The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 16

Awesome part armana. Loved how Nachiket and Ranveer try to defend Bani. Their relationships (Ranveer, Nachi and BAni) seem so sweet and tender.

awesome part armana 👏

i really cant thank you enough for such a gud FF/story

the visual draw of scenes and strong incarnation of characters r really marvellous

the whole party sequence was gr8 and
nattu-ranveer "bani bhabhi bani mami" was the icing

so jai has given the family jewels to bani , interestin
lets c how will he xplain y he had given tht as gift to bani

the update worth the wait

Hi Armana,

Beautiful part...it was great to see Natchiket and Ranveer indicating to Roshini Bani's place in Jai's life...shame Jai hasn't realised it though 😕.

Bani is so elegant.....Now that Rano's reception is over, will Bani go back. I think when Bani leaves Walia mansion and goes home Jai will truly realise what Bani means to him.. 😛.

Please update soon.

Nikita

Hi Armana,
Lovely update!

Nice to see that he respects her space and avoids going thru her sketch pad.
Very sweet that he wanted her to wear his mother's earrings .... but I think I
missed something when she decided to be hot and bothered about the fact
that he gave her heirloom jewellery.
I hope the honeymoon phase isn't over already!
Continue soon! You are doing an awesome job!

Armana....I liked the way Jai not breaking Bani's trust by sneaking in to look Bani's sketches...Also unwitting Jai seems to consider bani closer than he ever ethought....allowing her to use his moms temple and gifting jwellery....sweetest has to be both Ran and Nat calling Bani as mami and bhabhi and bani reciprocating their affections...that whole sequence was very good.....Hope to have a update earlier from u :)..

Swathi

Hi Armana,
You made me a convert from a silent reader to a not-so-silent one anymore. I love these super long & leisure updates from u. ur Bani is so dignified, so elegant and so mature, which make her so beautiful from within ( too many sos, couldn't help it). She has to be very discreet when she broaches 'wretched earrings' with jw. The three pairs of eyes are resentful in their own way. Is there going to be yet another separation for this pair (No, don't answer that. I'd rather wait).

Lovely update. Thank u.

Aashna

ps: I always wanted to ask u this. Why don't you use more hindi in their conversations (not shudd hindi).. you know what I mean. To make the characters more personable. Or is it ur personal preference (easy-reading for non-hindi speaking mortals like me). Please ignore this comment if it is ur preference. I don't want u to change ur elegant narrative style.

Armana, once again, a lovely, lengthy update - I "experience" the FF more than "read" it - hope you understand what I am trying to convey.
Your Bani is so refined and so loving that she doesn't spoil the peaceful evening she shares with her Jai despite having a troubled mind. Her love is really awe inspiring. And, I can also feel Jai's enchantment with Bani and hope he will soon realize that he is deeply in love with her.
As always, you have taken me to your Jai-Bani world on the magic carpet woven with such verbal mastery.
God bless you for making such enjoyable and enchanting reading. Thank you for sharing your time and thoughts.
I am eagerly looking forward to the next update of The Foreign Self.

Awesome Armana, simply mindblowing yaar............ 👏 👏 👏 Please continue at your earliest

How did I ever miss this part yaar? Just saw that you posted Part XV! Will read and post my comments!

Hope you are back in Delhi!

Love,

MT

Armana,

I can't seem to get over the saree u described for Bani....I want it...............
Thanks,

Ayesha