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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part 👏 thanx😛
cont. soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: melonie

Great parts 😊 . thank you
Really like the bonding between the boys 😃 . i like that too
Hope you will update soon 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabye

🤣 haahaha dat was so funny. Jai mixed all those things together.EGG AND EGGPLANT. 🤣 lol i know what a combination 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Neetusxm

hey hun...it was awesome... thanx neetu
oh my that drink... 😆 yuck im feeling nausious here 😆 hahahaha

yaar i want more jai and bani romance...varna acha nahin hoga 😆 lol okie next part paka hoga J&B ka romance
cont soon posting in like 15 minutes hopefully
neetu

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

hey maro!!! 😃 😃 😃 tinku is here...with some comments 😳 ..yes!! u can tell me off ....was feeing really mad at myself that i am reading it...though not commenting .... lol its alright yaar u are commenting now arent you?

well...first things first...this happens to to one of the ff's i am getting addicted too 😳 ....i and guess the main reason is that u have a superb way of writing 👏 👏 👏 thanx...and the idea u are using is deffo new 😉 ...i and i am luv the way u have portrayed jai jaanu and bani rani 😛 ..... glad its something new and you like it!

so then...jai wants the break of the engagement 😆 ...who is he kidding...ur not gonna let him do that 😉 😉 😉 hmmm am i? i dunt know 😕 lol.....hes gonna be latto over her 😳 😳 😳 ...well before that.....bani seemed soo innocent 😃 😃 ....untaill that basketball match ......haila!!i know lol she shocked me aswell 😲 i think she shocked everyone 😲 😆 😆 ......"revenge is sweet" 😃 😃 hehehe....could soo imagine the look on jai's face 😆 hmmmm yepp .....hehehe

hey!! before i forget...when she came into his room 😳 😳 😳 ...and he was well...shirtless 😳 😳 😳 ....i though i was gonna blush to death lmao😆 ....that was a brilliant idea 👏 ...thanx for not sending in tony!!!
hahaha no problem 🤣 .....hehehe.....
she was soo shy around him 😳 😳 😳 ....hehehe.......i think he might be in for a shock 😆 😆 ........ hmmmmm maybe

the engagement day was smashing 😃 😃 ...luved the dance 😳 😳 😳 ....haiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!...jaiiiiiiiiiiiii!!! 😆 ...i liked the way tarun was bugging her yeah tarun likes buggin people lol 😉 😉 😉 ....hehehe.....she does seem to know loads of things about him now 😛 😛 😛 ...... yepp

the fram house idea is great 👏 ....liked the way...them too...can spend some time together 😳 😳 ...maybe that will change jai's mind 😆 😆 😆 .....hehe... yeah maybe who knowz lol

yaar maro i luv the other caharcters u have used as well...sahil is just jokes 😆 😆 😆
i know too much 😆...kud hi sab kuch kar liya 😆 .....hehehe...and rano and him make a great couple yepp....tarun and laxmi...are cute aswell 😳 😳 😳 ...our sanyasi...well he will always be great 😆 ...with his jogan...hehehe haha yeah true

....the scary story part was great 😆 ...liked the way jai was being soo gentle with bani rani 😳 ....lucky or wht 😉 ....hehe..... i know talk about bani's luck


cant wait for the next part yaar....wonder how sahil is dioing after that drink 😆 lmao you will see ...oh and maasi has ordered them to spend tiome with each 😃 yepp...yaar...she is the best 😆 .... i know eh 😛

keep up the gud work yaar 👏 👏 👏 ...luving this ff 😃 😃 😃 ....great stuff 😉 😉 😉 thanx tinks for ur lovely comments

luv
tinku 🤗

p.s can u just confirm 😃 😃 ....did i read that jai was doing pull ups 😳 😳 😳 ....~*~*~faints~*~*~* 😆
yeah he was doin pull-ups lmao dont seriously faint now 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: :::pooja:::

hahaha jai doing 71 pull ups.... yepp 😃
i can just picture it 😆 😆 😆 lol me 2
man and poor sahil.... hahahaha
i feel bad that he had to drink such a yucky drink.... 🤢 🤢 🤢 yeah me 2 but it was what he deserved 😆
great part, hope you continue soon.... will post like in 5 minutes 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 11

Tarun, Jai and Ranveer quickly exited the room hearing Masi's voice nearby, they didn't want to hear another lecture. Jai was all sweaty and he felt like taking a nice long shower. After taking a shower he made some phone calls regarding business. Masi came to see Jai sitting on the bed, looking through his cell phone. "Jai what are you doing?" she asked curiously. "Nothing was just making some calls to see if there was any problems in the business," he said not looking up from his cell phone. "No business talk when you we are on a vacation," Masi said. "It's not business talk just a check up on how things are in Walia industries," Jai looked up this time to Masi.

Masi crossed her arms indicating she was upset. "Alright, look no more business," Jai said putting his phone away. "What are the plans today?" Jai asked as he got up. "Tarun and Laxmi have gone to the mall. Ranveer and Rashi went for a walk. Sahil and Rano went to the movies and I think you and Bani should also make some plans too," she said. "Well what are you guys doing?" Jai asked. "Nishikant, Kiran, Aditya, Jigyasa and I are going a party." she answered. "Party?" he questioned. "Yeah, one of Aditya's friends parties." she said.

"Oh, so you mean one of those boring parties?" he chuckled. "Jaii," Masi warned. "You have fun and I will go ask Bani if she wants to go anywhere," he said proceeding to go to her room. "Good, poor girl is probably bored doing nothing," Masi smirked. Jai nodded and went to her room, knocking lightly on the door. "Come in," he heard her sweet pleasant voice and he walked in to see her on the bed reading a book. She looked really pretty wearing a blue shirt that showed some of her stomach especially now that she was sitting. She was wearing faded jeans that hugged her curves. "Sorry to interrupt," Jai said walking towards her. She put the book down, "No it's alright." "I was thinking since everyone is out than maybe you and I could go somewhere," he said nervously putting his hands in his pocket. "Sure, where would you like to go," she said smiling.

"Well there is this waterfall near the farmhouse. It's a great sight you get a close view sitting near the evergreen trees and forest as you see the water coming down hitting the huge rocks below. It's not that big neither that small but perfect. The water isn't that deep, it's very shallow about knee length so it's not dangerous at all," he smiled leaning against the wall. "Wow sounds very enchanting," she said dreamily. "It is, wait till you see it. I will be waiting for you outside," he walked out. Couple minutes later Bani came out. "Bani it's windy you should have wore a sweater," he frowned to see her in a tight thin-material shirt. "Don't worry I am not cold," she said starting to walk. "Alright what ever you say," he shrugged his shoulders catching up to her. "So Bani you never told me what you studied in University," Jai began the conversation. "I took a designing course so I am a designer," she replied. "That's nice," he said. "Do you come to the farmhouse often?" she asked. "Once a year or so when ever we have time although with the business it's difficult," he replied looking at her.

"Looks like you put a lot of effort towards the business," Bani said. "Well one needs to put a lot of effort into a business," Jai said confidently. "True, but taking a break once in a while is not a crime," she smiled. Before Jai could respond she changed the subject, "How much more time until we reach there?" "Uhhh, about ten more minutes," Jai said. The weather turned more windy and Jai noticed Bani shiver. "Are you cold," he asked. "Nope," she lied. "Than why are you shivering?" he asked suspiciously. "I am not shivering," Bani said innocently. "You are too," Jai said he unzipped his blue sweater and extending towards her.

"But I'm not cold," she said inconvincibly. He put the sweater over her arms. The sweater was long and baggy but very soft and warm. "Thanks," she smiled. "So now you admit you were cold?" he smirked. "Ummm," she mumbled. "I take that as a yes," he looked at her and they both laughed. "You are not cold though are you?" she asked concerned. "No the material of my shirt is not that thin," he replied. They reached the waterfall finally and sat on the glistening, evergreen grass that gave a view of the waterfall directly in front of them. It was just as Jai had described but looked more beautiful in person. "How do you like it," Jai asked looking over at Bani who was sitting beside him. "It's perfect," Bani smiled with excitement. Jai was happy Bani enjoyed the atmosphere as much as he did.

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Tarun looked at Laxmi who was trying on her fifth sari coming in and out of the change room. Constantly asking him how she looked. He was holding three bags in his right hand and four bags in his left hand, it was all Laxmi's clothing. "Tarun how does this look?" Laxmi said displaying him with another sari. "Very hot," Tarun said looking at the ground half asleep. "Tarun! Your not even looking at me!" Laxmi exclaimed. He looked up at the sudden outburst, "I was." Laxmi glared at him as he looked at her innocently. He got and walked towards her, "Come one Laxmi you have dragged me into at least 50 stores and these bags are killing me. Now can we please go home." He came closer to her, "Anyways lets go home and we can relax. Than we could romance a little bit if you know what I mean," he winked at her. "God you think only think about one thing," she marched back in the dressing room. "Well, it's better than shopping," he said as she closed the door in a huff. "Woman," he mumbled under his breath so she couldn't hear him.

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"The weather is so nice today," Ranveer said putting his head on Rashi's lap as she stroked his hair. Rashi leaned against the big oak tree, "It's a bit chilly but better than yesterday's weather." So what do you want our child to be?" Ranveer asked Rashi. "Doesn't matter to me if its either a boy or girl. If it's a girl than it will be cute and adorable. If it's a boy than it will be handsome just like you," she answered kissing his forehead. "Hmm if it's a girl than it will have nice big eyes like yours, if it's a boy it will have a nose like mine and lips but the girl should be just as pretty as her mother," he kissed Rashi's growing stomach than her cheek. "Our lives will change when the child comes right?" Rashi said. "Yeah I can't wait," Ranveer said excitedly.

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Sahil put his arm Rano making himself more comfy as she watched the movie. He saw her laugh as something funny happened in the movie. Personally he thought the movie was boring another one of those chick flicks but Rano loved them so he came for her. He came closer trying to kissing her neck. "Sahil, let me watch the movie ," she said not paying attention to him. "Rano this is the only chance we have to be alone, going back to the farmhouse everyone is there and there is no privacy. One person goes and when you just think you're alone than someone else pops up from no where," he tried to convince her. "Is this the reason why you have brought me to the theatres," she said angrily. "No, but look it's dark there is hardly anyone here and we are sitting at the back. It's just so perfect for us too……," Sahil began to fill something stir up in his stomach. "For us too what?" Rano questioned. "For us too," Sahil tried to continue but he felt as if he was going to be sick again. "Go to the bathroom," Sahil covered his mouth standing up. "What," Rano was puzzled. "I mean I have to go to the bathroom, I think I am going to be si…" he ran off to find a bathroom.

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Jai and Bani were both sitting near the waterfall when two girls passed by looking at Jai. They were about teenagers and it looked as if they were checking Jai out. Jai turned around and gave them a killer smile which made them giggle. Jai then turned around to see Bani looking at him than the girls in a jealous way. "Here wear your sweater, I'm not cold anymore," she said. "What are you talking about it's more chilly here than before," he said knowing she was doing this because of the girls. "Well I'm not cold," she took of the sweater and put it on the grass. "Bani, don't be stubborn just wear it, I know you're cold," he said. "No," she said blankly turning her head. "Fine," Jai was stubborn too letting the sweater on the grass not wearing it. He saw Bani shiver and after a couple of minutes he couldn't take it anymore. He took the sweater and he put it around him and Bani. They were so close as if Jai was hugging her with the big sweater around both of them. Bani was surprised at his action but now any girls passing by would now he was taken. "Now we are both warm," Jai smiled.

"You know Bani you are pretty stubborn," Jai laughed "I am not," she turned around to glare at him. "You are too," he came closer to her. "No…," she barely whispered since they were both so close to each other. They both got lost in each others eyes and Jai went forward brushing his lips against hers. Bani parted her lips further making him deepen the kiss. What was gentle turned out to be passionate. They both got lost once more tasting the sweetness of each other's mouths. Jai's hands rubbed her back as her hands went around his neck. "Ringggg, ringgggg," Jai's cell phone rang. They snapped out of the kiss as Jai's shaky hand reached for his cell phone. He got up taking the call. Minutes later he ended the phone call looking at Bani who was sitting down snuggling the sweater. "Business call," he said, "It's getting dark we should go now." Bani got up and extended the sweater towards him. "I don't think we should start this again," Jai laughed as Bani blushed and wore it. They started walking towards the farmhouse their fingers entwined and before they knew it they were holding hands.

Hey, thank you guys for the awesome comments. I really appreciate you guys taking time to write them and they really do encouarge me to write more. Since I got an overwhelming response I thought I would update early. I hope you guys like it because I tried. Comments, feedback are more than welcome,

Maro 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
yupeee first one anyway gr8 part i wonder when is bani gonna find the video cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awww, that was so cute! 😳 They finally kissed! 😳 😳 😳 And i totally agree with Jai, Bani is stubborn! 😆 Raashi and Ranveer scene was also very cute! 😳 Tarun and Lakshmi! 😆 Saahil had me laughing! He's so desperate! 😆 😆 😆

Totally loved this part, Maro!!! Really looking foward to the next part! 😃 😳 Please update soon!

Lots of Love,

Goddess
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think jai has fallen for bani!!!!!!! 😳

the sweater scene was soooooooooo 😉

it was an unexpected twist, but it was FABULOUS!!!!!!!!👏
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PLEASE CONT SOON!!
thanks
sunju 😛

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