FF: Vivah Final Part: (Chap.31 pg.139)

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 18 years ago

#431

maro...loved it..so finally they shared their first kis...it awesome....

looks like they are coming closer to each other and not realizing it....but it is good right...please continue soon..
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wajihah

@angelrockz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#432

👏 hey what a lovely part 👏 .......both are startin to like each other ...they make such a cute couple 😳 ....ur ff is great...continue soon...am really excited for the next part...update soon 😊

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exploringmyself

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Posted: 18 years ago

#433

👏
awesum update..
plz cont soon...

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sukhjinder kaur

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Posted: 18 years ago

#434

first kiss...hand in hand 😳 awesome prt 👏 l-o-v-e-d it ... beautifully described n like vvmuch they atmospher 👏 👏 👏
continue asap 😛

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#435

haila...JANI first kiss...woo hoo... 🥳 [:D/]🥳 [:D/]🥳 [:D/]🥳 [:D/]🥳 [:D/]🥳 [:D/]🥳 [:D/]thats more like it...so cute...the watter fall...bani getting some jalan...haila...shaadi se pehele yeh haal hai... 😉 😉 😉 ...he is 'taken' huh...still...that wont stop the girls from looking now will it... 😳 ...lol...so cute with the other couples...tarun is classic male when it comes to shopping...sahil...chi...badmash...poor thing is sick...lol...bechara...and ranveer...such a sweet heart...haila...so cute...and haila...JANi holding hands too...wah wah...i see things r going in the right direction... update soon
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Pooja

@kripa0521

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Posted: 18 years ago

#436

Lovely part, so Jai is finally falling for Bani good now cant wait for the next part,please update soon.

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#437

Man.. Bani is stubborn....itne jaldi.. itne Tantrums... 😆 😆 😆 woh bhi Arrange marriage me... 😆 😆

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Loran Maddi Lee

@LoranMaddiLee

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#438

awsoem awsome awseome!!!
loved it!
yay!!!
lol... fab update!
heheh jb, tl, rr, sr, are soo cute! Lolz!
continue soon

maddi

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

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Posted: 18 years ago

#439

Oh man that was just awesome!!!

Hmm.. Jai wat happened to you? Holding hands are we!!!!!... what happened to i dont wanna get married and like i will break this engagement up!! we will see how you will do that!!!!!!!

And Bani.. dont be jealous he was only smiling!! like this😃😃😃..... but dont you wish it was for you? cuz if it was... you would've been like 😳 turning red as a rose!!!!!!!!!😆

okay.... jaani before i get carried away!🤔 please cont soon!!!😛😉

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#440

that was a fabalous part,very sweet.the way you wrote abt each and very couple,how all them are different points in there relationships,was just superb.Jai and bani are just too cute,they holding hands--hope they talk more.loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

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