and Nachiket when she questions them why they interrupted her and Roshni.

Pia doesn't have courage to face her sister after what she did all those years ago and needs reassurance from Rano.

it's not reassuarance she is looking for from Rano. Pia is setting the scene to re-enter bani's life.
thank you for finding xv-a 'wonderful.'
armana

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Armana

that was just beautiful,really worth the wait.just beautifully written.the emotions bani goes through when jigs and roshni make those remarks was protrayed so well.Ranveer and Nachiket are so sweet,they are already praticising for the future.The understanding between jai and bani is written so well.totally loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

thank you sweetie😃

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Armana,
I can only say that wait is worth 😃 😆
Liked Part XV-A very much as it beautifully written 😃 👏
Now Bani has to face three evil women 😡 😡
Liked Ran & Nach coming to Bani's rescue 😊
Eagerly waiting for Part XV-B 😉 😃
Thanks a lot 😃 😆
👏 👏 👏

thanks K😊
as for bani, strange how the witches always nmber 3. actualy not so starnge. a whole lot of symbology associated with the number 3! and hey, i like tradition!
armana

Originally posted by: nema123

Armana,
You are just wonderful... no words to describe..
What a heartwarming update....

Thankyou thankyou so much...

you are very welcome indeed!
😊 armana