FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 9

Originally posted by: Cordelia

see, i told you there was an advantage to coming late - i got to read 2 parts in one go again!! 😃 😆
welcome back Cordy!

and both of these parts confirmed one thing - dikha di na apni true fitrat... MS DICKENS!!! 😛 😆 my dear you could give your namesake a run for his money!!! the descriptions, forget the characters and content, just the description was mindblowing!!! it was almost as if this Saraswati was painting a picture for us through yuor words, enabling us to see exactly where JW was, what he was seeing, what he was doing!!! 👏

thank you dear Ms. Brown. Your compliments always make me blush but that, i have learned by now, does not deter you!so i'll just settle for saying thank you!

earlier you have already confirmed that I guessed the JB secret correctly - i think I have guessed the J-R secret too!! 😛
my dear Cordy, we shall see.

i know everyone wants Roshni to get lost, but I actually want her to stay a little... remember what her presence led to in KS right...? 😳 😉 😆

oh, and JW's line "elementary my dear Watson" 🤣 i can just imagine his drunken arrogance and Bani's calm patience!!
I had a fit while writing it and i wasn't even drunk!

now i'm waiting for the inevitable confrontations he is going to have with BOTH women... Jai darling, tu toh gaya kaam se!!! 😈 😉 😆
and that would be 'elemantary, my dear Watson!'😆

Originally posted by: joa123

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Originally posted by: Garf

Hi Armana,

Just read all the parts I had missed till now...and it was absolutely great...I can't imagine Bani literally kidnapping him and taking him away...Loved the way you synchronized the intricate details of the paintings with the decor of the house...that was really amazing...can't wait to read further...please update soon...btw the whole description just brings out the character and gives it a real feeling to the whole story...it's definitely not a waste....in fact I believe it's pretty symbolic...

Garf

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Thats why I told you guys, let her write for eternity ... 😊

thanks for your vote of confidence and support sangs, much appreciated!

And anyone extending any of their hand towards any part of this FF will be disqualified from the Forum, starting with a rise in the warning level.

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Ok sangs, it's official: You are my favouritest Mod!

Originally posted by: Cordelia

sorry sangs, Dan Brown has special permission to bully Ms Dickens into updating faster etc, and she ain't ever gonna tell on me, so 😛 😆

yes well that is true, because cordy allows me to bug her for updates too!
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Originally posted by: india06

That was a delicious aura of mystique that u have built up there.

This painstakingly orchestrated section most certainly intrigued the senses and left one hankering for more.

Thanks for this well crafted read.

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Thanks dear, but I think that House is much more appealing. 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Sorry to be bothering you. But when are you updating?

NOW I guess. 😃

Originally posted by: armana

not a bother at all.
Am updating in 5 minutes.