FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 7

Originally posted by: pooja1_76

i read it once
twice
three times
four
five
reading again
just trying to digest how you can bring the entire house with interiors in front of my eyes so beutifully. that neem pad.
those two gardners
paiting on wall behind the head board

half lit candle....................
amezing......................
well let me go back and read it again
pooja

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Armana, Great part!! Loved the garden, house, paintings..It was almost like I was seeing it...You are an awesome writer! :-)

I am dying to know what's the story behind the memories that are having a hard time coming out for JW....

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Originally posted by: nibbles

Okie Armana, will not throw anything at you as long as you promise to keep providing us with such updates, and ofcourse a JB confrontation soon!😉
that's a relief to know!

I loved the silent comfort between JB which caused him to go back to sleep almost immediately after placing his arm around her.......maybe I'm reading it all wrong and it was actually fatigue which caused him to do that, though I found it sweet all the same!
nope, you are not reading it wrong. over imbibing alcohol does not cause fatigue. i can vouch for that!!!

The description was totally something else!👏
hey thanks!

I'll be honest with you; I didn't understand everything..........but what I did, formed a beautiful picture in my mind!
am really happy to hear that!

You must have had some basis for that house and it's paintings as they are so clearly defined, like you were looking at everything whilst typing it up!
yes i have very definite basis and in my mind i always see what i write....that's what makes writing addictive for me!

I hope Jai's message to Roshni is precise and clear :"Get Lost!"........that would make my day!😆

The JB confrontation is also much awaited!!😳
ok boss, will start working on it!

Originally posted by: armana

Throwing things at the ff writer is not advisable!Scenes have to be set, fillers filled and your expectations tweaked…….

Wanted to throw kisses,hugs and choclates at u,but since u warned against such activities, i am restraining myself.

Love ur decsription of the house and it sound like a dream house.. .

and lady take a bow!!!!the way u built the atmosphere to bring calmness to JW mind,was excellent...

At times i wonder wt comments i shld write,the words u use in ur writtings i always find myself struggling to find suitable words to appreciate them,and no doubt i fail again and again!!

Well much to ur resentment here take this from me muaaaaaaaaaaaaah 😊.

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Thats why I told you guys, let her write for eternity ... 😊

And anyone extending any of their hand towards any part of this FF will be disqualified from the Forum, starting with a rise in the warning level.

😡 😡 😡

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Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Armana,
Part - 6 is amazing, mindblowing especially the descriptions..I don't have word to describe it.......thanks a lot.....your's a great writer no doubt 😃
👏 👏 👏
please update soon........