FF: Vivah Final Part: (Chap.31 pg.139)

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

just read both parts,fabalous start.very sweet and cute.looking forward to jai and bani's first talk.cant wait for the next update. 😊

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Jazmin

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+ 6

Posted: 18 years ago

#62

wah wah...the first meeting...both in pink huh...isse kehete hai...dil se dil ka rishta... 😉 jai is so funny.."she is ok...i guess"...lol...jai my love...u arent fooling anyone...lol... 😆 aww...RR married with baby on the way...how cute...ranveer...budhu...leave the two love birds alone...let them talk...guys i tell u...akal hi nahin hai... 😛 😛 😛 cant wait to read next part...
JAZ

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Radhika

@love is fire

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#63

Hey there! your ff is great!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Read both the parts and they were awesome!!!

Loved the way in which Jai said 'yeah i like her' so cute of him!!! 😳 😆 😆

Do continue soon!! 😛

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#64

RnR fighting bcoz she 4got her purse & she took 2hrs to get ready.... Hahahahahahaha so much lyk a typical couple.... 😛

😆 Bani's mom..... Hahahahaha desperate maasi... 😆

ummmm So??? 😳

Cant wait to read abt their convesation buddy.... 😃

plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz cont soon.... 😃

Till now it was hilarious.... 😉

I liked the way u described Jai's thoughts & their matching pink clothes... 😃

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

Wonderful part , i really loved it ! 👏
your fanfic is great ! 😳
Jai like bani , good beginning to love ! 😉
Please continue ASAP! 😉

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

continuee...nice writing ..like totally arranged..
davia

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

g8t update yaar 👏 ... very well written 👏 😊 😊 ... omg jai thought d girl he came 2 c was kiran 😆 .... but looking at bani 😳 😳 😳 ... mmmm... he changed his mind 😉 😛 😆 .... well i want to know what happens nxt... so u better update soon lol 😆 ... i'm very very excitad 2 read d nxt prt 😃 😃

well done 👍🏼

continue asap

meenu 😊

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

GR8 PART 👏
ja n bani meet at last
cont. soon

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mb101

@mb101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: TCP#10
fantastic honey, keep it up

Jai is such a dumb, looking at Kiran. 😆 😆

eager to read more, cont. soon

purno

probably gonna update later,

maro😊

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mb101

@mb101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: ridhijai
Beautiful part.
can't believe Jai thought he gono marry Kiran 😆......then Bani ko dekha kar 😍........haaaiiiiiiiiii.
plz cont. soon.

😊 thanx glad u liked it

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