FF: Vivah Final Part: (Chap.31 pg.139) - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: amiee


thanks it was a nice one
god jai thinking that bani's mom was the one that masi chose for him and she looks like to be his mother 😆 the way he said it
so he likes bani good choice aakhir masi ki pasand jo hai
so when do we see HAMARI BAHU BANI
CONT SOON........

i wrote the next part already is handwriting just gotta put on the computer to post it


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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: basket

oh cool!!!!!!!!!!

Fabulous part! 👏

I bet i will love ur fan fic anyway!!!!!!

i love reading, so please cont soon!

Thanks,
Sunju 😃

thanx hope u like the next part too 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

hmmm...

wonder wat they are going to talk about!!!!!! read next part n see

aww raashi is preggers!! aww sweet yepp

please cont soon!

i will post later
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

just read both parts,fabalous start.very sweet and cute.looking forward to jai and bani's first talk.cant wait for the next update. 😊

thanx

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
Just finished reading both parts. I must say you have amazing writing skills i really enjoyed both parts.
Do continue...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: jnawaz

wah wah...the first meeting...both in pink huh...isse kehete hai...dil se dil ka rishta... 😉 jai is so funny.."she is ok...i guess"...lol...jai my love...u arent fooling anyone...lol... 😆 aww...RR married with baby on the way...how cute...ranveer...budhu...leave the two love birds alone...let them talk...guys i tell u...akal hi nahin hai... 😛 😛 😛 cant wait to read next part...
JAZ

lol when i was writing i didnt notice that i put both of them in pink, i just noticed now 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: love is fire

Hey there! your ff is great!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
thanx 😊
Read both the parts and they were awesome!!!
hope u read the next part
Loved the way in which Jai said 'yeah i like her' so cute of him!!! 😳 😆 😆
lol yepp😛
Do continue soon!! 😛

i'll post next part later

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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Auditi

RnR fighting bcoz she 4got her purse & she took 2hrs to get ready.... Hahahahahahaha so much lyk a typical couple.... 😛

😆 Bani's mom..... Hahahahaha desperate maasi... 😆

ummmm So??? 😳

Cant wait to read abt their convesation buddy.... 😃

plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz cont soon.... 😃

Till now it was hilarious.... 😉

I liked the way u described Jai's thoughts & their matching pink clothes... 😃

thanx 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Wonderful part , i really loved it ! 👏 thanx
your fanfic is great ! 😳
Jai like bani , good beginning to love ! 😉 who knows does Jai want to fall in love?
Please continue ASAP! 😉

will do

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Posted: 18 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: davia389

continuee...nice writing ..like totally arranged..
davia

thanx 😛

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