FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 11

Armana...as usual a very good job... 👏

Detailing Jai and Roshni's past definitely helps understand his character better...

And he remembers his angle....but why cant he recognize her....well time aane pe woh bhi ho jayega...

He called her what??? dear? thats interesting...cant wait for the next part now....

And he is investigating details about this woman....that is cool...i hope he realises things soon...
Rivs

Hi Armana

just loved ur ff!!, i am one of ur silent reader but after read ur comments at the end of last part could nt help but to u write yar............

i just love ur way of writing ff with so much details and the last sentence was amazing h jai said h was ur day dear?? can't wait to see bani reaction........

pls do contin soon

hima

and when this punishment will be rewarded.............
as i was a silent reader who never had missed writing to you..............................
your torture is enough to rise my low blood pressure...
how ever i was looking for jb confrontation. the part vii was giving the details of your jw (not daring to say mine) once again the details how he was comfortable in her house.

now please tell me when will we get the jb confrontation.

please continue dear (otherwise i have to take some medication for my BP)

pooja

Excellent ff part, love the way the characters from KS are given different storyline. Wish KS and all the Indian serial were half as good. Sick of backstabbing parents, brothers, sisters etc and two wives syndrome. Waiting for the next part.

A clear departure from the earlier section!!!!

Must confess relished the "present" more......JW ensconced in the patrician environs,nursing a vodka& tonic with Chopin pervading thru the stillness and the prospect of the inevasible confrontation b/w JW & B.

Poinsettia,JW & R made quite a peculiar trio but charming it sure was.

Thanks

aaa. cliffhanger.. nooo. wonderful part 👏 👏 👏

ok but u have ti promise that will deff have JB in the next part.. preetttyyy please.

ok thank God roshni is no longer part of his life.. yay..

don't keep us w8ing tooo long for the JB part 😃 😆

i alrady read this 15 times and still stuck on this line

As if sensing her presence he suddenly turned his head. And seeing her standing at the threshold, put his papers down, leaned back and asked with ominous sweetness, "and how was your day, dear?"

pooja

Armana, you and Cords are so alike - pure evil!!

Why did you have to stop there?😭.....Gosh, I was waiting so much for a JB part!!😳........though I know you won't let us down, you like to make us beg!!😆

Okay, down on my knees with my hands folded:

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............pwetty pwetty please with a cherry on top!!😳

How can you say no to that face hun?😆

Urm, okie, let me go back to my comments😕:

It was sad to hear about Jai's past!!......let's hope that the kid was Varun's!!😕........Poor baby, already has so much to deal with.......doesn't need Cobra throwing herself at him!!..........But, like Cordy, don't mind her if we can get something similar to 19/06!😳

Hmm.........finding out everything about Bani - kuch to gharbar hai!😉

Overall, a wonderful part as usual👏 - and the last line had me in splits!!🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: nibbles

Armana, you and Cords are so alike - pure evil!!

Why did you have to stop there?😭.....Gosh, I was waiting so much for a JB part!!😳........though I know you won't let us down, you like to make us beg!!😆

Okay, down on my knees with my hands folded:

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............pwetty pwetty please with a cherry on top!!😳

How can you say no to that face hun?😆

Urm, okie, let me go back to my comments😕:

It was sad to hear about Jai's past!!......let's hope that the kid was Varun's!!😕........Poor baby, already has so much to deal with.......doesn't need Cobra throwing herself at him!!..........But, like Cordy, don't mind her if we can get something similar to 19/06!😳

Hmm.........finding out everything about Bani - kuch to gharbar hai!😉

Overall, a wonderful part as usual👏 - and the last line had me in splits!!🤣🤣🤣

oh trust me i am still stuck their since morning...................

talking about evil you should include yourself haven't updated in ages.

Armana we are beggging you please.......................

pooja

P.S. Nibbles this is for you too please continue)

Oh my! I just started reading the story and I must say I'm stunned. Your writing is so beautiful, no less than any in published novel. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! 😊