The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 17

I've just finished watching todays video of KS(Apr/05/07). Yaar, they have hijacked ur 'Jannat'. They have a Jannat apartments raaz now. They (Kreatives, as they are called here) are definetely reading ur tfs.

Originally posted by: menal

yeahhh! i like it when you update on sunday....the forum is soo silent and all ff writers take rest and i have nothing to read but your fantastic update makes my day.....gooood job.....
god bless you
take care
menal

thank you😃

That was an interesting preamble by Neruda.

There is an ethereal sublimity about Bani seen thru the eyes of Jai.

Well seems that the labyrithian web of relationships is about to unfold.....does not bode well for BnJ.

As always, a lovely part to read & enjoy.

Thanks

p.s.:the earrings are exquisite

I only have one world to describe this FF and that is MINDBLOWING!!!! I'm definitely serious! This FF is just terrific! 👏 And i regret for not reading it before! I just read all the parts and they were WONDERFUL! 😃 I simply just love this FF! 😳 I love the storyline! Loved how Jai and Bani met as completely strangers yet gave eachother support in their time of need! 😃 And they meet after 7 long years! 😃 Hopefully one of them will speak up and bring up that night 7 years ago! 😉 😳 Hate Roshini! 🤢 But i guess that isn't something new. I mean, who wouldn't hate her?! 😆 Loved how Ranveer & Nachiket came to Bani's resuce! 😆 Those two! 😆 😃 Definitely enjoying this FF especially the JB Romance! 😳 You're a fantastic writer, Armana! Keep up the fabulous work! 👏 Am so sorry that i didn't read your FF before. But promise to be active from now! Really looking foward to the next part! So please update soon! 😊 😳


Lots of Love,

Goddess

are u going to update this weekend????
i am waiting eagerly for it!!!

The lurkers are really loving your FF too. Look they even hijacked the name JANNAT from your FF. 😉 😉

great part.
please please continue soon.

Hi Armana,
How are you ?
I haven't commented since last week so apologize for that.
Well work has become a priority this days.
i come on a forum once in a day for may be hour or some time even less.
Part 15A is extra oridinary.
- How Jai thinks that typical woman doen't get ready on time. (means she is special)
-How most of the woman like to be decked up on jwelary and hair (She is simple but special)
-How her smile doesn't go away from her face
-How they can not hide each other's emotions
-I loved the Ranvir and Nachiket's bunter
-Pia's jeoulsy
-Roshni's Anger
-Jignysa's confution
all of this is so powerfully described.
Once again this is an outstanding part.
Waiting for more
Please continue soon

pooja

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Great part Armana!!!
love it!!!
Oh wow so Roshni and Jigz knows...I'm beginning to feel that soon there's going to be some trouble with Jai and Bani...
but one question, what are Jai's feelings in all this...i mean he is behaving in a manner that he loves her but yet he...i don't know am confused...it would be nice to show some talking down between the two now...
anyways please continue soon
rooj

thank you for telling me what i need to write next.😊
the only problem is that i am desperately busy...so it will be while....
am gald you liked this part though.
armana

Originally posted by: Hkaurk22

Awesome part Armana! I love the way you have shown Nattu and Ranveer taking a liking to her, and of course the Pia jealousy.

My fave is always how JW cant not have Bani by his side.

👏

thank you h😃