FF:The Foreign Self. Part V-D to VIII - Page 6

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana,

Words fail me to describe what a beautiful and wonderful writer you really are👏.

Aaaawww.....thank you K😃🤗

Loved the whole Jai confrontation with Roshni 😃and Bani coming to his rescue by remembering where he would really be found. 😉😛😆 Naturally she would know now, wouldn't she with her and him sharing so much.😳😛😆
i loved it too and yeah, Bani would know, right?

Taking him first to the Hotel and then to her house.😉😛😆She made the right decision and loved her for it. 😃Saved him from Roshni thats for sure.😆
the question is was she trying to do it for his sake or hers...😉

Aww...love this Jai and Bani a lot😃. She really is superb and the Gaurdian Angle dialogue, again something to do from the past that they share. When? Oh! when? will you reveal that to us dear.😆
with in the next 3 parts, hopefully!

Aww...so she comes back home and sleeps next to him on the bed.😆

Now I really cant wait to see or more like read Jais reaction early in the morning if he wakes up first. It definitley will be a treat thats for sure.😆

Till your next update dear, and hope this ones fast.😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: simz99

Hey Armana
Whoa…Miss Dixit sure can be very bold and decisive when it comes to staking a claim on her man 😉 Loved how she literally kidnapped the drunken soul and took him home…no wait took him to her bed 😳 😳 Whew…what's gonna happen when he wakes up….mmmm…can't wait to see whether his anger turns into a heated passion that blows then away? 😉
On a separate note…I always wondered about the elementary my dear Watson line as well…I've read all the Holmes books and never found it either! 😆 😆
Waiting eagerly to see what happens next
Cheers
Sims

Originally posted by: sangitadas

You said it Simi. I never found it in any of the Sherlock Holmes' book either.

And yes, Bani does know a way to stake claim on her man and she is doing it in style over here.

Wow, I love her too but THIS JW is MINE. 😳

Originally posted by: hanaane

Is that a threath Sangi?... cause I'm in if thats the case.... 😳

My baby is different and just like I wanted her to be... 😉

Armaana I dont have enough words for you... for now....but will come up with my full comment update another time... 👏 👏 👏

Till than pleaz do caryy on ASAP...

Jojo

Originally posted by: aashnaa5

Why the same bed Armana. There's always the couch for the prude. I've been a silent reader if ur FF and needless to say, I love it. Had to break my silence cause I couldn't fathom her intentions clearly. Her actions are wide open to interpretations. Can't pass any judgments on ur Bani, without knowing her (dark?) past.

Not much of a chat person. Always look forward to your updates. I like your work.

Aashu

hi Aashu,

"This is also a little more mature. I hesitate to use the word adult since I do not write explicitly in any case, but it's, shall we say, much darker. So all those who like morality please don't be offended. Consider yourself fore warned and don't read it."
i did write that at the beginning of the ff!
there is always the couch indeed, but unfortunately i am not a prude and neither is this Bani. who is also 28 yrs old here, well over the age of consent!
Hope you like her nonetheless!😊
as for her actions, well i hope they'll become clearer in successive parts.
thank you for breaking your silence and dropping in, always a pleasure, believe me😊
thanks
armana

Originally posted by: pooja1_76

i borrowing this entire comments and adding few of mine.

I love how Bani is bold and took charge of the situation.

some how i have feeling that Bani Knows Jai from before.......

Please continue soon.

(Sham, Daam, Dand, Bhed (any which way it works))Please update soon

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Originally posted by: piccola

Excellent Armana! You write to give satisfaction and then leave us with a teaser...!

well, perhaps i like Mick Jagger crooning "no satisfaction" when i write?😛

Love the flow of the writing....👏
thank you😊

Enthralled Pic.

obliged and delighted armana.

Originally posted by: punjabankuri

Excellent parts and wow all the details in the 2nd part are just amazing, I am so addicted to you ff's, they are just simply superb.

Thank you

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

EXCELLENT PART 👏

u wrte so brilliantly.. it's amazing.

thank you bugs, 😊

i iloved the way you described bani's house... i wanna live there!!! 😆 😆
sorry, already taken. By me!

AND 🥳 🥳 🥳 bugs bunny pictures 😛 he's my fav hence the id!
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yeah, i remembered your id when i was writing it! of course there is just a little more to it.....

looking forward to the confrontation. and roshni 😡 .. continue soon.. 😊
will do boss!

Originally posted by: amiee

hey armana just read the part6 wonderful the way u explained the house the settings the painting it makes it so lively for a moment i thought i was right in that house in those surroundings my mom said this to me once when i was writing a story for my essay competition that a good writer will make a story out of a mere idea but the best writer will explain the idea and make classic story out of it thats all it took for me to win the competition a story written from the depth of my heart and you are doing the same thing writing from your heart which makes us reader glued to reading it and wanting more i hope i did not bore you with my speech