Ek Paal... (a short story)

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sanjana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

its really nice i loved it 👏

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

jaz... 👏 ....loved the story...it was beautiful...the best i have read in a while...

I so agree with you...in life u dont always get what u want...but one moment changes everything....loved the story...took me back to my M&B days... 😃

oh u used binita...lol...cant believe it...
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Raania

@Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

oh what a beautiful song...its so nice 😳

nice story yaar magar im confused, if they love each other than why are they apart?? 😕

you have to continue this! 😃

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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Farzana

@AMAL722

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Very Sweet S Story!
I agree w/ Raania - u need to cont. this

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

OMG!!! I could so picture that cuz i knew exactly where they were!!! finally a story where i can imagine and i am right!!!!

San Fernando valley rules man!!!!!!! its only bad cuz of the hot summers other than that.... its pretty nice!!

churro?? JAani.. those are soo yummy and why you mention them for! i am hungry now!😕😕 that was nice! they werent together... but they "think" they love each other!!!!

it wasnt that long i read it in like 10 mins!!!!!!!

and i was in ur story! hai!!!! i am like hmm.. vanita sounds familiar!!!😆

Awesome part jaani!👏

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Rimpy Kaur

@punjabi#1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

That was a wonderful stroy, I am a little disappointed the didn't met in the end.

-Rimpy

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

great story
but sadness they arent together with each other

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Dammy

@damilola

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

😭 😭 😭
d best story so sad they weren't 2 gether buh dey are still happy wit their patners so dats good

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Dammy

@damilola

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

😭 😭 😭
d best story so sad they weren't 2 gether buh dey are still happy wit their patners so dats good

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Hi Jaz! I read this word for word! Me being the typical So Cal girl, could imagine every little detail and aspect of this story! From Santa Monica Pier, to eating churros, and the passion for frozen yogurt. I know all the places you mentioned! LOL to your Desi Valley Girl! And Pepperdine? excellent jobs with the locales!

Very well written! Good job and I look forward to your other Cali based stories! 😉

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