FF: Vivah Final Part: (Chap.31 pg.139)

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Walia Mansion

" MARRIAGE," Jai exclaimed. He looked confused at his masi. "Yes marriage, it's time to think of marriage," masi replied. "But I'm so young why would you want to trap your own nephew?" Jai said. Masi looked bewildered. "Jai, are you saying that every man that gets married gets trapped?" "Look, at Aditya poor guy got divorced from Jigyasa years ago but he still looks scared." "What am I going to do with you?" Masi sighed. " You're 26 years old and I want you settled down." I promised my sister, that I would give you every happiness and I did so far. Now I'm asking something from you, will you give me this?" Crap now she's making me feel guilty, Jai thought. "Alright do you have anyone in mind?" Jai gave up. "Yes, her name is Bani Dixit and they have invited us for dinner tomorrow," Masi said happily. Oh great so she planned everything out already, Jai said in his mind.

Dixit Residence

"Bani," Nishikant called. "Yes dad," Bani came out from the kitchen. " Your mother and I have to speak to you," he said indicating her sit on the sofa. Bani sat on the sofa fidgeting with her fingers, worried about what her parents are going to say. Nishikant began, " You are 22 years old and we have been thinking about your marriage. We got a proposal from the Walia's and they are coming over tomorrow for dinner." "Wait, so you are planning to get me married to some guy I don't even know," Bani was shocked. Karan, Bani's mother began, "Look Bani we are your parents and we know what's good for you. Besides he is a rich industrialist and he will make you happy." "But….,"Bani said. "No buts our decision is final," Nishikant said cutting off Bani. "Alright what ever you guys think is right," Bani said looking down sadly.

Chap.1 pg.1, Chap.2 pg. 7, Chap.3 pg.12, Chap.4 pg.19,Chap.5 pg.24, Chap.6 pg.29, Chap.7 pg.31, Chap.8 pg.38, Chap.9 pg.45,Chap.10 pg.53, Chap.11 pg.59, Chap.12 pg.67,Chap.13 pg.71, Chap.14 pg.73, Chap.15 pg.76, Chap.16 pg.80, Chap.17A pg.83, Chap.17B pg.88, Chap.18 pg.92, Chap.19 pg.94, Chap. 20 pg.98, Chap. 21A pg.102, Chap. 21B pg.104, Chap. 22 pg. 108, Chap. 23 pg. 110, Chap. 24 pg. 113, Chap. 25 pg.117, Chap. 26 pg.121, Chap. 27 pg.124, Chap. 28 pg. 128, Chap. 29 pg.132, Chap.30 pg.136, Chap.31 pg. 139

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frndsnstrngers thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice start....hope u continue ur ff
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wow sounds gr8 plse continue soon 👏
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hey.............grt starting.........
this sounds grt 👏 hope ull continue fast.........
cont fast!!!!!
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Good start, keep up.

Don't get too worried about spellings, there is no language expert here, 😉

When you'd have written few chapters, the spelling would get better automatically.

Now, continue soon, this plot seems good.

purno 😊
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WoooooW!!!! 👏

Sounds coooooooool buddy.... 😃

plzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzz post the nxt part soon... 😃
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wow very gd storyline.... do nt worry about ur spelling mistake dear......they will take better with each upate u make.. pls do update ur next part soooooon

cheers
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Real good start... Keep writing , can't wait to read the next part.
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great start...hope u update soon
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Originally posted by: frndsnstrngers

nice start....hope u continue ur ff
debolina

thanx hun 😊

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